Niraj FF : Some things are better left unsaid! Pt 12 pg 24 22/04/15 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Apologies cousins.. 😭 Don't want to say anything further.. But i would not want to leave this OS Incomplete.. As Niraj is now a part of my life.. Already upset with current track but with few hopes that kabir will unite them!

Here is the next part..

Recap : Nisha in Virajs arms..

At the mall

They were lost in each other.. The memories came flooding into their minds..
From the day Nisha entered in his life..
Their Jungle day..
Their Paper dance..
Academys memories..
Nishas love for chocolates..
Nishas confession about her love..
Their Rajasthan Talent Youth Competition..
And then the Press conference..
This made them come out of their thoughts..
Nisha loosened her grip on his shoulders and then Viraj made her stand in proper position..
Nisha (could not speak)
Viraj: (wanted to speak)
They were standing like this for minutes now..
Nisha gathered some courage and said I'm sorry.. I was talking on the phone..
He said Its ok.. Take care..
Nisha was shocked ..
Yes.. They were behaving as strangers now.. THE KNOWN STRANGERS..

Viraj left from there saying this..
After he left.. Nisha was still standing over there in the same position till Kabir came and waved at her so that she would come out of the dream.. He smirked at her!
A lone tear escaped from her eyes..
Kabir saw this and asked What happened? I just went to washroom and you started missing me Wifey? How blah! He smirked again.. Nisha gave him an angry look and started walking towards the cafeteria..

She said in really hungry.. You coming or not.. He nodded and followed Nisha..

Viraj was also sitting on the cafeteria.. To their surprise.. No table was empty.. Viraj was sitting on a table for 4.. They asked the waiter whether there is any table empty.. He said we are sorry sir.. But you'll have to wait.. Nisha said lets go somewhere else..
Then the waiter asked them to wait for a minute..
He went near Virajs table and asked him of he was ok if 2 people joined them as it was a able for 4 and he was sitting alone.. Without knowing that these people were Nisha & Kabir.. He agreed..

Waiter asked Nisha & Kabir.. If they were okay to join someone.. They agreed as they were very hungry now..
The waiter showed them the way to the table..

Nisha and Kabir talking to each other.. Thank God we found a table.. We have to thank the person too to allow us to join him/her..

Just then they saw each other.. Viraj got happy but at the same time he got upset seeing Kabir..
But as he agreed he allowed them to be seated and paid his bill and started ti leave without having his lunch..
Nisha stopped him.. Sir please don't leave your food and go.. Rather we will leave.. Please!
Viraj denied..
Then Kabir said.. Oh dear big bro.. Please don't leave the food and go.. We wanted to thank you.. And if u'll leave we cant sit here.. We are already too hungry by now.. You want us to remain hungry then leave..
Viraj didn't say anything.. Making a Oh God kinda face and sat in front of Nisha..

They were not speaking anything..

Nisha & Viraj both were upset..

Kabir couldn't tolerate silence..
So finally he spoke..
And asked Viraj that what was he doing here..
Viraj didn't say anything..
Kabir again asked..
Now Kabirs phone rang when Viraj was about to speak..

Kabirs expressions changed.. Nisha was shocked to see this.. Kabir excused himself and went to attend the phone..
Seeing Nisha understanding him well Viraj was taken aback.. That worry was clearly seen on Nishas face..

It wad awkward now..

Viraj said to Nisha..
It's too hot outside.. Will you like to have something? Cold drink or something?
She said No thank you and gave a smile..

Nisha : Sir..
Viraj : Nisha..
They both spoke at the same time..
But their luck! Kabir came.. And they stopped there..
Nisha asked Kabir the reason for which he was worried.. Kabir said.. I'm sorry Nisha.. I have some important work.. I have leave.. And treat some other day.. M sorry.. I have to leave.. He left from there very tensed..
Nisha was shocked! What the hell happened.. N how can he leave me.. N go..
Viraj was also curious now what was wrong.. Because he saw this person always smiling.. And chilling around.. The tension on his face was damn noticeable!
Nisha excused herself and said I think I should leave..
But Viraj said.. Have your lunch and leave.. You were hungry na..
She had ordered sandwich..
They were having eye contacts.. They had so much to say.. But they didn't..
Their orders came..

While eating again like that day something got stuck on her cheeks..
This reminded Viraj of their first sandwich date.. 😆
He unconsciously thinking of that day took a tissue paper and started to clean it.. Nisha was shocked..
After realising what Viraj had done.. He said sorry.. Umm.. I.. I..
Nisha said its ok..
After finishing their lunch still stealing glances.. Viraj paid the bill.. And they started to leave..

Viraj asked her if he shall drop her home.. She denied at first bit agreed as she was late now.. And she wont get any public transport also as she realised Kabir had taken her scooty..

They sat in the car.

He drove..

Nisha asked if she could turn on the radio because it was a long route.. They were far away from their area..
Viraj nodded..
She turned on.. The music..
Song played..
Yeh dooriyaan.. In raahoon Ki dooriyaan.. Nigaho Ki dooriyaan.. Fanaa ho sabhi dooriyaan..
Kyu koi pass hai door hai.. Kyu koi jaane na koi yaahan pe..
Aa raha pass ya door Mein jaa raha jaanu na Mein Hu kahan pe..
Yeh dooriyaan..
Kaha bhi na mene nai jeena mene ru Jo naa Mila.. Tujhe bhule se bhi bola naa Mein ye chahoon faasla..


A tear escaped their eyes.. Both noticed it.. 😭

Both wanted to say this to each other.. Hug and say I love you!
But their fear of rejection.. The jealousy they had.. Viraj for Kabir and Nisha for Kaira.. Stopped them..

