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Posted: 9 years ago
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At evening, navya and Ranbir reached at the wedding planner's office where Anant and ritika were waiting for them. Ritika comes towards Ranbir and hug him for which navya nodded in disbelief. They both goes inside while navya whisper at Anant
NAVYA - tum ready ho na?
ANANT - navya hum kya peheli bar kuch plan kar rahe he jo tum mujhe puch rahi ho?
NAVYA - peheli bar nahi he but akhri bar hona chahiye. Full and final
ANANT - ha baba. Tum tumhara part thk se karna me sambhal lunga
Both of them shake hand and goes inside to implement their plan
All of them meet the planner and decided about the wedding
MEHTA - aap sabko tension lene ki koi zarurat nahi he. Shadi ki sab tayariya ekdum ache se hojayegi
Anant and navya looks uninterested while Ranbir and ritika became happy
RITIKA - Mr Mehta, mujhe jo chahiye wo me apko bol dungi. Aap us hisab se arrangements kijiyega
MEHTA - ya sure. Mr Anant. Aap mujhe jald se jald guest list de dijiye taki me flight ki tickets book kara lunga
Anant nodded in yes. They gets up to leave.
ANANT - ok Mr Mehta. Thank you so much
They shake hands. Mehta left from there. Navya looks at Anant who nodded in yes.
NAVYA - ritika can you come with me
RITIKA - ya sure
They both goes towards washroom. Anant looks at them going. He looks at Ranbir and smile
ANANT - so Ranbir. Happy with the arrangements
RANBIR - ya bhai. Actually acha he sab ritika ke marzi se horaha he. Wo khush rahegi
Ranbir laugh and anant fakes a smile
ANANT - waise acha he is bar ritika ne apne dil ki bat bata di. Nahi to hamesha chupa kar rakhti he
Ranbir scrunched his eyebrow
RANBIR - jaha tak me ritika ko janta hu waha tak to ritika kuch chupati nahi he. She is very bold and never keep anything amongst her.
ANANT - acha.. To shayad tum use ache se jan hi nahi paye ho
Ranbir looks at him in shock
ANANT - me uska bhai hu. Bachpan se use janta hu aur tum use 6 mahine se. Ritika jhut bolti he. Badi si badi bate bhi chupa sakte he. And God knows usne tumse konsi badi bat chupayi hogi
Anant's words make Ranbir thinks something
ANANT (in mind) - yes.. Ranbir ke dimag me ritika ke liye doubt araha he. Ab please bhagwan is doubt ko aur badhne dena
Navya and ritika came there. Anant and navya looks at each other. Anant shows her thumbs up while navya smirk
RITIKA- Sab planning ache se hogayi he na Ranbir?
Ranbir just smile lightly while navya became happy
RANBIR - navi. Chal Hume late horaha he
He left from there without saying anything to ritika. Navya follow him
RITIKA - ye Ranbir ko kya hogaya ekdum se
She looks at Anant who gave I don't know expression. Ritika goes in thoughts while Anant smirk
Ranbir and navya reached home. Navya tell everything about the wedding to deepak and meeta
MEETA - ye acha hogaya. Q Ranbir?
Ranbir goes from there in his room
DEEPAK - ise kya hua?
NAVYA - thak gaya hoga papa. Chodo na. Ma mujhe bohot bhuk lagi he. Khana do na please
MEETA - ha tu fresh hoja. Me lagati hu
Navya goes in ranbir's room. She was standing near door and looks at him who was thinking something
NAVYA (in mind) - I am sorry Ranbir. I know I am hurting you. Par me jo bhi kar rahi hu wo tere ache ke liye hi kar rahi hu. Ek bar ye shadi tut jaye fir me tujhe sab Sach bata dungi.
Suddenly ranbir's cell rang. He picks the call
RANBIR - kya he ritika?
RITIKA - kya hua he tumhe Ranbir? Ekdum se waha se chale gaye aur ab phone bhi nahi utha rahe ho
RANBIR - ritika please. Mujhe bat nahi Karni he abhi. We will talk later
RITIKA - q Ranbir? Tumhe kya problem he mujhe bataoge?
