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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guysss! Really very very sorry for being late but I had some problems...THANKS A TON for all the love...You people are the best always! Here comes the LAST CHAPTER OF THIS SS!
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CHAPTER 4 (LAST CHAPTER)

The next day was a cloudy one...Nisha slowly opened her eyes, she felt a bit dizzy...She looked at the clock and saw it was 12'o clock! She could not believe her eyes...Before she could realise anything she heard a voice, the voice she as always eager to hear those days!
Kabir: Oye, you woke up?
Nisha: Kabir it is too late, where is everyone? Why did not anyone called me? *tries to sit up*
Kabir: What are you upto, keep lying on the bed!*Concerned*
Nisha: Kabir I am feeling so weak!
Kabir: I knew you were duffer but this much?! Never knew!
Nisha, you have high fever...do you even realise?? *loud voice, making her realise*
Nisha: *keeps her hand on her forehead and realised* Oh yeah! But how did this happen? *confused*
Kabir: Maybe viral fever, besides it was so windy last night outside maybe you got cold from there!
Nisha: Mmm, yeah maybe! But where are the others?
Kabir: Others? They have gone for sight seeing...uff Nisha our family, so stubborn! I have convinced them to go with much difficulty!
Nisha was mesmerised by the word 'OUR' when Kabir was talking about her family! She was about to talk, suddenly it started raining heavily outside and they both looked at it...
Kabir: Wow another fun-rainy day for cousins outside! Nisha, you sit here...I will get you breakfast...
Nisha nodded! After a while Kabir came with his and Nisha's breakfast!
Nisha: You did not have breakfast? *surprised*
Kabir: When wifey did not how could hubby? *his as usal bright smile* Don't worry I did not make the food..Aman vabi did, she also made lunch for us before going!
Kabir started feeding her, Nisha was mesmerised again by him! How can someone be so protective and caring?! HOW?! She wondered! Nisha got lost in him, she felt like a song was playing around them!



Jaane kyun har khushi
Ab lage nami thi
Hairaan hoon, dafatan kyun teri kami thi
Piya re, Piya re
Choo liya bin chhuey
Tu hai, bas tu hai
Tu hai, bas tu hai

Kabir fed Nisha her breakfast and ate his one also! He then gave Nisha medicine, Nisha kept looking at him feeling loved! Kabir then went to bring something and came back with a big blanket...Nisha asked him with eyes that what was that blanket for...He winked on this!

Samjha jo maayusi
Ab lage hansi thi
Keh dena tha mujhe
Main keh na saki thi
Piya re, Piya re
Choo liya bin chhuey
Tu hai, bas tu hai
Tu hai, bas tu hai

Kabir whispered in her ears 'Won't we have fun too in the rain?' Nisha looked at him being shocked and Kabir laughed out loud on this! Kabir said, 'Chill idiot, we will sit in this blanket keeping a safety distance from the window and enjoy since you have fever'...Kabir and Nisha had a lot of fun with each other while enjoying the rain...Whenever the thunder roared Kabir grabbed Nisha and took her a little bit away! Nisha was totally lost in him!

Aaja gale se laga le
Aa dooriyon ko mita le
Tarse kyun aur tarsaaye hai
Kyun besharam tu sharmaaye hai
Ye dil huaa hai tera
Piya.. piya re
Chhoo liya bin chhuey
Tu hai, bas tu hai...

NiBir did not realise when the time passed away! Kabir noticed it was almost 4' o clock and still they did not have lunch...He brought lunch and they enjoyed it together! After lunch they were gossiping suddenly Nisha touched his cheeck...Kabir who was blabbering like there was no tomorrow, stopped talking! Nisha slowly placed a little kiss on his cheeck! Kabir looked at her being all surprised and Nisha realised what blunder she did being lost! Before they both could say anything, they heard a huge sound of coughing...They found the gang were back and they were coughing to see them like that!...Nisha rushed to the washroom blushing and Kabir looked down while blushing! All of them gave Kabir a 'hmm nice progress' type look!

