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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan



Soch Lo..😈 I wnt get tired with Spamming & Making posts😉😆🤣
Me 😆& Dadiji & My Niyu Mamma & My Ishimaa(ur pyaari shishya) r my trump cards😈🤣🤣



Aap mujhe dhamki de rahi hai 😆

Try ur best 😆
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Aap mujhe dhamki de rahi hai 😆

Try ur best 😆



Kya??😲 Kya???😲 Kya??😲
Dhamki???😲 Vo kya hotha hai Sissy???😆🤣
Main toh phool (hindi wala) si bachi hu😳

PS: Waise main Unres nahi karne wali yeh hai aapke liye mera MM😉😆🤣
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Natzz Sissy🤗 Unres ed on pg 38😆🤣
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res😉 wl unres not so soon
😆🤣

UNRES NO: 48😆(FIRST UNRES of TODAY😉😆🤣 HFD Sissyyy🤗)

Natzz Sissyyy🤗
Saru aa gayiii😈🤣 As I promised I m unresng this week itself😆🤣🤣

B4 Commenting abt UPDATE Lemme Complain😈😆🤣 Pls Change The Pg no in UR TITLE frm 29 to 35😡😆🤣 Its misleading the readers...🤣 Main Ghoom gayi thi😆🤣 Was suppoed to read Part 7 & title ke chakkar mein Main aa gayi PART 6 par.. Thanks To ur SS's INDEXJisne mujhe raastha dikhaya🤣 So Change it SYS😆🤣🤣


Ab Coming to the update... I must Say I LOVED this update Moreee😳😆🤣 U knw Y bcz It was filled with K ness of KABIRA on FULL FORM🤣

He repaid the dedds to both Nishu & Raju ... woh bhi sood samedh 👏👏👏 I was ROFL ng frm start to end...😆 like this.. I m quoating my fav below..😉 aftr ROFL ng😆

🤣

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"<font color="#660099">Uncle we are going to
get married soon and I wanted to gift her, a saree so she brought me to your
shop."</font></font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">Kabir put his hand on her arm and pulled her
closed.

</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">Kabir enjoyed placing one saree after another on Nisha's
shoulder like a typical husband and annoying Nisha and Raju in the process. He
had made Raju empty almost the entire top and middle rack of sarees facing
them. "Raju why do you look so tired? You looked so enthusiastic to sell a
saree to me sometime back. I am so sorry, I am so choosy" Kabir smirked at
Raju.
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">"Oh right! Thank you for
telling me Nisha. Now I know your favourite colour." He chuckled at her
expression. Kabir quickly picked the best maroon saree and asked Raju to pack
it. "Thank you Raju if you hadn't brought me into the shop how would I have
bought such a beautiful saree for your Nishu Di" He winked at Raju and walked
towards Mr. Mehta. "Thank you uncle this is really a very beautiful saree. It
was nice meeting you please do come for our wedding"

</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">"Nisha beta you have made
the right choice Kabir is a very good boy." Kabir raised his eyebrows up and
down mocking her after Mr. Mehta's comment.

</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">"What were you doing inside?" she folded her hands
as always when she wanted answers. "Nothing just finishing what you started"
The casualness in Kabir's tone irked her. But she had to give it to him he was
smart, not one to give up easily. "I am hungry can we go and eat something?" Kabir
pressed his stomach and bore an animated look on his face while he spoke. Nisha
stared at Kabir incredulously. She thought if he would not be so irritating she
would give him one for his audacity to just ignore her anger. "Are you still
hungry?" Kabir was bemused at her question. "You chewed my brains for half a
day isn't that enough? I must say you have got a very good appetite." She offered him an explanation. "Oh! Thank
You. Just a wee bit more space in my stomach. So... can we go eat something if
not then I don't mind chewing your brains further."
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">🤣
</font>
Superbly Written...👏👏👏

All I can do was just ROFL ng like this Natz Sissy & Sorry 4 Quoating this much..😳 Sach bolu toh I cant choose frm this.. All r just Tooo gud to select🤣
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">
Kabir
pressed the thumb and index finger of his right hand together and brought it to
his lips he ran them across his lips without touching them in one swift
movement indicating that he has zipped his lips. He then turned his fingers at
the corner of his lips and released his fingers as if he had dropped the key to
his sealed lips somewhere. Nisha had started to think that hunger was
overpowering his ability to think and so he behaved like a lame person. Yet she
raised her right hand and opened her fingers like a Chinese fan and shook them
asking him for an explanation to his mime act.</font>