Nisha Said Viraj to stop the car.. He was surprised as they had not reached home yet.. But she said its better you drop me here.. Of anyone sees us there will be a problem!

He agreed and told her to go safely..

Nisha opened the car door..
And said sorry and just ran as fast as possible for her..
Viraj was shocked.. Why sorry?


Precap: None..

Sorry cousins.. Extremely sorry everyone.. I was bit too disappointed.. But it was mu fault.. M sorry..
Forgive me..
I hope you'll will like this part.. Niraj didn't speak much.. But spent time together..
Leave your valuable comments behind if u'll find worth it! *no expectations* so *no disappointment*


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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
mind blowing dear...do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Awesome update yaar.. speechless words between niraj was mind blowing and y kabir was so tension..
Anyway enjoyed lot waiting for next update... thanks for continung it yaar.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Thanks for making up your mind to continue this.

You are absolutely an amazing and awesome writer.👏

Loved your update,eventhough they didn't speak their eyes,heart and mind is speaking.

Even everybody is disappointed with the current track, hope all this things will be cleared soon and we will get to see our old NAUC back.

But please do continue with your update.⭐️
Edited by Rinu08 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Thank you @Grishu, Achira, Nishu & Rinu..
Thanks a lottt.. I means a lot to me 😊 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Your FF is awesome. This part was all about how even the silences of niraj spoke volumes. Don't feel disappointed if you are not getting too many likes or replies. It happens. People love to read but not many comment. I know it is highly demoralizing for a writer not to receive any feedback, but please don't bother about it. Continue soon as there are many who love your FF.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Your FF is awesome. This part was all about how even the silences of niraj spoke volumes. Don't feel disappointed if you are not getting too many likes or replies. It happens. People love to read but not many comment. I know it is highly demoralizing for a writer not to receive any feedback, but please don't bother about it. Continue soon as there are many who love your FF.


Thanks a Lott Shailusri.. 😳 😳
Yee I'm continuing definitely.. Thanks .. Thanks a lot.. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Hello all..
Here is the next part!
Hope you'll wil like it..

Precap : Viraj dropped Nisha home..

Why sorry? He was left in suspense..
He was still in a confused state and asked himself will I ever be able to understand this girl? No wait.. What m I thinking..?
He remembered all the happy and sad times with her.. He thought to himself.. This girl has the power to bring the best and the worst out if me.. Why? I know I love her.. But why did she do this to me? Why is this all happening? What did that dream mean? Is she really innocent? Did i nit give her a fair chance to be heard? Is this the reason I have to see her with Kabir now? Is it just my ego? Is this what was supposed to be? But at the end she lied..
But who doesn't lie..
Urghhh
He was frustated now..
He found this to be rhetorical.. No answers to his questions..

Here..
Nisha stopped only when she reached her home.. She directly went to her room..
And started crying badly!
Why Viraj sir why?
Why do still affect me sooo much.. And when you don't love me why this fake concern? Why that tear in your eye? Why you didn't give me a chance to explain myself.. When you can trust that wicked buaji then why not me? You definitely had the right to get upset but should have given me a fair chance of explaining the situation.. And when you knew that I love you still you thought I did this to hurt you..

HOW CAN YOU?

Everything that I wanted to forget came rushing back into my head making my heart sink again.. Why? Viraj Singh Rathore.. Why?


She somehow managed to get out of it and tried to behave normal as she realised she was home now and cant show this hard time that she is passing through to anyone.. As all loves her.. If she gets sad they'll too which she didn't want at any cost.. And somewhere she still couldn't tolerate anything spoken against Viraj! She loved him yes.. But this truth cant be accepted!

She went downstairs to look for her mom.. But to her surprise nobody was at home.. She called her mom and asked about their whereabouts..
Laxmi told her that they had gone for Pooja which panditji arranged all of a sudden.. Dadaji couldn't refuse and since Kabir and you were not here and you told you may take time I convinced everybody about it..
Take care Nishu.. We'll return soon..

Just then Kabir came .. Seeing Nisha he went towards her and said Hi wifey!
Nisha gave him the famous donttellmethat look.. He understood as he had left her all alone with the Viraj Singh Rathore..

He said in sorry Nisha.. I had got a prob... He stopped as he realised what he was gonna say..

Nisha raised her eyebrow and asked what problem and why did you stop like this and how dare you leave me alone like that at the mall.. It was Viraj Sir ! Do you even realise what you did..


He said.. Sorry I know I shouldn't had done this.. M sorry.. Actually I told you na my Visa is gonna expire in 3 months.. The call was regarding that.. I had to go..

Nisha wasn't convinced because the way he had left was too different.. The thing was not so simple to understand.. But she ignored it and believed because she was in no sense of understanding anything now.. She was tired mentally!


She said its ok.. Kabir asked that I hope there was no problem there.. I hope Big Bro behaved.. She didn't reply and left from there..

By evening all the family members came home..
Dadaji shouted while entering the house..


NISHHA.. COME DOWN RIGHT NOW!

Nisha who was sleeping fell down from the bed and was bit shocked that what had happened? Why was dadaji screaming so loudly her name..


She gone down to find what was the matter..

That's it for today guys..

I know that was a boring and a short update.. But hope you'll will like it.. Hit the like button and leave your feedbacks..

Goodnight people..



Edited by nirajfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Its gr8 dear...especially that nisha fell from bed at the shouting of dadaji...do continue soon ...Please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Thank yuh! @upasna.. 😳 thanks for commenting..<3 :D

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