Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ashsamik

Nice part...update soon will be waiting to read it...😊



thankyou 😊
Posted: 9 years ago



thanx heema 😳
Posted: 9 years ago

When the Truth came in Open

Chapter 21

Kabir came back home...
He was really hurt bcoz nisha hav hidden something really big from him!!
Nisha was still at shop
He was waiting for her to come back
It was evening now...
She came back and found Kabir sitting on sofa with the photo frame of their wedding pic in his hand...
She threw her bag on other sofa and sat beside him
"Kya hua Kabir?kya soch raha hai??"
She asked
Kabir was soo lost that he didn't realized when she came and sat beside him ...
He just looked at her quietly
"ab aise kya dekh raha hai? Kahan Tha subah se? Aj dukaan pr Kyu nahi aya??" she asked casually
"Kyu nisha??Kyu kiya tune mera sath aisa?Kyu chupaya mujhse itna sab kuch?"
Nisha was too shocked to reply!!
She thought k Kabir kya bol raha hai?kahi usey mere past k bare pata to nai chal gya?nai nai aisa nai ho sakta!! Usey kaise pata chalega?jab meine kuch bataya hi nai!! Zarur koi aur baat hogi!! Haan aisa hi hai!!"
She convinced herself
Kabir was observing her expression .. He understood wat she might b thinking
And then said "yahi soch rahi Haina ke Mein kis baare me baat kar raha hoon?kahi mujhe tere past ke uss hadse ke baare me pata toh nahi chal gya?"
Nisha was stunned listening his words...
"k.. K... Konsa past?konsa hadsa Kabir?" she said and got up from sofa
"Tu kya bol raha hai mere kuch samajhme nai aa raha!!"
Saying so turned to leave from there but Kabir holded her hand and stopped her
"aj nahi nisha... Aj tera koi bahana kaam nhi karne wala!! Maa ne mujhe sabkuch bata diya hai!!"
He stood up said
Nisha turned to him shocked
"maa ne?" she asked
"Han"
"nhi.. Wo aisa nhi kar sakti,,, wo nai kar sakti aisa!!" tears form in her eyes and she ran into their bedroom crying...
Kabir followed her
She was sitting on bed crying...
Kabir went to her and sat on floor beside bed .. Took her hands in his and said "nishu look at me... Just look at me once plzz"
Nisha looked at him
"Maa ne mujhe sirf itna hi bataya ke tere past me kuch bahut bura Hua hai!! Bas... Aur kuch nahi!! Aur kaha ke baki ka Tu khud batayegi!! Bol nishu ... Bol... Aakhir aisa kya Hua Tha?? Jo Tujhe itna week kar deta h!! Mujhe Janna hai!! Aur wo Mein jan kar hi rahunga!!"
"Kabir kuch raaz aise hote hain jinke naa khulne me hi sabki bhalayi hoti hai!! Mein tujhe kuch nahi Bata sakti... Plz ja yahan se... Mujhe kuch der akela chhod de plzzz Kabir.."
"nhi... Mein kahi nahi jane wala!! Agar Tu ziddi hai to Mein b ziddi Hu!! Aj to Mein sabkuch jann kar hi rahunga!! "
He sat beside her on bed
"Kabir plzzz" Nisha said turning to him
"kya plzz nisha?? Kya plzz? Tujhe kya lagta hai duniya me sirf tujhe dusro ka dard batne ka haq hai? Jab mujhe meri life itna bada sach malum pada tha mein... I was..." tears flowed from his eyes also "But tu thi... Jisne mujhe sambhala!! Mujhe wapas normal hone me help kari!! Tujhe pata hai meri life ka ye sach sirf tu hi janti hai .. Meine apni mom ko b nai bataya k mujhe sab pata hai!! Jab meine tujhse kuch nai chupaya to tu mere sath aisa kyu kar rahi hai??"
Nisha just looked at him and cried more...
Kabir cupped her face with his hands
"kya mujhe Haq nahi Teri life ka itna bada sach janne ka??ya phir phir Tu mujhe is layak hi nhi samajhti ke mujhse apna dard baate!! " he asked emotionally
nishu holded his hands
"aisi baat nai hai Kabir..."
She put his hands down still holding them
"bahut baar socha ke tujhe sab Bata dun par kabi himmat hi nai Hui!! Har baar yhi soch ke ruk gyi k pata nai Tu kaise react karenga!! Dar gyi Thi Mein kahi tujhe aur Teri friendship ko kho na dun!!" she added looking straight in his eyes
"mujhpr bharosa hai na??"
Nisha nodded in yes
"phir bolde Jo bolna hai... Hamari friendship itni kamzor nahi hai nisha ke koi b sach... Chahe kitna b bura ho... Koi b cheez hamari friendship ko tod nai sakti!! Samjhi Tu..."
He wiped her tears
Nisha looked at him for a while then closed her eyes for a few moments ...
And aftr taking a deep breath she composed herself and told everything to Kabir...
Kabir was stunned at the revelation...