@Above Violet portion Next Wat I liked was the Description U gave of Kabir's Antics when he talked in sign language..😆 I was reading & Reading to understand wat U try to explain Den I forsaw Wat U want us readers to see...🤣 & Trust Me Sissy It was a very Nice EXPERIENCE...!!!!!!🤣 Thank U😃
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="3">
<font color="#FF0000">"I am supposed to follow you without asking any
question remember? So I sealed my lips and threw the key away." He smirked at
her. Nisha's face had turned a shade of red darker than the beetroot. "If god
would spare me one murder it would have been YOU!" she barked at him.</font></font>


@Red these NiBir Dialogues Just Cracked me...🤣

And Still Kabir had the guts to ask Nishu 4 the Scooty keyss...🤣
Yeh Dakkan ek din zaroor pitegaa Nishu se...🤣

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#FF00CC" size="3">"Mera bhi tikha banana uncle, hameh
bhi tikhi chizeh pasand hai." Kabir said looking at Nisha. </font>

@Pink Waisae Kabira ek baath toh bata iss dialogue se tera kya matlab tha??😉😆🤣

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#3300FF" size="3">Instantly Kabir extended his hand and
wiped her mouth with his thumb.</font>

@Blue Naughty Naughty Mushy Mushy🤣 *ahme *ahem🤣🤣🤣 & His touch's effect on Nishu... Awww...☺️😳
Yeh Kya ho raha hai yeh kya ho raha hai???😉🤣🤣

Waise Bechara Kabira..😳 teeekha khane chala tha Sach main mu jal gaya 🤣

But I loved Nishu's Caring.. Bottle di paani kaa...😳🤣

Sissy Y Do I feel ki Kabir is allergic to Teekha I mean I feel dat Kabir's Sound wl go aftr this teekha khaana & Nishu wl feel bad...🤣 Yeh Mera Veyham hai ya sachi main ho jaaayega yeh ???🤣

Do write More...🤗Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS:
1. Sissy Mujhe na kuch kehna hai.. Pehle I didnt knew Y u chose this tiitle 😆par ab jab dheere dheere stry unfold ho raha hai samj aa raha hai ki Yeh Nishu ka words hai "YES I DO" 4 Kabir's proposal..😉 Am I rt or Am I rt Sissy???🤣

2. Mere dil main dukh hai jab bhi I see New updates 4 this SS.. Dont Misunderstand me Sissy.. Mujhe dukh iss baath pe ho raha hai ki jaise jaise kahani aage badthi hai mujhe yeh darr lag raha hai ki kahi yeh SS khatam na ho jaayee...😭 aur main aapko aur aapki NiBir Stories ko miss na karu...😭 I wish Yeh SS kabhi na khatam ho *TOUCH WOOD*😳






First of all happy frienship day choti sis 🤗

Tum ss main bhatak gayi iske liye sorry. Index bhi lekhs ke kehne par banaya tha
Kyunki woh bhi bhatak gayi thi 🤣

Thank u for ur lovely comment saru it was worth the wait. Abt PS2: just wait and watch what the title means 😉
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Part VIII

Sabhi log yeh jaan le yeh ek bohot hi lamba update hai jin logon ko lagta hai yeh lamba nahi kripya karke humeh yeh na bataye 🤣

As they reached a certain distance Nisha had to slow down her pace to match upto Kabir. "How far is it?" Kabir looked exhausted. "We are half way through. Do you want to catch up on your breath for a moment?" Nisha sounded concerned. "No! Let's keep walking!" As they neared the gate of the park Nisha stole a glance at Kabir he had not been talking for a while now. She was petrified at what she saw he was sweating profusely and panting like a dog. "Couldn't you just ask for water? Nisha yelled at him. "I finished your bottle. Have I chewed your brains so much that you don't remember? Besides I didn't notice any shop where we could get a bottle of water. The most important thing I am not suppose to ask you anything" Nisha was amazed at the man in front of him. Even in such a situation he was at his best. Nisha was exasperated at his behavior he was in dire need of water yet he kept mum only to keep his promise. His condition worsened with every breath. "You wait here I'll get some water for you"

