The Sorceress, the Commoner & the Angel Viraj's POV in poems - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The commoner almost made me teary eyed. Perfectly suits Nisha and her personality of being a developing kid inside.
Its perfect dear 😊
Edited by davearcha - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aneri.fan

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#660066">The Commoner</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Storming into my citadel of silence</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">She fought her way into its core</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Dismissing my fears with nonchalance</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">My glory she seeks to restore.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">She carries the world on her shoulders frail</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Shields every creature she sees</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Never flinches for her own wounds stale</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">On her forehead, not a single crease.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">A citadel she too is wrapped up in</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">One of insecurity and fear</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Punishing herself for another's sin</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Withdrawing from all who come near.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Her eyes tell a tale of hurt and fortitude</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Her lips narrate that of resolve</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">I wish I could accompany in her solitude</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Her pain I wish I could dissolve.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Despite the society's persistent effort</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Her child-like innocence remains</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">An oasis in the world's desert</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">After the drought, the rains.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Her sheer simplicity holds her charm</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Her beauty- her demeanor gauche</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Tripping incessantly into my arm</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Breathing life into the mundaneness of posh.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">
</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">She says I aroused in her, feelings</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">That she never knew existed</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Paranoid about the heart's dealings</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">I resist harder than I ever resisted.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">She is but a child still growing</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Her heart is guileless and pure</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">I break her heart fully knowing</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">For she has to learn to endure.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Still metamorphosing into a butterfly</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Love for her is too soon</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Still crawling around, investigating- why?</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">She still needs her protective cocoon.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Every time I fall, she falls with me</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Dusting the dirt off both of us</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Tending to my bruises, adoringly</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Jumping up again without a fuss.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">The bearer of my dreams</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">The carrier of my life</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Reflecting my eye's gleams</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Lessening my strife.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">My saviour, my mentee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">My friend and my guide</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">My laughter and glee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">My honour, my pride.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Walking on the paths delineated by me</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Without any question or reserve</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">This commoner holds the world in her- a potpourri</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660066">Will I ever be the prince she deserves?</font>


Again Beautifully written...perfect description of nisha and her feelings.. 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
just perfect yaar shivi both the poems are just perfect...waiting for the third one now regarding THE ANGLE.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: davearcha

The commoner almost made me teary eyed. Perfectly suits Nisha and her personality of being a developing kid inside.

Its perfect dear 😊

🤗 Aww! Thanks!

Originally posted by: neetr91

Again Beautifully written...perfect description of nisha and her feelings.. 👏 👏

Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: princess1398

just perfect yaar shivi both the poems are just perfect...waiting for the third one now regarding THE ANGLE.

😃thank you sooo much!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
well written...are you a poet .??
awesome and meaning full lines..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rocking_bhawna

well written...are you a poet .??
awesome and meaning full lines..


Thaank you!😃 Well, I do love to write.😉 Glad you liked it.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aap toh reserve kar k bhool hi gayin.😛😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
very very nice !Nishu 's poem is beautiful ...waiting for the angel !
You are gifted and please continue expressing your thoughts ! all the v best 😊
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#29

Originally posted by: namzie

very very nice !Nishu 's poem is beautiful ...waiting for the angel !

You are gifted and please continue expressing your thoughts ! all the v best 😊


Thank you!😃 I'm working on the angel. Will try to update today itself.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Excellent peom and it is awesome

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