Niraj FF : Some things are better left unsaid! Pt 12 pg 24 22/04/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nirajfan


Haha.. Soon dear.. By this Sunday.. I can update only on holidays or such leaves.. 😊

waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing!!!!
Loved the update!!!
Please don't stop writing it is very very nice... Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hey you lovely people out there! Thank you sooo much! Love you all..

Here is the next part!

Recap: Nisha Viraj saw the same dream..

Here it goes..

At Virajs penthouse..
That dream.. Did it mean something..? What would have made Nisha become Aarti? What made her turn into Aarti..
Can Nisha do this to me? I knew even before she confessed her feelings for me.. I knew it on her birthday itself! At the lounge I told her that she must be happy seeing me broken just because I rejected your love.. Shit! How can I say this to her.. I'm wrong.. I shouldn't have said this..
I love Aarti who is Nisha.. I love Nisha..
But were those things should have happened the way it happened? Definitely not..! This dream means something..
Nooo..
But did she not get time in 2 months to tell that she was Aarti..
Confused Viraj .. In dilemma whether to trust Nisha or not. Whether to listen to his heart or mind and the things which he could see..
She also said that she didn't knew the guy at the velevt lounge but they were together last night.. At the Asharam.. Was she lying then?
Should I trust her?
But the dream.. Urghhh!
He decided not to think about it anymore.. Lets do something new..
I'm going LA on Monday still 3 days to go back.. Before that.. How should I spend my 3 days..? He thought to himself!
He immediately took his notepad and a pen and started jotting down his schedule for 3 days.. Ill do something I have never done before.. I have to divert my mind..
I have already learnt cooking.. That's out..
Ummm..
Day 1 : I think I should change my Avatar.. Lets go for some shopping..
Day 2 : Book closed.. Uff! Its so difficult to not stay in your scedule.. But for today lets go shopping..

At Gangwals House
Nisha still crying.. When Kabir entered.. Nisha was like .. You still here? Kabir replied : Yes, dadaji said till I don't find some proper place to live and a job I can stay here.. Nisha got mad hearing this.. But she was grateful to him for helping her in her difficult times..
Kabir interrupted her thoughts.. By smiling stupidly seeing her.. Nisha said : What's wrong with you? Why smiling like an idiot?
He said.. What can I do when I'm sitting with a Joker! Look at your face! You look like an idiot and calling me an idiot..
Now get up he screamed! She was like ok ok.. I'm.. Now will you leave Kabir? See you at the dining room for the breakfast.. Bye now leave..
He nodded yes.. And started to leave .. Just then he turned back and said its not easy to hide tears in front to this Kabira!
Nisha didnt know how to react.. He had left by then..
Nisha got ready and went for breakfast..
He came asking were is Papa, Maa? Laxmi replied he has gone Delhi with Dadaji.. There had came an urgent order so he left very early along with Dadaji..
She was happy as her Dad and dadaji were together and everything was fine now..
Maa I'm very hungry.. Laxmi said here is your breakfast have it..
Nisha sat besides Kabir.. To her surprise he didn't notice her.. Kabir looked little upset..
She asked him.. No reply.. He was lost in some thoughts.. She then pinched him.. He came back to his senses.. And gave her an angry look.. Nisha asked what was wrong.. He said nothing.. She gave him a dont-tell-me-that look.. Kabir got scared and said.. How m I gonna find him looking at the photo he had with him of a child dressed in Rajputana outfits.. Nisha said don't worry.. We'll find him.. Idea! She said.. Lets start in here Jaipur.. We'll check for such outfit the child is wearing.. Kabir said you are brilliant! She gave him a proud look.. He started laughing.. He said lets go.. Nisha and Kabir took laxmis permission and left and headed to find out some clues to reach ti that boy..

At Virajs penthouse
Viraj too got ready and left as per his plan..

NIsha and Kabir went on Nishas scooty..
They decided to go to the famous Clothing spree area in Jaipur..
On the way
Kabir : Nisha thank you!
Nisha : Why?
Kabir : For helping me.. nd bearing me..
Nisha : Laughed and said .. Ill accept your thank you for the second one!
Kabir : Now tell me why were you crying ?
Nisha didn't reply..
By then they had reached the place..
Nisha said we are here.. Lets go Kabira!
They enquired about the outfit in many shops.. But no clues..
Kabir was upset ut Nisha said there are still 3 more shops here with Rajputana styled collections..lets go.. Don't loose hopes..
The next shop they went in..
The shopkeeper said .. Yes.. We have such clothes.. And if my memory goes well this outfit has been purchased some 20-22 years back from my shop..
Nisha Kabir were damn happy..
They asked if he could remember who the person was? The shopkeeper said I'll let you people know .. I need some time.. They agreed and gave their contact number..
They were sooo happy.. Nisha said yayy! See I told you to not loose hopes.. Kabir hugged her.. With tear in his eyes.. Nisha felt awkward but allowed him..
She said don't cry kabir please.. We will soon find him.. Its party time.. I want a treat!
Kabir agreed .. They went to a nearby mall.. It was already lunch time by now..
They entered the mall..
Nisha was so happy.. She was chirping something or the other.. They were having fun.. In that fun.. Someone pushed Nisha.. She was a out to fall but Kabir caught her..(sorry not Viraj)
Just then she received a Call from her Mom.. While talking on the phone she collided with somebody.. An was about to fall once again.. But she didnt.. He had caught her immediately..He was Viraj this time.. Nisha Viraj were so close that he almost kissed her forehead while saving her from falling down .. They were lost.. Lost in each others eyes..
(Kabir wasn't there.. He had gone washroom..)

That's it! I know its boring.. Bur bear with me guys..
Do comment and temme hows it and any suggestions for the next part accepted!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was so much fun reading this!!! it was not even a bit boring...
next part me niraj's talk may be...enjoyed a lot...
i cant wait for the next part plz plz jaldi se update karna...
and yes i am the first to comment!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: achirasingh16

it was so much fun reading this!!! it was not even a bit boring...

next part me niraj's talk may be...enjoyed a lot...
i cant wait for the next part plz plz jaldi se update karna...
and yes i am the first to comment!!


Thank youuu Achira.. ya ill try giving some convo between Niraj.. 😊 😳
Edited by nirajfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
It wasn't boring at all!!!
It was soo much fun reading this...
It was just awesome!!!
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nuha09

It wasn't boring at all!!!
It was soo much fun reading this...
It was just awesome!!!
Continue soon!!!


Thank youuu Nuha.. Hope I can call you that! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Fantastic! It ain't boring...I just loved the last bit too much!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Awesome dear..nt at all boring...pls update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
I wont be continuing this OS.. Sorry to those who were early waiting.. But its upsetting to put down 2-3 hours for getting no response..
My OS is not that great! I know! I'm definitely not a good writer .. So its not worthwhile..
No need to get upset people.. There are great writers and awesome fanfictions to read.. Doesn't matter that I wont continue..
I choose to be a silent reader again..
Towards the end.. Thank you everyone. Likers, commenters & silent readers.. And few people.. Achira, grishu and others.. M sorry.. But you have other great & promising fanfictions and also our NIRAJ.. Our show.. #nauc..
Thank you..
#nirajfanforever..
M gonna miss this.. 😭

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