Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786


awww thanx dear...
😳
aj i saw aneri di accepted my frnd req on fb ^_^
aise hi dua do mujhe..
hope aneri di saw my messages i send her on fb or likes my edits on Instagram...
agar aisa hua to kal bhi two two updates u wil get 😉

are surely aneri would see ur msgs n reply too... akhir do do update ka sawal h... 😉 I seriously want she see ur mshs n reply them too
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nibirs never endng nok jhok😉...loved it
loved NIbir n Laxmi conversion...nice part yaar
thnx 4 the pm aur ha nice banner👍🏼
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

are surely aneri would see ur msgs n reply too... akhir do do update ka sawal h... 😉 I seriously want she see ur mshs n reply them too




awww u r such a sweetheart... 🥺
tumhare muh me ghii shakkar...
i hope she sees them...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it. Just read all the chapters.
Going to ask a very dumb question. What does the 'k' and 'j' mean in the sentences"Tu kitna bada 'k' hai na??"
"Aur Tu mere 'k ' se kitni 'J' hai na??"
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice ... well scripted.. continue soon..
thnx fr PM...
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf

Love it. Just read all the chapters.

Going to ask a very dumb question. What does the 'k' and 'j' mean in the sentences"Tu kitna bada 'k' hai na??"
"Aur Tu mere 'k ' se kitni 'J' hai na??"


lolz wat do i reply to u?
k means?? actually its kind a abusive word which i never say... so i find this nibir ka shortfrom so very cute... hav u watched shahid & priyanka's movie in which tht somg was "pehli baar Mohabbat ki hai" the movie name is is actual fulfrom of 'K'
and 'J' means jealous :)
hope u get it!! i qnt describe more :p
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: layaa

very nice ... well scripted.. continue soon..

thnx fr PM...



awww thankyou dear :)
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

Nibirs never endng nok jhok😉...loved it

loved NIbir n Laxmi conversion...nice part yaar
thnx 4 the pm aur ha nice banner👍🏼



THANX AMMU ^_^

yeah the never ending nokjhoks.. 😉
i love it!!! wen i sit to write... mein bas likhti hi chali jati hu 😆
Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii alll ...
i m back with the update...
thanx for all the lovely comments .. love u all :*

so here u go...

When the Truth came in Open



Chapter 10

They reached gangwal house..
Laxmi took a sigh of relief seeing nishu alright!!
In there way to home Nisha was again & again asking Kabir abt interview but he did not replied her..
Nisha wants to talk to Kabir but her cousins(including Dolly,Aman & jwala) came there and started firing questions her ...
Bcoz When Nisha injured her hand .. No one was there so when she came back all surrounding her...
Kabir was left behind!!
Dolly: "Nishu Tera dhyaan kahan rehta hai??aise kaise Apna hand burns kar liya!! Tu bhi na Nishu"
Aman: "haan Nishu dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha na!! Aise thodi hota hai!!"
Jwala: "Nishu bro aap thik to ho na?? Ap.. apka hath kaisa hai??dikhao"
"Guys relax... Main bilkul thik hu abhi!! Kabir mujhe skin specialist ke pas le gaya tha! Doctor uncle bola hai kal tak ekdum thik ho jaungi..."
Jawalu: "wow Nishu bro... skin specialist?? Jiju apka kitna khayaal rakhte hai.."
Aman : "Hmmm itna pyaar Jo karte hamari Nishu se.." Aman hit on nisha's shoulder with her shoulder..
Nisha blushed unknowingly..
"Aisa kuch nai hai.. tum log bhi na!!"
"Par Wo hai kahan??" dolly di asked
"Kabir... Abhi to idhar hi Tha!!" Nisha looked here and there to find him
Laxmi came there told them that he left bcoz of some work..
"Arey .. Aise kaise chala Gaya?? Mujhse mile bina?"
"Oho.. Abhi 5 minute nahi hue bichde hue aur koi kisi ko miss kar raha hai.. dekho!!" Dolly di teased Nishu..
"Kya yar tumlog to mere piche hi pad gaye ho..." Nisha said irritated and left from there to her room..
"Ye Kabir aisa kyu kar raha hai!!! Mere itni bar puchne pr bhi usne kuch jawaab nahi diya!!" Nisha was talking herself in her room with her phone in her hand...
She dialed his number but it was switched off...
"Akhir baat kya hai??ye itna weird Kyu behave kar raha hai??kahin aisa to nahi ke woh...?? Nahi nahi aisa mat soch Nisha... Wo select ho hi Gaya hoga!! Think positive!!! "
She convinced her self...
"Par phir Wo aisa Kyu behave kar raha hai??"
Nisha was too confused...
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Nisha woke up in evening and went the washroom...
She opened her bandage and applied ointment...
Her eyes was waiting to see Kabir but he was no where...
(Aftr calling him so many times in afternoon
She wanna go her home ... To find Kabir but Laxmi didn't allowed her to go alone ..
Then she ate her launch & Laxmi gave her medicines & ordered her to take rest.. And she obeyed her mothers instructions..)
Aftr applying the ointment She was feeling almost fine now!!
She came downstairs without making any sound & tried to escape from there but caught red-handed by her mother...
"Nishu..." Laxmi said from behind..
"Pakdi gayi..." Nisha mumbled
Laxmi came to her and said "Maine kaha Tha na tujhse Tu akele kahin nahi jayegi..!! "
"Par maa... Main ab thik hu!! Isliye ghar jaa rahi hu bas..."
"Nahi nishu!! Jab tak Kabir tujhe lene nahi ata Tu kahin nahi jayegi!!"
Nisha started making faces to convince her mother but she did not listen to her..
" Bas.. Mujhe tujhse koi behas nahi karni iss bare me"
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On other side Kabir reached home..
He as usual call out For Nisha...
"Nisha bahut bhuk lag rahi hai yar... Mera brad butter jam kahan hai??"
No respose he got then he realized that Nisha is not here & yes she was at her house.. At gangwals...
From the time he left Nisha at gangwal house he was at shop working the whole day!! Actually dadaji called him and asked him to come to shop as soon as possible.. So he left without informing Nisha
He then himself made his food (bred butter jam) & ate it!!
Then he went to the window side and was thinking abt Nisha & whatever happened whole day...
A song he heard which was playing in loudspeaker at their neighbors...

