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Posted: 5 years ago

Can you help me with my FF? I have finally edited the second chapter and need to know if earlier version was better or should I keep this one.

FF... Dark Before Dawn?? Or...??

Sorry yaar, dimag kaam nahi kar raha hai humara...

And could you please highlight the added portion?


Added one para of Ansh and your most favorite punchline in between. 😈

My most favourite punchline?


Agar accha lage to waha comment karna aur bura lage to yahape kar dena. 😉

Okay... 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

FF... Dark Before Dawn?? Or...??

What If?


Sorry yaar, dimag kaam nahi kar raha hai humara...

It's okay!


And could you please highlight the added portion?

Umm, can't do that. Because I keep changing phrases and everything. But the major change was the addition of a prara, probably the 2nd one where Ansh's POV was explored. And I shortened Piya's dialogue in the first para but focused on her facial expression.


My most favourite punchline?

Yup, it's in the para where I included Bhaisa uncle. Can't spoil more. 😜

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Posted: 5 years ago

What If?

Okay... Abhi padh kar batate hain.


It's okay!

🤗


Umm, can't do that. Because I keep changing phrases and everything. But the major change was the addition of a prara, probably the 2nd one where Ansh's POV was explored. And I shortened Piya's dialogue in the first para but focused on her facial expression.

No problem... Basically, you have edited the second paragraph, right?


Yup, it's in the para where I included Bhaisa uncle. Can't spoil more. 😜

Koi nahi... Abhi padhne ja hi rahe the.


Waise, humare FF par 'Supernatural' to add nahi ho raha hai...

Fantasy ya adventure ya koi aur genre bhi ho sakta hai kya apart from suspense?

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Posted: 5 years ago

No problem... Basically, you have edited the second paragraph, right?

Added - an entire para. 😛




Waise, humare FF par 'Supernatural' to add nahi ho raha hai...

Fantasy ya adventure ya koi aur genre bhi ho sakta hai kya apart from suspense?

Fantasy keh sakte ho. Adventure - I am not sure.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Added - an entire para. 😛

Haan Ji... Jakar padh liya humne.


Fantasy keh sakte ho. Adventure - I am not sure.

Even I am not sure about adventure... Actually I was checking the genres. To, suspense, thriller and adventure hi the jo actually load ho paye...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Haan Ji... Jakar padh liya humne.

What do you think about the bathtup reference? 😈


Even I am not sure about adventure... Actually I was checking the genres. To, suspense, thriller and adventure hi the jo actually load ho paye...

It seems like kuch common genres hi upload hote hain. Aur humne to dekha hi hain, certain couples pe hi stories aate hain to genre mein utni variation nahi hain. 🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago

What do you think about the bathtup reference? 😈

Ekdum shat pratishat satya baat kahi hai aapne... 😈 😈 😈


It seems like kuch common genres hi upload hote hain. Aur humne to dekha hi hain, certain couples pe hi stories aate hain to genre mein utni variation nahi hain. 🤔

Yeah... Ye to humne bhi notice kiya hai. So, thriller to nahi ho sakta, right?

Aur dusara, hume ye samajh nahi aaya ki tragedy genre kyon nahi load ho raha hai... Kya aaj tak kisi ne tragic story likhi hi nahi hai?? 🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ekdum shat pratishat satya baat kahi hai aapne... 😈 😈 😈

Kripaya waha pe comment kar dena. 😳 Aap ki comments mere shots se kam funny nahi hain. 😆 Specially when we roast these characters.



Yeah... Ye to humne bhi notice kiya hai. So, thriller to nahi ho sakta, right?

Mental uncertainty to thi, to shayad kaha ja sakta hain. Thriller ya suspense koi ek rakh do.


Aur dusara, hume ye samajh nahi aaya ki tragedy genre kyon nahi load ho raha hai... Kya aaj tak kisi ne tragic story likhi hi nahi hai?? 🤔

I know right! I tried to insert it in my OS and ended up choosing Drama.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Kripaya waha pe comment kar dena. 😳

Ab wahan par kya comment kare hum? Bath tub ke upar kare kya?

Aap ki comments mere shots se kam funny nahi hain. 😆 Specially when we roast these characters.

Ainn?? Humare comments funny? Kab? Kaise? Kahan?? 🤓


Mental uncertainty to thi, to shayad kaha ja sakta hain. Thriller ya suspense koi ek rakh do.

Yup... Thriller and suspense yahi do dimag main aa rahe hain aur load bhi ho rahe hain...


I know right! I tried to insert it in my OS and ended up choosing Drama.

Ab Shattered ko hum Drama keh sakte hain kya?

I don't think so... 🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ab wahan par kya comment kare hum? Bath tub ke upar kare kya?

Accha theek hai jao, pareshan nahi karte. Mujhe actually laga tha ki tumhe bathtub wala portion zyada pasand ayega. After all, how can I forget Naman's monologue about Mo's love for bathtub and comb. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Ainn?? Humare comments funny? Kab? Kaise? Kahan?? 🤓

Har jagah. Tum apna khud ki rhymes nahi dekhti ho kya? 🤪


Yup... Thriller and suspense yahi do dimag main aa rahe hain aur load bhi ho rahe hain...

Phir yahi rakh do. Waise bhi, Thriller nahi to main zyada padha hain ya dekha hain. To tumhe jo sahi lage, in dono mein se kisi ek rakh do.


Ab Shattered ko hum Drama keh sakte hain kya?

I don't think so... 🤔

It most certainly doesn't fall under DRama. Isse behtar to yeh hain ki hum Genre hi na daale. But I was thinking, you could write Tragedy in the Content Tag option. I am thinking of doing the same.

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