Nisha cried while telling him all this!! Kabir's eyes also turned red... No he didn't cried but was hell angry on those guys who tried to misbehave with his nisha!! He will kill them if get them !!
Kabir looked at nishu...
"how could u nishu??Tu mujhse itna sabkuch kaise chupa sakti hai??"
"Kabir mein ..." before she could reply him .. He pulled her in tight hug
"pagal ... Tune socha b kaise ke Mein ye sach Jan kar tujhse apni friendship tod dunga?? Ulta m proud of u... Tune kitna bravely sab handle kiya!! And wo log inhe to Mein chodunga nai!! Bas ek baar mil jaye i will kill those bus***ds ... Unki himmat kaise Hui meri nishu ko tang karne Ki??" he hugged even more tighter...
Nisha who was confused at this sudden action at first... But then she Also hugged him back tightly ...
Aftr some time they broke apart
"friendship bhale hi na tode but Mein nhi chahti Thi k Tu b dusro Ki tarah mujhpe sympathy dikhaye!!"
Nisha replied wiping her tears
"sympathy??nisha sympathy gairo ko dikhai jati hai apno ko nahi!!! " he cupped her face and continued "Tu meri apni hai!! Tujhe sympathy dikhaunga Mein?tujhe aisa lagta hai?bol?"
Nisha didn't replied just looked in eyes for a while and then looked down
Kabir wasn't angry on her but was upset with her kyunki nisha ko laga k Kabir sach jaan ke uspe daya dikhayega!!
He pulled her chip up with his fingers
"nisha hum jissey pyaar karte hain na unpe kabi taras nai Ata!!! Apno ko sympathy nai dikhate kabi!!! Tu na pagal hai bilkul !! " he smiled sadly
She was in a Lil shock hearing him
"pyaar??"
She said looking straight in his eyes...
Kabir was looking at her lovingly
And was thinking that Jo cheez wo itne Dino se nisha bolne Ki koshish kar raha he said it!! Not directly but in an indirect way!! He hav hinted her a lil... Should he tell her today only or some other day with special preparation?? He was lost in his thoughts...
Nisha was sitting quiet looking in his eyes trying to find the meaning of wat he said!!
"Kabir..." she said aftr a long time...
Hearing which Kabir came out of his trance ...
He closed his eyes for a while and then bend down on his knees on floor holding nisha's hand in his hand
"nisha i don't know ye sahi waqt hai kenahi ye kehne ka!! I don't know ye baat jaan ke Tu kaise react karegi? But i hav to tell u this!! Tera Jo b faisla hoga mujhe manzoor hoga!!"
He said
Nisha was confused wat he is doing!! Wat he wants to say?
Aftr a pause Kabir continued
"nishu yahi wo baat h Jo me pichle 1mahine se tujhse kehne ki koshish kar raha hu par keh hi nai paya!!"
nisha remembered how he always tries to say something but end with some stupids things and jokes!! Firstly she didn't paid attention to it but then she also started feeling that something is there that he want to say but is not able to do it bcoz of some reasons, she even decided to ask him straight but then stopped thinking she should give him time and wen ever feel to tell her he will!! She will wait for it!! And this was also bcoz she herself was hiding something from him... She was lost in her thoughts...
He took her other hand in his hands..
Which broke chain of her thoughts!!
She looked at Kabir..
" nishu pata nai kab pata nai kaise par... Tujhse pyaar hogaya hai yar mujhe!! " said Kabir closing his eyes
Kabir sighed as he finally managed to say it...
Nisha's eyes widened in shock
Kabir opened his eyes to se her reaction
Nisha was just staring at him
"plzz mujhe marna mat!! Meri Galati nahi hai!! Tu hai hi itni pyaari ke koi b din raat tere sath rahe aur tujhse pyaar na kar baithe ye to impossible hai!!"
Nisha was sitting quiet without any expression on her face
"meine to pehle hi kaha Tha Tu itni hot Mein kahi phisal gya to...!!?! Par tune meri suni hi nai!!" he chuckled at his own words
"Ok on a serious note..."
He composed himself and said
"miss nisha gangwal... Oops sorry Mrs nisha Kabir Kumar...
Janta Hun shadi ke pehle hi din humne wo contract banaya Tha! Jiska sabse imp rule Tha 'nisha aur Kabir Ko ekdusre se pyaar karne ka koi Haq nhi hai!!'
Par na chahte hue b ho gya!!
Kab kahan kaise... Mein ye sab nhi janta and mujhe ye sochna b nahi hai!! Only thing i know is
I LOVE YOU NISHA...
I love u..i want to be with u... I want to fight with u...i want get scolded by u... I want to care for u...i want to share my whole life with u...
Kya hum iss 3 mahine ke contract ko lifetime ke liye extend nahi kar sakte??"