Within moments Nisha was at Kabir's side with a bottle of water. Before he could let the cool water wash over the dryness in his throat he felt something tucking at his T - shirt he looked down to find a homeless girl asking for the bottle. Without deliberating he handed the bottle of water to her. The little girl grabbed the bottle and left. Nisha could not believe her eyes. She decided against arguing with him right now and rushed to get another bottle of water. By the time she returned she was terrified to see his condition. His face had turned white and it looked as if he would pass out any moment. She opened the bottle of water and splashed little water on his face. She gave him the bottle. He drank the water as if it was some kind of elixir for him. "Kabir are you ok? Kabir! Kabir! talk to me!" Nisha had now started to panic. Kabir did not respond to her cry. "Nisha will you just stop overreacting I am fine!" he whispered after few minutes. Nisha heaved a sigh of relief after Kabir spoke. "Let's sit somewhere" Kabir suggested.

They made their way to the nearest bench. Nisha was breathing heavily now. She had started to blame herself for what Kabir had to face right now. Kabir placed his hand on Nisha's shoulder. "Calm down Nisha! I am fine" Kabir's assurance did soothe her a little. She turned to talk to him. "Kabir are you insane! I give you a bottle of water and you just give it away instead of drinking it. Do you even know that foolish behavior of yours would prove to be harmful for you?" Nisha spoke rapidly but she could not hide the concern in her voice. "Yes I was very well aware of the consequences, but at that moment it was more important to quench the little one's thirst. I am privileged you got me another bottle of water but that girl would not get another one so easily. Her need for that bottle was much more than mine." Nisha was so overwhelmed by Kabir's gesture that she felt she was watching a dream. Is he the same Kabir who got on her nerve's all the time or was this just an illusion she wondered. His words made another round of guilt wash over her."I am sorry! I shouldn't have made you eat that pani puri" "It was not your fault. I cannot tolerate heat" Kabir tried to free her from the guilt. "Then why didn't you tell me so. We wouldn't have walked so much" Kabir opened his mouth to explain but he was cut short by Nisha. "Wait a minute you say you can't tolerate the heat yet you asked papa to cancel the car booking and agreed to move out on the scooter in such scorching heat." Kabir knew his bluff had been caught. Kabir bit his lower lip like he always did when he was forced to speak the truth.

"Actually Nisha I was heading to your room in the morning after my conversation with Suketu. I heard some voices come from the nearby room and decided to check who it was. Turns out, it was you two arguing over the car booking. I sincerely did not want Ramesh Unlce to bear any heavy expenses because of me. But I also knew the kind of person he is, he would never agree if I directly told him so. So I decided to go out on the scooter. Nisha stiffened at the revelation of the truth. All this while she was so engulfed in planning ways to send Kabir running from his life, that she failed to stop and notice the kind of person he was. Nisha didn't utter a word. They sat in silence for a long time. All this while Nisha kept asking herself why would he want to get married to her when all she did was misbehave with him. If he was so thoughtful and understanding for her father's situation why did he not refuse to get married to her when she had clearly asked him to do so. So lost was she in her thoughts that she didn't realize that Kabir had been staring at her since long. She turned to look at Kabir. "What?" she enquired. "Just trying to figure out what made you think so deeply." "Nothing" she tried to bluff. "Let's go home. You need rest" "Nisha I was just faint because of the heat it was not a heart attack!" Nisha grimaced at his choice of words. "Is that how you generally assure people that your fine" Nisha meant it as a jibe more than a question. She stood up. "I'll go get the scooter you wait at the gate" She felt Kabir's hand grip her wrist. Nisha felt her knees buckle beneath her. She needed some excuse to not turn around and face him but she knew none would come to her, not now atleast. She slowly turned around and faced him. He waited patiently for her to face him. "I'd love to walk with you" he said with authority. She nodded as if Kabir had chanted some magic spell. While she walked with him there was an awkward silence between them. Though they had walked in silence sometime back when they were headed for the park this time around the silence was making Nisha anxious. She had still not got over Kabir's touch. The same question why Kabir would want to marry her kept recurring in her mind. She finally decided to break the turmoil and confront him with her question. "Can I ask you something?" she spoke suddenly. "Ask me anything" Kabir's voice was soothing she felt herself calm down immediately. She had to ask herself another question. Was Kabir really having such an effect on her or was she just thinking too much. She jumped at the sudden ringing of her phone. She reached for the phone which somehow refused to come out of her pocket. She fumbled for a few seconds and finally managed to get it out.