RANBIR - aisa kuch nahi he. Agar mujhe zaruri laga to me tumhe bata dunga
RITIKA - one minute. What do you mean by zaruri laga to? Tum mujhse jhut bologe
RANBIR- to jhut kya sirf tum hi bol sakti ho!?
RITIKA - kya?
RANBIR - ritika we will talk later. Bye
Ranbir kept the call. Suddenly someone keep hand on his shoulder. He looks back to see navya standing. She sits beside him.
NAVYA - tu thk he?
Ranbir nodded in yes. Both were silent. Suddenly Ranbir looks at her and decided to talk
RANBIR - tujhe lagta he ritika mujhse jhut bolti he?
Navya looks at him
NAVYA - mujhe kya lagta he isse jyada important ye he ki tujhe kya lagta he?
Ranbir looks down
NAVYA - apne dil se puch. Kya tujhe ritika par trust he? Kya kehta he tera dil ye sun. Baki jo bolte he ye mat sun
Navya makes him understand. She gets up
NAVYA - dinner ke liye chal
She left from there while Ranbir goes in thoughts
Next morning door bell rang of Mishra house. Meeta open the door and find ritika infront
MEETA - are ritika. Aao na
RITIKA - hello mummy
She gets in. Navya also came there
MEETA - kuch kam tha beta?
RITIKA - nahi mummy. Aise hi
Navya understood that ritika have visited to meet Ranbir
MEETA - acha ritika. Mujhe aur tumhare papa ko zaruri kam se bahar jana he. Par tum betho. Navi Dadi mandir se ane tak tu rukna ritika ke sath
Navya nodded in yes. Meeta left from there
RITIKA - navya.. Where is Ranbir?
NAVYA - wo to office chala gaya. Uski meeting thi.
Ritika looks disappointed
RITIKA - pata nahi kya hua he use? Ajib behave kar raha he. Tumhe kuch pata he kya
Ritika asked navya. Navya looks at her and think that this is the chance to make their fight bigger
RITIKA - navya kya soch rahi ho
NAVYA - nahi wo.. Ritika.. Itna tension kyu le rahi ho? It's normal. Ranbir usually aisa hi gussa karta he
Ritika scrunched her eyebrow and looks confused
RITIKA - kya Matlab?
NAVYA - I know Ranbir. Hum dono twins he aur hamari adate bhi same he. Hum dono short tempered he. Bas me gussa dikhati hu aur wo nahi
Ritika gets surprised and thinks something. Navya smile little. Ritika took her bag and started walking
NAVYA - kaha ja rahi ho?
RITIKA - Ranbir se bol dena navya ki ab na me use phone karungi aur na hi message
Saying this ritika went in anger. Navya was little happy. She took her cell and called Anant.
ANANT - hello
NAVYA - ek good news he
ANANT - kya? Par hum dono me to aisa kuch hua hi nahi
Teases Anant while navya's jaw drop
NAVYA - chhii.. So cheapo
Anant laugh and navya looks angry
NAVYA - faltu joke mat maro aur meri bat suno
ANANT - acha baba bolo
Navya told him everything what happened yesterday and when ritika came. Anant became happy
ANANT - ye to sachme good news he navya
NAVYA - dekha.. Akhir plan kiska tha
Navya praise herself while Anant nodded in disbelief
ANANT - thk he thk he. Ab inka jhagda aur badhna chahiye
NAVYA - don't worry Anant. Bolchal band hui he kal milna band karenge aur phir jald hi shadi tut jayegi
Said navya very happily. Anant and navya looks happy seeing Ranbir and ritika's fight
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" NO RELATIONSHIP IS PERFECT. YOU JUST HAVE TO KNOW IN YOUR HEART THAT THE PERSON YOU ARE WITH IS TRULY WORTH FIGHTING FOR NO MATTER WHAT.. "
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Awww so sad of Ranbir and ritika.thanks for the update.will wait for next update😉
silla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Roflll hamaray beech tou aisa kuch hua hi nahi cant wait for next update please update soon :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Lolll awesome one .. Cont sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Brilliant update
hahaha anant is so funny 🤣
oh so they succeeded
in their plan
let see for how long
their plan will work 😆
update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ganganavya

Awww so sad of Ranbir and ritika.thanks for the update.will wait for next update😉

Thank you dear
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: silla

Roflll hamaray beech tou aisa kuch hua hi nahi cant wait for next update please update soon :))

Thanks alottt
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Brilliant update
hahaha anant is so funny 🤣
oh so they succeeded
in their plan
let see for how long
their plan will work 😆
update soon dear

Thank you so much. Will continue soon
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
CONTINUE...
