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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: silla

Wow Ab engagement ring gum hogeee ha hah hah hah yeh em doosray ko pehna dein

He he ek dusre ko.. Lol kuch jyada hi jaldi nahi hojayega
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CONTINUE...
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It was engagement day. The ceremony is going to take place in a hall arranged by bajpayee family. Anant who was wearing a yellow color sherwani was busy in arrangements when his eyes caught a beauty coming towards him. Navya who was dressed in royal blue color lehenga with hair curls at end and big earing was coming towards him having a shagun thali in her hand. Anant gets mesmerized looking at her
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
RAB NE MILAYA TUMHE
HOTO PE SAJAYA TUMHE
NAGME SUGAYA TUMHE
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
SABSE CHUPAYA TUMHE
SAPNA BANAYA TUMHE
NINDO ME BULAYA TUMHE
Again the music starts playing in anant's heart. Navya came towards Anant and looks at him in confusion
NAVYA - hello
Anant comes to reality when navya shake his hand after he didn't listen to her.
ANANT - ha.. Hi.. Hello
Navya scrunched her eyebrow
NAVYA - kya hi hello? Dhyan kaha he tumhara Anant?
Anant looks at her lovingly when she asked this question. He stammered to answer.
ANANT - nahi wo.. Actually me wo
NAVYA - uff rehne do. Tum aur tumhari behen dono ajib he. Pata nahi uncle aunty kaise jhelte he tum dono ko
Now Anant came to his original form. His mouth left open
ANANT - kya kya kya? What did you said?
NAVYA - kuch nahi. Tumhe explain karne ke liye mere pas time nahi he. Ye faltu bate chodo aur ye batao tumne kuch socha he ya nahi?
ANANT - socha to mene bohot kuch he
Said Anant looking confident while navya just smile fakely
NAVYA - sochte to tum bohot kuch ho. Par kam ek bhi nahi aya he aaj tak
ANANT - don't worry. Ye zarur Kam ayega. Ye batao ki ring kaha he?
Navya looks here and there and gave him the ring which was kept in the thali
ANANT - ab bas.. Samjho ye rishta yahi tak tha
Anant smile evily while navya looks tensed
After some time all were waiting for ritika to come
OM - sugandha.. Kaha he ritika? Muhrat nikla ja raha he
SUGANDHA - ji me bulati hu
Sugandha was about to go when meeta stops her
MEETA - aap q taklif le rahi he bhabiji. Navya bula laywgi na
Navya looks amazed at meeta while meeta indicates her to go with eyes. Navya went in the room where ritika was getting ready
NAVYA - ritika
Ritika looks at navya. She was looking pretty in her dress. But navya was not so happy to look at her
RITIKA - hi navya
NAVYA - chalo tumhe sab bula rahe he
RITIKA - ha.
She gave a last look at herself in mirror
RITIKA - navya me kaisi lag rahi hu
Navya smile fakely
NAVYA - very beautiful
RITIKA - thanks. Tumhe pata he aaj mere Zindagi ka best day he
Ritika came near her and started talking about what she is feeling
RITIKA - is din ka mene bohot wait kiya he. Mujhe to yakin hi nahi horaha he ki aaj meri engagement he
Navya looks at her and feel that how happy she is today. Ritika was talking and talking while navya was looking disinterested
NAVYA - ritika
Navya inturpts her
NAVYA - I think we should leave. Sab wait Kar rahe he
RITIKA - oh ya
They both left from there. They reached downstairs. Ritika stand beside Ranbir. Both the mothers does some rituals. Dadi put kala tika behind ritika's ear. Finally it was time for ring exchange. Sugandha gave ring to ritika. She put in the finger of Ranbir. Everyone clapped for them while Anant and navya looks at each other
DEEPAK - meeta
MEETA - ha.. Navi anguthi de
Navya looks at Anant while he nodded in yes. Navya acts of searching ring in thali. She looked little tensed
MEETA - jaldi kar na. Kya kar rahi he
NAVYA - ma ek min
DADI - kya hua navi
NAVYA - Dadi wo.. Anguthi mil nahi rahi he
All became shocked. Anant goes towards navya
ANANT - kya? What do you mean by mil nahi rahi?
Anant blink at navya
NAVYA - mujhe nahi pata. Mene yahi rakhi thi. Ab mil nahi rahi