"Yes Dolly Di" she said as soon as she received the phone. "What happened you sound lost" Dolly sounded concerned for her little sister. "Dolly Di please don't sound like a detective. I am fine. Why did you call? Did you want something?" Nisha tried to change the topic. "Oh yes I wanted a box of fabric colours. It's very urgent I need it today itself, I won't be able to deliver the order of Duppatas day after tomorrow if I don't start the design today." Dolly spoke getting hyper after every word. "Dolly di calm down! The shop closes down early today is a Sunday and it will be very crowded. You know it's a task to get anything from that shop on a Sunday specially when it's time to close the shop, yet I will try my best.""Ok" Dolly murmered. Nisha hung up the call, dropped the phone back into her pocket and looked at Kabir. "We will have to go get fabric colours first. Dolly Di needs them urgently." Kabir shrugged and sat after Nisha on the scooter.

Edited by picadally - 10 years ago
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res😉 me first 4 the first time😲🤣

UNRES NO:52😆 (FIRST UNRES after Becuming GOLDIE...🥳😆🤣 Sorry Natz Sissy Kal tak ka wait nahi kar paayi Main 😆 Was So Excited ki I came to read & UNRES😆🤣🤣🤣)

Waise ek dbt poochu?? aap yeh baar baar "LONG UPDATE" "LONG UPDATE" kya laga rakha hai??😲🤣 aapke OXFORD DIC main LONG ka meaning sahi likha hai nah???😲🤣🤣 If U cal THIS as LONG UPDATE den LONG UPDATE ko kya kahengi?? "MAHABHARAT" 🤔🤣🤣🤣

Aap bhi kya Lekhs sissy ki path follow kar rahi ho ?? 😡😆 Heavy heavy English words iss nacheese ko samja main nahi aathi..😆 I m not Anpad gawaar like gopi bahu 🤢 🤣 Kuch English words samaj ne ke liye I need GC 😆 Saru Loves HINDI nah😉😆🤣 Lekhs ke FF main bhi aisa hi hua tha mere saaath😆🤣🤣
Mujhe GC do baar dekhna padha..😡🤣 for the meaning of the words "Elixir" & "Jibe"😆🤣

Saru Focus(Monologue) har baar I have to rem myself abt this whenevr I comment on ur SS😆🤣

Abt the Update.. Superb.. Superb.. Superb...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved it Natz Sissy...👍🏼 Juss Loved It.. I sincerely wish U shud have been in NAUC CV & I wud also like to wish If NAUC 2 comes then shud use this story..😉😆🤣 Mazza aayega dekhne main..😆🤣🤣🤣 (Patha hai Season 2 aayega toh jahan khatam hua wahan se shuru hoga🤔 phir bhi hum wish kar sakthe hai nah???😉😆🤣🤣🤣)

Again Saru Focus..(Monologue 2🤣)

"Couldn't you just ask for water? Nisha yelled at him. "I finished your bottle. Have I chewed your brains so much that you don't remember? Besides I didn't notice any shop where we could get a bottle of water. The most important thing I am not suppose to ask you anything" Nisha was amazed at the man in front of him. Even in such a situation he was at his best. Nisha was exasperated at his behavior he was in dire need of water yet he kept mum only to keep his promise.

@RED Just Loved the Kabiraaa Sissyyy... Aree Nishu toh kya even I m amazed ☺️ He is So PERFECT yet with his K panti kash mujhe bhi aisa koi mile.. PERFECT with IMPERFECTION☺️😆🤣🤣🤣

Kabir gave water to that kid...Awww Kitna Cute hai yeh...😳🤣🤣🤣

His face had turned white and it looked as if he would pass out any moment. She opened the bottle of water and splashed little water on his face. She gave him the bottle. He drank the water as if it was some kind of elixir for him. "Kabir are you ok? Kabir! Kabir! talk to me!" Nisha had now started to panic. Kabir did not respond to her cry. "Nisha will you just stop overreacting I am fine!" he whispered after few minutes. Nisha heaved a sigh of relief after Kabir spoke.

@Pink Nishu's Panic & Kabir's K dialogue to dat..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
@Bold PINK GC jay hooo😆🤣🤣🤣🤣

The Explanation he gave when She asked abt giving away bottle.. It again made me Awww...Sissy How many times I have to Awww...???🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 aaj Nishu ko jo jo (Its not JOJO.. its Jo jo.. 😛) hua same happened with Me with Kabir's Behaviour...😆🤣🤣 I was also AMAZED with this Kabira...🤣🤣🤣

@ Violet howw??? How anyone can be so cuteee😳🤣🤣🤣

"Yes I was very well aware of the consequences, but at that moment it was more important to quench the little one's thirst. I am privileged you got me another bottle of water but that girl would not get another one so easily. Her need for that bottle was much more than mine."