At night! Kabir and Nisha was about to go to sleep when Nisha sat up on the bed! She looked tensed! Kabir saw this and he also sat up and asked what was it!
Nisha: Kabir, here every night comes with something scary! I am feeling scared!
Though Kabir himself was a very scared one too but he tried to console his wifey!
Kabir: *cupping her face* Nisha, whatever may happen but I will never let anything happen to you, no matter what!
Nisha: *Hugging kabir* I know Kabir!
Kabir hugged her too! Suddenly Nisha's eyes fall on something and she got scared...There was a black shadow moving behind the curtain slowly, a shadow of a woman who was giving a devilish smile! Nisha could not take it anymore and screamed at the top of her lungs! Kabir was shocked what has happend but more than that NiBir were shocked when the shadow behind the curtain screamed too and fall on the ground! They found Kirti lying on the floor with all the scary make ups! Nisha went to her and Kabir moved the curtain where he found Bunty and Jwala outside the big window! They both ran away from there seeing Kabir and Nisha! Kabir and Nisha took Kirti with them and went to the garden behind Bunty and Jwala! They were again shocked when they found the other ones too in the garden!

Kabir: What was all this guys?
Bunty: Kirti di spoiled all of it! *disgusted face*
Kirti: So what would I do? Nisha screamed so loud that I also got scared! You all knew how much I hated to do this drama!
Nisha: DRAMA?!! What drama?!
Dolly told Nisha and Kabir their whole plan and also told Nisha that Kabir loved her! She said to Kabir, it was high time he should propose her and said sorry too both Nisha and Kabir for this haunted plan...NiBir looked at each other and was not replying the cousins! The cousins thought maybe they were angry on them and started saying sorry together continiously! Nisha and Kabir could not create the suspense anymore and laughed out loud! seeing it, at first the cousins were puzzled but then they understood and started laughing too! Suddenly Kabir lifted Nisha in his arms!
Kabir: Well everyone proposes going on knees so i felt like doing something different! After that late afternoon thing of today I am pretty sure wifey what is your answer but still I am closing my eyes, if you love me give me again a kiss on cheeck or else slap me! I love you! *closed his eyes*
Nisha after a bit gave a slap on his cheeck! Kabir opened his eyes! Cousins and Kabir were shocked totally! Just then Nisha kissed Kabir's both cheecks and said, 'I love you too idiot'...Kabir at first could not believe what just happen and then he started moving Nisha round and round getting mad with too much happiness, realising what she said! The gang clapped loudly on this!

After all this they were gossiping in the garden, Saurav took Dolly the other side for some alone time and everyone teased them! After a while they all heard someone was walking inside the palace dragging something, exactly just like Dolly did the other day! Everone was confused...
Kabir: *scared* What is it gu..guys?
Suketu: Offo! CHILL! I am sure Dolly di is showing Saurav how she did it that day!
Suketu was laughing saying this and everyone also felt relieved and smiled but there smiles were vanished when they saw Dolly and Saurav coming from another side of the palace!
Nisha: Do..Dolly di if you and Saurav are not inside then who...
They all looked at the palace and what they saw was enough to get them a dead feeling! They saw the light of the exact that room of 1st floor were going off and on slowy in the same way!...They needed no more time to understand anything...
Aman: The caretaker does not stay here at night for this *almost sweating*
Dolly: This is why I felt something unusal when we reached the palace first time *trembling*
Suketu: This is why the swing moved all by itself that day *stammering*
Nisha: And for this I felt someone was there in my room too last night *Scared like hell*

Everyone looked at each other breathing heavily as they were totally scared and Kabir screamed 'RUN'
Jwala: Jeeju our luggages?
Kabir: Forget luggage, RUN FOR LIFE!!!! *screaming again*
They ran away with their lives towards their micro bus and started off for Gangwal House leaving an unknown mystery behind at the Rutpur Royal Palace!...


Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
It was very nice ... loved it... 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

🤣 🤣

I'm was so damn getting some weird feels under my tummy and the last part of this chapter cracked me up 😆
But it was so damn realistic ..kaash mere saath aisa hota, I would make friends with that ghost or that spooky thing
Wow yaar !!!
my candy girl ...u r just of of a kind 👏😳😳😳
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Very well written chapter especially the climax 😆 It felt like the scene was being enacted in front of my eyes. Nice blend of sweetness, cuteness and comedy in ur story 👏 😳 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
nice update nikhad👏
thanks 4 the pm n continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
yummy progress 😛
kabir says run n all ran away 🤣
awesome nikhu 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
awww... that was sooo sweet that to id my favourite song... luv u for combining that song wid nibir... I can totally imagine them... hahahah wat an ending I loved it totally
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Awesome!!! 😊 Do write more on NiBir😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heehee! The climax was super funny 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Well written...and loved the way nisha gave kabir cheek kiss .Lovely ending...👏

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