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At night, in bajpayee house all were having dinner. Anant was sitting beside ritika. Her phone which was on silent mode was ringing. Anant's eyes falls on the name displaying which shows ritika's name. Anant decided to add fuel in the fire
ANANT - ritika, tera phone araha he. Utha na
Ritika know that ranbir is calling but she was not interested in picking up the call. She looks disinterested
SUGANDHA - ritika, are utha na. Dekh to kiska he
ANANT - Ranbir he mom
Said Anant. Om and sugandha looks at ritika in confusion
RITIKA - let it be. I don't want to talk to him
Said ritika in anger. Anant smirk little
ANANT - tum dono ka jhagda to nahi hua na?
OM - Anant
Om stop him. He indicated Anant and sugandha to keep quiet
RITIKA - bhai sahi bol rahe he dad. Hamara jhagda hua he. And I am not in a mood to talk with him
Ritika goes from there in her room. Om and sugandha looks confused while Anant became happy
Here in Mishra house
RANBIR - 30 times
Ranbir throws his phone on bed where navya was sitting
RANBIR - 30 times I have called her. But wo mera phone utha hi nahi rahi
Navya smile lightly
NAVYA - Ranbir, she must be busy. Use tumhare alawa bohot se kam he
Navya tried to fuel his mind. He looks little disturb
RANBIR - kum se kum do min ke liye to bat kar sakti he na. I want to apologize her
Navya gets a shock. She gets up looking surprised
NAVYA - kya? Sorry.. Q
Ranbir moves towards her
RANBIR - Kal mene kuch jyada hi overreact kar diya. Mujhe uspe doubt nahi lena chahiye tha. Meri galati thi yar navi
Navya looks disappointed. She tried to convince him to not talk with ritika
NAVYA - par tu q sorry bolega! I mean teri galati thodi he
RANBIR - galati chahe kisi ki bhi ho navi. Ek kadam age badhne me koi problem nahi he
NAVYA - par tu q uske age piche kar raha he? Teri koi self respect nahi he kya? Tujhe tera ego nahi he kya?
Navya looks little tensed. Ranbir smile and goes aside near window. He looks outside while navya was watching him
RANBIR - pyar me ego nahi hota navi
Navya's expression changed from tensed to blank face. She listen to him
RANBIR - jhagda har ek couple ke bich hota he. Par apne ego ko piche rakh kar jo jhagda bhulkar age badhe, wahi saccha pyar hota he
Navya came near him
NAVYA - tujhe mene tere dil ki sunne ko kaha tha. Kya kaha tere dil ne?
Ranbir smile and looks at navya. She looks at him in questioning look
RANBIR - mere dil ne yahi kaha ki chahe ritika pure duniya se jhut bole but mujhse jhut kabhi nahi bolegi
Navya looks down while Ranbir continue
RANBIR - I trust her navi. Aur galati mujhse ye hui he ki mere dil me ye khyal aya and mujhe uspar doubt karna pada
Ranbir took a deep breath and again goes in thoughts. Navya looks at him and thought about their not so working plan
At midnight, Anant goes in kitchen to drink water. He rubs his sleepy eyes and was going back to his room when he looks ritika's room door open. He goes there to check if she is alright. He looks at her who was not sleeping rather sitting on floor leaning to bed. He gets confused and moves towards her
ANANT - ritu.. Tu soyi nahi?