The truth reveleation was Again an Aww Moment😆🤣🤣🤣 U r Too GUD Kabiraa...

If he was so thoughtful and understanding for her father's situation why did he not refuse to get married to her when she had clearly asked him to do so.

@Pink Bcz He Loves U Daffar.. DAKKAN😆🤣

So lost was she in her thoughts that she didn't realize that Kabir had been staring at her since long. She turned to look at Kabir. "What?" she enquired. "Just trying to figure out what made you think so deeply." "Nothing" she tried to bluff. "Let's go home. You need rest" "Nisha I was just faint because of the heat it was not a heart attack!" Nisha grimaced at his choice of words. "Is that how you generally assure people that your fine" Nisha meant it as a jibe more than a question.
@Blue☺️ Naughty Kabira...😉😆🤣
@Brown.. K kahikaaa🤣🤣🤣
@Green.. Nishu Wifey ke avataar main dheere dheere jaaa rahi hai..😉😆🤣 Kabira's Effect
@Black Thanks to GC again🤣🤣🤣🤣

She stood up. "I'll go get the scooter you wait at the gate" She felt Kabir's hand grip her wrist. Nisha felt her knees buckle beneath her. She needed some excuse to not turn around and face him but she knew none would come to her, not now atleast. She slowly turned around and faced him. He waited patiently for her to face him. "I'd love to walk with you" he said with authority. She nodded as if Kabir had chanted some magic spell.


@RED Kya baath hai Kabirey.. 😉Pehle tune shoulder pakada..😉 phir wrist...😉😆🤣🤣🤣 ab aage KYAAA??????🤪🤣🤣🤣🤣

@Violet😳😳😳

@Blue Ayeee.. hayeee...☺️🤣 Again I was in Awww😳🤣🤣

@Green Awww😉😳🤣

Dolly Diii😡😆 thodi der baad nahi phone kar sakthi thi..😆🤣 Actually Mujhe bhi janna tha Y he said so..😉 Waise I assumed dat May be He Loves Her..😉😆🤣🤣🤣 Waiting 4 dat vo bhi IMPATIENTLY😆🤣🤣🤣

Natzz Sissyy u r an awesome writer👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Hamesha aap late updates dethi ho par jo bhi dethi ho nah bass DIL KO CHU le tha hai... Love U 4 This SS🤗❤️🤗

Thanks 4 PM😳 (Waise I m fast so b4 PM I came 😆par Formality hai toh bol dia🤣)

Do write More & Moree🤗 Q Ki Saru Ki DMMM😳😆🤣🤣🤣


Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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no thnx 4 the lamba update nattu🤣🤗
Kabiraa u rock man...how sweet koi ithna acha kaise ho sakthe hai😆
Nisha ko kuch kuch hone lag gayi😳😉😉 Kabiraa keliye ithna concern😳😳 2 baar water leke aaya...how sweet,,,Kabiraa luv u yaar..he gave that bottle for taht little girl👏👏 Nisha panics 4 Kabir
Kaviraa cant tolerate hear phir bhi scooty pe 😉😉 Kabiraa rockzz Nishu shockzz😆😆
he said the truth 😛👏👏
I'd love to walk with you😳 n that waist pakadna 😳😳😳haaye haaye😉
yeh dolly ko abhi phone karna tha😆 nishu puchne hi wali thi 😆
nw fabric colour mission😆😆
superb update nattu 👏👍🏼
Loved it
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago
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res😉 me first 4 the first time😲🤣



choti sis thoda toh sabar karo title bhi edit nahi karne diya🤣
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Originally posted by: picadally



choti sis thoda toh sabar karo title bhi edit nahi karne diya🤣



Taaki main confuse ho jaavo aur bas main ghoomthi phiru???😉😆🤣🤣 ATHINU VECHA VELLAM avide thanne vechare dr... (Wrote Malayalam🤢🤣)
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Originally posted by: SaruSenan



Taaki main confuse ho jaavo aur bas main ghoomthi phiru???🤣 ATHINU VECHA VELLAM avide thanne vechare dr... (Wrote Malayalam🤢🤣)

saruuu🤣 tu nattu ko malayalam reply kiya😆😆🤣

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