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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwh! Myyy! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE...MADE MY NIGHT! SOOO AWESOMEEE! THANKSSS A TOOON! WILL UPDATE TOMORROW IN SHA ALLAH!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally horror begins..loved the update Nik...
Sorry yaar I had gone for a trip for 4 days...so never got time to read ur SS..!!!!
Will be active in AT today.. . 😉
Eagerly waiting for your next update.. please continue soon.. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeiii! SUCH LOVELY FEEDBACKS...I am in love with you guys! :D THANKSSS A BUUUNCH AGAIN!
Here comes the 3rd chapter of this haunted story!
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CHAPTER 3

So the next day Nisha woke up before Kabir and was relieved that Kabir did not understand she slept grabbing his tee shirt! The day was a bright sunny day! At first they were planning for going out to do sight seeing then they felt that there was enough time to do it the next day also, so today instead of that they could do a picnic at the huge garden behind the Rutpur Royal Palace with large trees and bushes which almost looked like an forest! They talked about it with the caretaker and he brought everything they needed for the picnic...Then they decided to do rest of the work by themselves and gave a day off to the caretaker!...

Aman and Umesh were cooking suddenly Nisha came there and told them she wanted to learn and help them! Umesh and Aman were shocked at first and then teased her by taking the name of Kabir!
Aman: Awwh! So learning cooking for Kabir huh?
Umesh: Yes yes Nishu! Wow!
Nisha: Anything huh? I am just trying to learn because I want to learn *Stammering and blushing*
Umesh and Aman laughed...
Aman: Umm but Nishu cooking is almost done...
Nisha: Not a fact, I will learn whatever is left...
Umesh: Wow sister! But what I was thinking, can you help us on one thing?
Nisha: Yes say...
Umesh: This is the last curry and it is almost done, you just keep stirring it for 5 minutes and then serve it in a bowl kept there with coriander?
Nisha: Surely Umesh bhaiya!
Aman: But what are you upto laddo?
Umesh: Lets go for some romance na?
Aman: Shut up! No, I will teach Nisha cooking now...
Umesh: Uff! You can teach her anytime but we can't romance behind a bush all the time! *winks*
Aman: *Shocked* When did you become so shameless laddo?
Umesh: It is all Kabir's mercy!
Nisha: At least that stupid did something good!
Aman: Nisha?!!! *Surprised*
Nisha: What? Umesh bhaiya take her...
Umesh took Aman away from there though Aman did not want to go but later she went with her laddo!

On the other side Dolly was walking through the flower garden, Saurav came from behind and hugged her...Dolly blushed on this and said...
Dolly: What are you doing Saurav? Someone will see us!
Saurav: So? As if no one knows about us?
Dolly: Leave me na please, love?
Saurav: Nope, that ain't happening! Okay so you are afraid someone will see us na? Wait!
Saurav lifted Dolly in his arms and took her to the terrace! While going Dolly said...
Dolly: Saurav you are crazy!
Saurav: Yeah just for you!
Nisha saw them talking like this and going to the terrace...She smiled unknowingly...She started thinking about her and Kabir as Umesh-Aman and Dolly-Saurav! Just then Kabir came there and saw her cooking...
Kabir: Wow, cooking huh?! Impressive!
Nisha: *Bit Blushing* Thanks!
Kabir: *Acting like he was shocked* Hooouh!? Nisha you are blushing?
Nisha: *Controlling herself* Shut up! You can make up any story you want to happen, right Kabir?
Kabir gave her a myterious smile and left from there and Nisha started thinking what was wrong with her!

Kabir saw Kirti, Jwala, Bunty and Suketu were quarreling! He went there...
Kabir: What is wrong?
Kirti: Jeeju, look this two *pointing at Suketu and Bunty* are saying they will be in one team and me and Jwala in one! *Irritated*
Jwala: Jeeju we don't know how to play cricket much and they are making us more weak in this way! *upset face*
Kabir: Sukku and Bunty why are you guys doing this to my sweet sis-in-laws? Don't worry Sis-in-laws I will be in your team!
Kirti and Jwala became too much happy!
Suketu: What jeeju this is not done!
Bunty: Yeah jeeju!
Kabir: Ow really? So what you guys were doing, was that right?
They played cricket then and Kirti and Jwala's team won! They had so much fun that day...Whole day they were doing non stop fun while eating, playing various games, gossiping! After the evening they were totally tired and due to over eating the whole day they decided to skip the dinner...They sat in the drawing room and planned their next day sight seeing...Then before going for sleeping Dolly and Aman gave everyone a glass of milk! After having it everyone went to their bedroom...!