Jise zindagi dhundh rahi hai kya ye wo makam mera hai...
Yahan chen bas ruk jau ..
Kyu dil ye mujhe kehta hai jazbaat naye se mile hai jane kya asar ye hua hai...
Ek aas mili phir mujhko jo qubool kisi ne kiya hai...
(He was reminiscing the arguments with Nisha outside the interview hall)
Kisi shayar ki gazal...
Jo de ruh ko sukoon ke pal..
Koi mujhko yuu mila hai JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...
(The smiling face of an angel came in front of his eyes ... Yes his wifey Nisha it was!!!)
Naye mausam ki seher ...
Ya sard me dopehar...
Koi mujhko yuu mila hai JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...

Jaise koi kinara deta ho sahara...
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par...
Koi raat ka tara karta ho ujaala waise hi Roshan kare wo shehar...
(He remembered how Nisha supported him when bua & viraj insulted him & Called him illegitimate...)
Dard mere wo bhula hi gaya kuch aisa asar hua...
Jina mujhe phirse wo sikha raha...
Jaise barish karde tarr..
Ya ho marham zakhm par...
Koi mujhko yuu mila hai JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...
Naye mausam ki seher ...
Ya sard me dopehar...
Koi mujhko yuu mila hai JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...

Muskata ye chehra..
Deta hai jo pehra ...
Jane chupata kya dil ka samandar...
Auro ko to har dum saya deta hai ..
Wo dhoop me hai khada khud magar...
(he thought how Nisha injured herself for him !! The pain she went through only she knows which she hide from him)
Chot lagi hai usey phir kyu mehsus mujhe ho raha hai..
Dil tu bata de kya hai iraada tera??
Main parinda besabar ..
Tha uda jo darbadar..
Koi mujhko yuu mila hai JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...
Naye mausam ki seher ...
Ya sard me dopehar...
Koi mujhko yuu mila hai JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...
JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...
JAISE BANJARE KO GHAR...
He sit on sofa closed his eyes & took a nap...
After some time he thought...
That he was abt to give up his dream for Nisha !! What is he upto?? He felt like all his world ended when Nisha shouted in pain... Why he felt like that?? His heart again telling him he is in lo..
"No Kabir... No no..." he opened his eyes...
He was now understanding it that Nisha is not just a friend for him anymore but he was not ready accept it at any cost ...
So he ignored his inner voice & leave the place and went to pick up Nisha from gangwal house..

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TBC...
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely darling...thank you thank you sooo much.such a cute chapter...
Thanks for the pm buddy...ummmah🤗

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