The Sorceress, the Commoner & the Angel Viraj's POV in poems

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Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@TasmiaFay Thank you!☺️

@Princessglory Thanks!😃

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MsfairyCindreLa

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow! Amazing, ua really good shivi. U should write more.
awesome work

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Archa Dave

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Its awesome . . . perfectly apt description on Viraj's state of mind. Wow Shivi you are a ⭐️

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Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@Mun @Dave thank you! ❤️

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

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😃👍🏼 you should be a poet yaar.!!

u have written the poem so amazingly . its wonderful !

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Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@dinazz thank you soon much. ☺️

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Kavila

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aneri.fan
The Sorceress

She appeared out of nowhere
She has no whereabouts
Still she's always there
For the pettiest of my doubts

I haven't heard her voice
Yet she sings that song
The one of mirth and rejoice
The one I've waited for so long.

Her form I haven't seen
Yet she's the personification of grace
A calm and quiet sheen
Exudes, her invisible face.

I haven't seen her eyes
Yet through her eyes I see
All truths and lies
She bares my own world to me.

I haven't seen her hands
Yet she creates as she talks
Dreams in exquisite lands
Enticing me for walks.

I don't know her heart
Yet my mind she can read
She's become an inseparable part
She's slowly become my need.

I don't know the spells
But I know the magic they do
After every dead end, she tells
Lies a road new.

I don't know of her existence
Or if her words are true
Yet I offer no resistance
Even an illusion will do.

Delineating paths for me
She is seeing me through
Lifting curses, setting me free
O sorceress! Who are you?

..👏👏...well done yay its totally fit on viraj state of mind..yay but the thing is..it is just extending to the level of bordeness i mean when the truth will come out that nishu is ewf the i am afraid.viraj would go through a nervous breakdown...😲

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Namrata

@namzie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Very well described through the poem ... like it a lot ! do share the rest too !

yes even i have no problem with Viraj and his communication to a stranger ...it happens at times ...you just feel connected and he does ...although at times it feels very lame ...but sometimes we can end up expressing better to a stranger.. ...his mind and his control all has been pushed aside when he writes ...and the best thing is that its our girl !

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Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@antika11412 thanks! I don't know how he will react... Still... I hope he figures it out by himself and then sets out to correct his mistake.

@namzie thank you! Will share the rest when they're ready...

Honestly though... I'm not so sure if I'm OK with the idea of EWF. So many things could go wrong.Its not practical... But yes, like I said... I get why Viraj is being impractical.