Nisha and Kabir were in their bedroom...Kabir went to the washroom after Nisha...Nisha leaned herself on the bed and tried to sleep! She closed her eyes but suddenly she started feeling restless! She felt like someone was watching her, she felt someone was there in the room! She opened her eyes but no, there was no one! She sat on the bed and tried to console herself but alas she could not...A weird feeling of being restless and scared haunted her to the core...She did not kow why! Just then Kabir came out of the washroom!
Nisha: Kabir, lets go for a walk outside!
Kabir: Now?!!
Nisha: Yeah, I am feeling really suffocated in the room! Need fresh air!
Kabir: But you we were tired na? I think we should sleep!
Nisha: *Angry* Okay, you sleep I am going...All day when you roam around me then no problem but now I am asking and you have problem!
Kabir: Okay okay calm down! Lets go!

Nisha and Kabir came out of the palace for a walk...The cousins who were thinking how to take Nisha and Kabir out of the house to accomplish their plan were surprised to see them in the front side garden and hid themselves! They were really happy thinking that luck favoured them and NiBir came out all by themselves! Then they started with their plan...
Suketu: Nishu, Kabir jeeju?! You guys here?
Nisha: Sukku?! What are you doing here?
Suketu: Was not feeling sleepy after going to the bed, so thought to come out for a stroll!
Kabir: Not a fact! I am doing here the same thing for Nisha! By the way nice weather now for a walk I must say!
Suketu: Yeah...
While walking back towards the palace Suketu pointed Kabir to look at some tree and started gossiping, Nisha was walking towards the palace, her eyes fall on a room of the 1st floor and she felt like she was all frozen! The light of that room was going on and off but in a slow motion...That could be a normal thing but it was not since no one was staying in that room...Nisha was trembling and then she screamed out loud! Kabir and Suketu ran to her...
Kabir: *Hugging her* What is wrong Nisha??!!!! *Shocked*
Nisha told them the incident and Kabir started almost trembling too after listening what happened!
Suketu: Uff, you people think too much!
Nisha: NOO SUKKU! *angry*
Just then the micro bus of them came and was parked in front of the palace! Umesh and Aman came out of it!
Umesh: What is wrong guys?!! *Surprised*
Suketu: See? What I said...It was nothing but the headlights of the micro bus you have seen Nishu! You are just over thinking!
Aman: But at least tell us what is wrong?
Kabir told them everything and then Umesh, Aman, Suketu three of them did console Nisha and Kabir that there was nothing but the headlights of the car maybe!
Kabir: Yeah, I guess you guys are right! But where have you two been this late at night?
Aman: Haha! Just for a romantic drive in the village! Different experience you know...
Everyone smiled and Nisha was lot better then!
Nisha: Kabir, I think we should go inside and sleep!
Kabir: Hmm, Nisha!
Kabir and Nisha went inside! Just after that the other ones of the gang came out of your hidden places and celebrated their 2nd success!

On the bed Nisha started breaking the pillow wall!
Kabir: Uff! What are your intentions naughty? *teasing*
Nisha: *Irritated face* Shut your mouth and just go to sleep! I am still not feeling really good ...There is something weird here that is why I am doing this!
Kabir: Umm, yeah you are right! *scared face* Lets sleep now *smile*
Nisha smiled too...They leaned down! After a while Kabir asked Nisha if he could held her hand and sleep, nisha smiled and held Kabir's hand!...

TBC...
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Awww... Lovely update Nikhu..
post the next part soon... m actually enjoying it..!!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
awesome update
is there a ghost?
i really wish so🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Awesome update...loved it...actually i was feeling scary while reading, you have write it very well...
Continue soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
#67
awesome update ^_^
aisa laga nauc ka epi dekha ho jaise...
Loved it!!
excited to know sach me ghost h???
i love horror shows tho...
eagerly waiting for next parts...

dekh i commented abhi PM me yaad se :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
nikku🤗mast part darling,,,,all jodis romancing ni shu maing fud crkt match n night walk...small hug breaking pillow walls😉...loved evrythng
waitng 4 the nxt part
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Nice update😊... Romance se bhara hua😳 (agreed dt NiBir didn't romance bt still)... Loved it, nd when Kabira joins a team, dt team has 2 win😃... thnx fr d pm dear... update soon...
Edited by ChocoholicShibu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
lovelu upd8

nisha slept grabbing his tee...uff!!
umesh par kb ka asar pad gaya😆..n nishu's comment on it😆

nisha is full blushing this part☺️ and kb as usual notices everything.

and the end with nibir holding hands...aawww.

up8 soon

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