Meeta patted her own head. While all looks tensed. All guests started murmuring amongst themselves. Looking at which Ranbir and ritika looks at each other
DEEPAK - navi.. Tu itni careless kaisi ho sakti he
NAVYA - papa mene abhi thode time pehele check ki thi. But abhi pata nahi kaha gayi
MEETA - he bhagwan ye ladki. Ab dhundho use
Everyone started searching it. Anant looks at navya and ensure her
SUGANDHA - koi bat nahi bhabi ji. Mil jayegi
DADI - mil jani chahiye. Nahi to sagai ruk jayegi
Ranbir and ritika looks shocked while Anant and navya looks at each other and smirk
RANBIR - ek min dadi
Everyone looks at Ranbir
RANBIR - sagai nahi rukegi
Ritika looks confused while Anant and navya became shocked
ANANT - ab ye kya he navya?
NAVYA - mujhe kya pata? Kahi ring Ranbir ko mil to nahi gayi na
Said navya getting scared
ANANT - impossible.. Ring to mere pocket me he
Anant check his pocket and find the ring
NAVYA - to fir Ranbir ne aisa q bola
Both of them looks at Ranbir. Sugandha goes near Ranbir
SUGANDHA - Ranbir bete. Tum chinta mat karo. Ring mil jayegi
OM - ha Ranbir. Hum sab dhundhte he na.
Meeta goes towards navya
MEETA - navi tujhe anguthi sambhal Kar rakhne ke liye di thi na. Kaha dhyan rehta he tera? Ghuma di na
DEEPAK - meeta shant hojao
Ranbir came in between to talk
RANBIR - aap sab log mujhe kuch bolne denge
Everyone looks at Ranbir
RITIKA - kya kehna he tumhe Ranbir? Ring hi nahi hogi to age ki rituals kaise hogi?
RANBIR - ritika sagai me gold ring hona compulsion he kya?
RITIKA - what
Everyone looks confused
RANBIR - sagai me jab ring exchange hoti he to kehte he dil b exchange hote he aur jud jate he. Par hamare dil to pehele se Jude he. Ye to bas ek rasm he. He na Dadi?
Dadi looks little confused. Deepak moves towards him
DEEPAK - tum kehna kya chahte ho?
RANBIR - papa kuch mahino pehele mene ritika ko ek twig ring di thi. Par usne mujhse kaha tha ki wo use tab except karegi jab hamari families man jayegi. Tab se wo ring mene sambhalkar rakhi he. To isse acha mauka aur kya hoga use use karne ka?
RITIKA - ya.. Me to bhul hi gayi thi
Everyone looks convinced while Anant and navya looks at each other in disbelief
OM - ha ye thk rahega
DEEPAK - ji.. Jab baccho ko problem nahi he to hume kaise hogi?
SUGANDHA - Maji aapko chalega na
DADI - ha ha q nahi.. Sab chalega
Everyone became happy. Navya patted her own head while Anant closed his eyes in frustration. All gather near stage. Ranbir took out the twig ring which he always used to keep in his pocket. He makes ritika wear it. All clap and congratulate them.
NAVYA - ek bar fir tumhara superb plan flop hogaya
Said navya angrily
ANANT - navya I tried my best. Shayad hamara naseeb hi kharab he
NAVYA - hamara nahi.. Mera. Jo tumhare ha me ha milaya aur tumhara sath diya
ANANT - acha.. Ulta chor kotwal ko date?
NAVYA - nahi.. Sidha kotwal chor ko date. Aur agar age bhi aisa hua na to ye kotwal chor ki jan le legi
Said navya looking at Anant while he looks down
ANANT - wo to tum hamesha karti ho
Navya looks at him in surprise. While Anant realized what he said. They both looks away feeling embarrassed. One girl came there with sweets
GIRL - navi di.. Mithai
Navya took a piece of sweet and same does Anant
GIRL - congrats both of you. Ab to aap dono me bhi rishta jud gaya
The girl went from there and anant and navya looks at each other
ANANT - mithai Khao navya. Rishta jud gaya he
Anant teases her while she fake a smile
NAVYA - very funny
ANANT - tum tension mat lo navya. Ab to bas sagai hui he. Shadi ke liye ab bhi 3 mahine baki he
NAVYA - Pata nahi.. Kya hoga
ANANT - sab thk hoga. Trust me
Navya looks at him sadly while he makes her believe to not worry
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" THE COUPLE THAT ARE MEANT TO BE ARE THE ONES WHO GO THROUGH EVERYTHING THAT IS MEANT TO TEAR THEM APART AND CAME OUT EVEN STRONGER.. "
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Haha haha such a funny update thank u soo much do update next part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: silla