Hearing him ritika wipes her tears
RITIKA - bhai wo.. Nind nahi arahi thi
Anant goes next to her and sits beside her
ANANT - Ranbir ke bare me soch rahi he?
Ritika smile sadly. She bends towards Anant and keep her head on his shoulder
RITIKA - I am missing him bhai
Anant looks sad that because of him, his lovely sister is sad
RITIKA - pata he bhai? Mene Ranbir se bohot jhagda kiya he. Par aaj tak wo mujhse kabhi naraz nahi hua. Aur aaj first time wo mujhe gussa hua he aur mene kya kiya? Use manana chodkar uspar gussa hogayi
She looks at Anant with teary eyes
RITIKA - I am so selfish na bhai
Anant looks at her. He wipes her tears.
ANANT - na hi meri behen selfish he aur na hi usne kuch galat kiya he
RITIKA - no bhai.. I am feeling guilty now. Mujhe Ranbir se sorry khena he
Anant looks at her in shock. Again their plan was backfiring them. He looks at her who was looking very sad and missing Ranbir. Anant keep his hand on her head while ritika hugs him and cried in his embrace
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Next day, Ranbir was talking on phone with navya as he was standing at the entrance of a coffee shop
RANBIR - I am waiting here only navi but where are you
NAVYA - tum phone rakho I will come. But don't go anywhere. Stay there only
Ranbir agreed to her and disconnected the call. He looked back to see ritika standing there. They both had an eyelock. Ritika comes towards him. And they both said together
BOTH- sorry
They smile looking at each other. Ranbir pulls her in a hug. Suddenly someone disturb them. They both broke the hug and looks at side where Anant and navya were standing looking at them
RANBIR - to aap dono ne ye sab decide kiya?
Navya smile lightly looking at Anant while he does the same
RITIKA - thank you so much bhai. Thank you navya
ANANT - ab ye sab thanks bolna chodo aur ek dusre ke sath time spend karo
NAVYA - and please no more fights
Navya warn them while Ranbir and ritika looks at each other and smile
ANANT - aur apne apne office se aaj chutti le lo.. Understand
NAVYA - aur ha. Rat ko bhi ghar ane ki koi jaldi nahi. Ache se enjoy karo
Ritika hug Anant while Ranbir does to navya
ANANT - to hum chale?
Said Anant looking at navya. For which she nodded
RANBIR - Are itni jaldi? Common let's have coffee
NAVYA - nahi baba. Hume kabab me haddi banne ka koi shok nahi he
All of them laugh and finally Anant and navya left from there while Ranbir and ritika looks at them going. Navya looks back at them and then at Anant
NAVYA - lo kar lo bat. Jhagda humne karaya aur sulah bhi humne hi karadi
Said navya getting disappointed
ANANT - what to do navya? Humne inka jhagda to kara diya tha but fir humse hi dekha nahi gaya
NAVYA - meri to kuch samajh nahi araha he
Suddenly her cell phone falls from her hand. Both Anant and navya bends to took it and in this process their hand touched. They both looks at each other
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
RAB NE MILAYA TUMHE
HOTO PE SAJAYA TUMHE
NAGME SUGAYA TUMHE
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
SABSE CHUPAYA TUMHE
SAPNA BANAYA TUMHE
NINDO ME BULAYA TUMHE
They were looking at each other lovingly and this was witness by Ranbir and ritika who were watching them from distance
RITIKA - kya tum bhi wahi soch rahe ho jo me soch rahi hu
Ranbir looks at her and smile. Both of them again looks at Anant and navya who were still lost in each other.
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" SOMEWHERE BETWEEN ALL OUR LAUGHS, LONG TALKS, STUPID LITTLE FIGHTS AND ALL OUR LAME JOKES, WE FELL IN LOVE... "
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Very very good update.now anya scenes

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