FF: Sacrifice For Immortality (Completed) - Page 16

Well, as I have already told you, I don't like to keep things unexplained... So, I had to give an explanation behind the locket and the chain...

That's amazing and I love you for that! 🤗

Also, who knows who might turn out to be the real Antakasur? 😉

Frankly, I don't want to know. I love surprises. 😎

Could you please explain more clearly?

I meant to say, they were in a really dangerous situation and more importantly, all of them are worried sick about someone trying to kill Piya. So I don't think in such a situation one sibling would notice the other sibling not blaming it on only and take responsibility. In such a situation, one would rather be frustrated that they had lost track. Neha didn't blame Rishi and he looked at her as if something had changed - it was a bit over-dramatic, that's all.

Thanks... I'm glad you liked it. 🤗

🤗

It was a superb chapter.

Reason for the chain was bang on!

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Then loved the goblet description and Antakasur over smarting Mo, super brilliant! Details and making life liquid was interesting, reminded me of unicorn blood theory.

Well, this was necessary because I wanted to remove Mo from the equation. Her work is done... So, now she won't be included in the next chapters...

It was interesting and Neha and Rishi part too was great, both following Rudra and losing him, definitely happens when you keep a gap and the crossroads part.

Actually I got this idea while watching CID... In one of the earlier episodes there was something remotely similar to this.

Besides, Rishi and Neha were bound to lose him... So, me being the aalsi one as usual took the easiest way out...😆

That's amazing and I love you for that! 🤗

🤗

Frankly, I don't want to know. I love surprises. 😎

No worries... Agle do chapters main se kisi ek main ye bhi clear ho jayega...

I meant to say, they were in a really dangerous situation and more importantly, all of them are worried sick about someone trying to kill Piya. So I don't think in such a situation one sibling would notice the other sibling not blaming it on only and take responsibility. In such a situation, one would rather be frustrated that they had lost track. Neha didn't blame Rishi and he looked at her as if something had changed - it was a bit over-dramatic, that's all.

Uhh! Looks like the coloured font is not working... I was actually asking about the portion where you mentioned Antakasur...

Now, coming to this part... This was actually not supposed to be the actual scene. I had actually forgotten to write this portion and when I realised it, jo pehli cheez dimag main aayi, likh di... And uske baad I realised ki it was totally out of context...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

It was a superb chapter.

Reason for the chain was bang on!

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Then loved the goblet description and Antakasur over smarting Mo, super brilliant! Details and making life liquid was interesting, reminded me of unicorn blood theory.

Well, this was necessary because I wanted to remove Mo from the equation. Her work is done... So, now she won't be included in the next chapters...

It was interesting and Neha and Rishi part too was great, both following Rudra and losing him, definitely happens when you keep a gap and the crossroads part.

Actually I got this idea while watching CID... In one of the earlier episodes there was something remotely similar to this.

Besides, Rishi and Neha were bound to lose him... So, me being the aalsi one as usual took the easiest way out...😆

You are welcome, :)

Wise!

Cool.

Definitely!! Lol.

Now, coming to this part... This was actually not supposed to be the actual scene. I had actually forgotten to write this portion and when I realised it, jo pehli cheez dimag main aayi, likh di... And uske baad I realised ki it was totally out of context...

Koi baat nahi. 😊

Uhh! Looks like the coloured font is not working... I was actually asking about the portion where you mentioned Antakasur...

Antakasur was bang on. I didn't have any problem with his portion.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Uhh! Looks like the coloured font is not working... I was actually asking about the portion where you mentioned Antakasur...

Antakasur was bang on. I didn't have any problem with his portion.

I was actually talking about this portion:

"I mean, you gave quite the description and I was rather expecting that Antakasur may have done something with Neha"

Rest, I am glad you are liking this villain that I created... 😊 After all, kaafi mehnat jo lagi hai iske peeche 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

I was actually talking about this portion:

"I mean, you gave quite the description and I was rather expecting that Antakasur may have done something with Neha"

Rishi who had pulled up on the side of the road by this time was staring at Neha as if she had grown two horns on her head...

Neha: Kya hua? Tu mujhe aise kyon ghoor raha hai?

Rishi: Kuch nahi... Bas wo tune kaha na ki 'HUMNE' dhyaan nahi diya hoga to thoda sa shock laga... Kyonki tu to saari galti mere sar par daal kar ladne ka koi mauka nahi chhodti?

I meant this portion. @Bold I felt Anta had cast some spell but then it turned out something so insignificant.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Rishi who had pulled up on the side of the road by this time was staring at Neha as if she had grown two horns on her head...

Neha: Kya hua? Tu mujhe aise kyon ghoor raha hai?

Rishi: Kuch nahi... Bas wo tune kaha na ki 'HUMNE' dhyaan nahi diya hoga to thoda sa shock laga... Kyonki tu to saari galti mere sar par daal kar ladne ka koi mauka nahi chhodti?

I meant this portion. @Bold I felt Anta had cast some spell but then it turned out something so insignificant.

Oh achha... now I get that...

Waise bhi, I couldn't have shown any such thing without revealing Antakasur's identity, nahi?

If he would have cast some spell, to wahin clear ho jaata that they are following Antakasur... Phir kaahe ka suspense? 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Oh achha... now I get that...

Waise bhi, I couldn't have shown any such thing without revealing Antakasur's identity, nahi?

If he would have cast some spell, to wahin clear ho jaata that they are following Antakasur... Phir kaahe ka suspense? 😆

That's true. 😆

But suspense ke chakkar mein Rishi ko thoda zyadi hi idiotic bana dia. Par koi nahi; choti moti inconsistency to chalta hi hain. 😎