Haha haha such a funny update thank u soo much do update next part asap

Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Hahaha anya were too cute.very funny update.thank u so much for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
CONTINUE...
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Anant and navya were sitting in a coffee shop having coffee. Both were silent, thinking about the matter
NAVYA - mujhe nahi lagta ab kuch hoga
Said navya disappointedly. Anant looks at her.
ANANT - Matlab?
NAVYA - Matlab sagai to hogayi ab jaldi shadi bhi hojayegi. Aur fir hum wait karenge inke divorce ka. And then sab kuch barbad
Anant took a deep breath
ANANT - sabkuch barbad na ho isliye to hum abhi sab barbad kar rahe he na navya. Mujhe to ye samajh nahi ata ki itna acha plan banane ke bad bhi sab flop kyu hojate he?
Anant gets frustrated. Navya thinks something
NAVYA - that is the power of love Anant
Anant looks at navya while she continued
NAVYA - mene suna he sacche pyar me bohot takat hoti he aur ab shayad dekh bhi liya. Isliye itna sab hone ke bad bhi aaj ritika aur Ranbir ek sath he
ANANT - no navya. It's not love. Me nahi manta inke bich pyar he. Ye to bas attraction he jinhe ye shadi ka nam dena chahte he. Pyar aise thodi hota he
NAVYA - tumhe kaise pata pyar kaise hota he? Tumne kabhi kiya he kya?
They both looks at each other. They were flown in each other's eyes and were just staring each other
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
RAB NE MILAYA TUMHE
HOTO PE SAJAYA TUMHE
NAGME SUGAYA TUMHE
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
SABSE CHUPAYA TUMHE
SAPNA BANAYA TUMHE
NINDO ME BULAYA TUMHE
Navya broke the eyelock and looks down. Anant keep his hand on her hand. She looks at him in surprise.
ANANT - you don't worry navya. Hum sab thk karenge
Navya nodded in yes. She took her hand back
NAVYA - me chalti hu. Waise b kal to humhe milna hi he
ANANT - Kal?
NAVYA - bhul gaye? Kal hum log tumhare ghar arahe he, Shadi ki plannings karne
ANANT - oh ya right. Thk he fir Kal milte he
Navya take a leave from there while Anant also goes from other side
Navya reached her home. Dadi and meeta were having tea
MEETA - are navi.. Agayi beta
Navya smile and sat on sofa
MEETA - tu beth me tere liye chai lati hu
NAVYA - ok
Meeta goes in kitchen. Navya was thinking about what to do with Ranbir and ritika when dadi looks at her
DADI - navi
Her thoughts broke and she looks at Dadi
DADI - kya hua? Tu thk he na?
She thought something and decided to ask Dadi.
NAVYA - Dadi mujhe na aapse kuch puchna he. Puchu?
DADI - ha beta bol na
NAVYA - Dadi.. Do logo me pyar he ya nahi ye hume kaise pata chalega?
Dadi scrunched her eyebrow and looks strange
DADI - ye kaisa sawal he?
NAVYA - wo actually Dadi.. Aaj Kal to crush likeness attractions isko bhi log pyar bolte he. To hume pata kaise chalega ki pyar saccha he ya nahi
DADI - navi.. Sacchi pyar to dekhte hi pata chalta he. Ek dusre ke liye respect pyar aur sabse important trust hota he
Navya listened very carefully
