NiBir ff- Add some Life to Love and make it more magical (Complete) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Kabirrsss mom :') UFFF SHE IS SOOO ADORABLE! I TOTALLY LOVE this FF
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kabir 's mom got to understand what this duffer don't understand!!
Anyhow kabir will also understand it soon!! 😆 😆
Nisha ko bhi koi bata do!!! 😉
Nice part
But srsly it was soo much Chotu sa update!!! 😒
Plshhh long one next time 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice 😊 update soon. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
cool update!!!
waiting for the next part...
update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update 😆
So Nisha kissed d bracelet Kabir gifted her 😳
Kabir's mom is cool 😆
Love the way the story is progressing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Continue soon...

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nisha hugging kabir that too infront of viraj😉
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nice part dear
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Short but lovely update!
So Kabir is hiding from his own feelings... Lets see how much time he takes
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi NiBirians😛. Thanks for liking and commenting😊. Chapter 11 is updated ... I hope you will like it.

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Chapter 11

The next day, Sukku announced that he was giving them all a treat to celebrate his win. Happily, all dressed up and went to theater, followed by a restaurant and then mall and finally, to a restaurant on the outskirts of the city, where Sukku had arranged a dinner for them. It was late night when they decided to leave for home. Sukku, Dolly, Sumeet, Kirti and Saurav were in one car, while Umesh and Aman in another as they wanted some privacy. Nisha and Kabir were in one car. All left the restaurant, while Nisha and Kabir went to the parking lot to see that the tires of their car was punctured.

Nisha- (shocked, confused) Kabir, ab hum kya kare?

Kabir- Nisha, it's quite late now... Ek kaam karte hai lets walk for some time, koi taxi yaa auto milega...

Nisha nodded and they started walking. Nisha informed Umesh and Sukku. Sukku told the others about NiBir. Dolly, Kirti and Saurav smirked as their plan was working.

Nisha- (tired) Yaar, aur kitni door chalna padega...

Kabir- (trying to boost her) Kya hua lady Bheem? Energy down huh?

Nisha- (angrily) Can you stop calling me that?

Kabir- (cheekily) no...

She was about to slap him, but it started raining and thundering...

Kabir- Arey yaar, bmb?

Nisha-(confused) Kya?

Kabir- Bin Mausam Barsaat ... Ab?

Nisha shrugged her shoulders, but she didn't mind the rains. Rain was her favorite. She smiled as rain drops fell on her. She didn't know what came over her, but she started twirling and trying to catch the rain drops. Rains were soothing, they healed pain...

Kabir stared at Nisha as she was getting wet. He was standing below a tree and was lost in Nisha... her innocence made him awestricken. He smiled as she smiled when she failed to catch a rain drop.

[If you like, click the link and read as you listen to the song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdjC8e7GFWg ]

*Music*

Nisha- Kabir, chalo naa, Baarish mein bheegte hai...

Kabir- You gone nuts... Kal bimaar pad jaaogi, toh pata chalega...

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko talaashe
Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re
Aankhon se teri kya-kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re
Ik ankahi si daastaan-daastaan
Kehne lagega aaina Subhanallah...

Nisha shook her head, went to him and pulled him. He too was getting wet. She was busy enjoying the rain and he was enjoying her smile. Suddenly she slipped and was about to fall, But Kabir caught her by her waist, cradling her fall and holding her close to his chest in his arms...

Jo ho raha hain pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua, Subhanallah...
Jo ho raha hain pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua,

Nisha stared at him with her eyes open wide. Kabir looked in her brown orbs and felt himself drowning in their depths.

*Music*

Both were lost in each other's eyes, unaware of their surroundings. The rain drops added more beauty to the unsaid words and feelings that their eyes tried to hide, but failed

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (x2)
Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon
Taareef meri hai khaamakha
Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

It started thundering and Nisha flinched which made them aware of their situation and stood properly. Both were thoroughly wet, and were enjoying each other's company. But an unknown feeling enveloped Nisha so much, that she hugged him. Kabir caressed her hair and both smiled feeling each other so close.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare
Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re
Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai
Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haay re
Ye do dilon ka waasta-waasta
Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa
Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah
Aisa hua... Subhanallah (x4)

They were so lost in each other that they didn't realise when Viraj's car stopped behind them. Viraj saw them hugging and horned angrily. NiBir broke the hug.

Viraj- (trying to calm himself) Tum dono, itni raat ko... akele, aise road par?

Kabir- Woh, we all had gone to a restaurant on the outskirts, but our car's tires got punctured, so we were searching for a lift.

Viraj- I'll drop you guys...

Kabir- no... (he sneezed)

Nisha- (looking at Kabir scared that he may fall sick because of the rain) Okay...

Nisha sat on the back seat, while Kabir took the front one. Viraj adjusted the rear view mirror in such a way that he could see Nisha's face. Kabir didn't fail to notice this, so re-adjusted the mirror. Viraj angrily changed the gear and started driving.

*after 1 hour*

They reached Gangwal Mansion. NiBir thanked Viraj and walked in the house. Both went to sleep, but they couldn't forget the memories of the evening.

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I chose "Subhanallah" as the song always reminds me of NiBir and their awesome dance. Do like and comment. Next chapter will be updated soon...

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Loved it! Really cute and romantic 😊 thanks for the pm.

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