Nisha couldn't believe what she just heard...
Nisha never ever thought a guy like Kabir.. The 'big flirt' can feel something like this for her?the 'not so girly' girl nisha...
She was too shocked to even say a word...
She pulled back her hand from his hold and put it on her lap looking everywhere except him

Kabir was confused at her reaction.. He looked at her hand and then her face... He looked at her intently to understand what she might b thinking?
And he Lil bit understood..
He put his hand on her hand
She looked at him ..
Kabir continued looking straight in her eyes..
"nisha ghabra mat!! Koi compulsion thodi hai!! Just bcoz i love u , u don't need to love me back!! Its totally ur decision what u want!! If u don't want to stay in this relationship , i won't ask to be ... And we will do as decided... 3 months complete hote hi Mein apne raaste aur Tu apne raaste... Bcoz mere liye sabse important teri khushi hai!! Tu khush hai to mein b khush hun ... Chahe tere sath rahun ya dur..." he smiled wide saying that!!
she never ever was in such a situation... She didn't know how to react to all this... She was just staring at him... His eyes was saying that he was not lying or joking but telling his true feelings for her...
She didn't know wat she feel for him? Bcoz she never thought abt it!! And all of sudden Kabir is proposing her... Now wat to do... Wat to reply...
But our Kabiraa knows her wifey very well... She didn't said it but he understood that she need time to think...
He got up and sat beside her while saying
"aur haan one more thing... koi jaldi nai hai!! Take ur time.. Araam se soch... Kahi jald bazi me mere jaise hot n handsome pati se hath na dho baithe..."
He laughed at his own words...
Nisha first felt good as he gave her time but his last line again made her frown again...
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To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👍🏼
Loved it ❤️
Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update!
Kabir convincing Nisha to open up to him was nicely written
Glad that he didn't show sympathy after knowing her past. (Wish we could see Kabir's reaction to Nisha's past in the serial too 😔 )
Finally Kabir confessed!
Him giving Nisha time to understand her feelings was nice
And his last line 😆 so typical of Kabir
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update neha 👏
Kabir nai proposed kiya vo bhi k wale style mai 🤣
Abey tune yeh nahi tu 1-2 week ke liye miss india ban rahi hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Finally nishu ne bata diya kabira ko
Kabir ne propose kar diya
Hot and handsome pati se 😆
Thx for pm
Will miss you neha Combe back soon
Edited by Aha121 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
The friendship and understanding between nisha and kabir was nice.
The love confession of kabir was really beautiful.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update nehu😊

Kabir nishu se gussa tha ki nishu ne use nhi btaya uska gussavhone bhi jayaz tha...n nishu ka use nhi btana bhi jayaz tha😊

The way he sat beside her comforted her n ask her showing his support was written superbly...👏
Loved d way he said tu ziddi h to mai bhi ziddi hu😊
Aur jab nishu ne apna past share kia...d way he hugged her was awweed way he said ki tu soch bhi kaise sakti h ki mai hmari disti tod dunga😊

His anger for DAT cruel jerks were portrayed beautiful
Iske sath kabira ne bhi apna dil ka haal bta dia...
Sympathy apni ko nhi dikhai jati jisse him pyaar krte h...

"miss nisha gangwal... Oops sorry Mrs nisha Kabir Kumar...
Janta Hun shadi ke pehle hi din humne wo contract banaya Tha! Jiska sabse imp rule Tha 'nisha aur Kabir Ko ekdusre se pyaar karne ka koi Haq nhi hai!!'
Par na chahte hue b ho gya!!
Kab kahan kaise... Mein ye sab nhi janta and mujhe ye sochna b nahi hai!! Only thing i know is
I LOVE YOU NISHA...
I love u..i want to be with u... I want to fight with u...i want get scolded by u... I want to care for u...i want to share my whole life with u...
Kya hum iss 3 mahine ke contract ko lifetime ke liye extend nahi kar sakte??"


@pink superb proposal 👏

Loved d way he understand ki nisha needs some time...❤️

Jald baazi me kahin hot n handsome pati se hath na dho baithe🤣🤣
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome yaar at last kisine to bola

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