DADI - rishte me agar ek dusre par trust ho vishwas ho to wo majbut rehta he aur saccha hota he
Navya smile and thinks about something. One plan was brewing inside her mind. Next day, Mishra family visited at bajpayees. All were chit chatting in hall. While Anant and navya were talking in balcony
ANANT - kya hua? Tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya?
NAVYA - Anant.. Mere pas ek mind blowing plan he
Anant became happy
ANANT - acha? Kya?
NAVYA - hum Ranbir aur ritika ko ek dusre ke against bhadkayenge
Anant scrunched his eyebrow
NAVYA - dekho. Relationship me sabse important hota he trust. Aur hum in dono ke bich isi trust ki test lenge. Agar Ranbir aur ritika ka relationship strong he to inka ye trust inhe bachayega aur agar kahi kisi point pe weak he to ye hi inki wicket lega
Navya tried to explain him and anant looks convinced
ANANT - idea to acha he. Par hum karenge kaise
NAVYA - Anant.. Ranbir ritika ko lekar bohot possessive he. Agar hum Ranbir ko bol de ki ritika usse uske ex boyfriend ke bare me chupa rahi he to uske man me doubt ayega. Aur fir hoga inme jhagda
ANANT - one minute.. Par ritika ka koi boyfriend nahi raha he
NAVYA - oho Anant. Bolne me kya jata he? Hum Ranbir ko directly thodi bolenge. Hum to uske man me doubt lane ki koshish karenge. Aur agar by chance ye plan flop karta he to hum bol denge ki Ranbir ne hume misunderstood kiya
Anant thinks for a while and gave a impressive look at navya
ANANT - kya bat he.. Waise dikhti nahi ho but intelligent ho tum
NAVYA - intelligent to me bachpan se hu by God. Par kabhi ghamand nahi kiya. Warna kuch log hote he jinke dimag me hota he kuch nahi he par ainvayee khud ki tarif karte rehte he
She taunt Anant for which he looks at her in aggression. He decided to tease her
ANANT - waise navya.. Meri ex girlfriend zarur reh chuki he
She looks at him while he does his collar up
NAVYA - tumhari girlfriend? Rehne do rehne do. Tumhe mere alawa koi nahi jhel sakta
She said without thinking. Anant looks at her in amusement while she bite her tongue
ANANT - kya kaha!?
NAVYA - aaabbb.. Wo.. Mene ye kaha ki is duniya me tumhe koi nahi jhel sakta.
ANANT - oh madam. You don't know. College me na ladkiya pagal thi mere piche. Line lagti thi unki
NAVYA - lagta he un ladkiyo ki akhe kharab hogi. Isliye to tumhare piche padi thi
ANANT - tum mujhe janti nahi ho
NAVYA - Janna bhi nahi chahti. Aur agar tumhari khud ki tarif hogayi ho to andar chale? Nahi to sabko humpe doubt hojayega
Anant nodded in yes. And both of them gets inside...
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" LOVE IS WEAKEST WHEN THERE IS MORE DOUBT THAN TRUST BUT LOVE IS STRONGEST WHEN WE LEARN TO TRUST INSPITE THE DOUBTS "
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Lmaoo waiting for anya actions ;))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: silla

Lmaoo waiting for anya actions ;))

Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
waiting for next part. ... lovely update...

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