FF: TUM JO AAYE... Updated @ page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello again friends.. I have started this FF some time before. Unfortunately I lost the track and was not able to complete it. Hence I have decided to start it fresh. Hope you all like it same or more. Please encourage. Thank you
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MUMBAI...
A white car stop infront of a restaurant. A man (24) dressed in Grey color suit wearing black sunglasses comes out. He enters the restaurant and search for someone. When he finds her he took the glasses off. He is Ranbir Mishra. He moves towards the girl sitting on one of the table. He called her and she looks at him. She is Ritika Bajpayee (23) dressed in short skirt, modern and beautiful.
RITIKA - almost 2 hrs 40 mins late
She folded her hands and looks at him. He makes a baby face
RANBIR - sorry jaan
Ritika nodded in disbelief. They both sat there
RITIKA - kya Ranbir. Tumhare boss ko tum hi milte ho kya?
RANBIR - sorry baba. What to do, ek important meeting me phas gaya tha
They started having their coffee
RITIKA - Ranbir.. Aise hi hamesha late karoge to kaise chalega?
Said ritika seriously. Ranbir looks at her in confusion
RITIKA - waise hi hum bohot late he and isse pehele aur late hojaye, we have to do something.
Ranbir took a deep breath and holds ritika's hand.
RANBIR - me kya karu Ritz. Tumhare bhai hamare rishte ke liye tayar hi nahi he. I mean what's his problem? Honge wo Anant bajpayee CS of topmost company in Mumbai. But I am also the top software engineer of my company
Ranbir looks little angry
RITIKA - I know Ranbir. Aur tum to aise bol rahe ho ki sirf mere hi bhai ko problem he. Tumhari behen bhi kya kum he She also has lot of problems with me. Navya Mishra, interior designer working in GPS company
RANBIR - she doesn't have any problem. She is little upset with me. Mene use hamare bare me nahi bataya isliye wo naraz he
RITIKA - to mere bhai bhi isiliye naraz he. Choti behen hu me unki. He cares for me
RANBIR - ritika please understand. Me aur navya twins he. Bachpan se lekar aaj tak har ek bat humne ek dusre se share ki he. But when she got to know about our relationship she was so hurt
Ranbir looks sad. Ritika tried to console him.
RITIKA - we didn't do it intentionally jaan. Hum batane chahte the but sahi time nahi mila
RANBIR - I know. Humne kya socha tha aur kya horaha he. We thought our parents will get angry. Par unhe nahi hamare bhai behen ko problem he
RITIKA - Ranbir ab ye sab chodo. Hume ye sochna he ki ab un dono ko kaise manaye
Ranbir looks elsewhere thinking something while ritika also goes in thoughts
RITIKA - let's do one thing. Kal me bhai ko yaha lati hu aur tum navya ko le aao. Fir hum sab milkar bate sort out Kar lenge.
Ranbir looks at her tensed.
RANBIR - Are you sure?
RITIKA - ha baba. Abhi nahi to kabhi nahi
Wink ritika while Ranbir looks worried
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MARKET PLACE
A tall and handsome smart looking man enters from his car. He was dressed in black color suit and was talking on his cell phone searching for someone. He looks back and here he is, our hero, Anant bajpayee (26)
ANANT - yes Mr Singh. Me file lekar aagaya hu. Ok..
He took the file and started walking busy in his phone. From his front a beautiful girl wearing yellow chudidar suit was coming searching something in her purse. They both comes near each other without looking at front. And at the second moment they bang. She was about to fall but he catches her. Here she was, our heroine navya Mishra (24). They both look at each other
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
RAB NE MILAYA TUMHE
HOTO PE SAJAYA TUMHE
NAGME SUGAYA TUMHE
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
SABSE CHUPAYA TUMHE
SAPNA BANAYA TUMHE
NINDO ME BULAYA TUMHE
They were staring each other. Suddenly navya broke the eyelock and he makes her stand. She looks at him angrily.
NAVYA - oh hello Mr.. How dare you tum mjhse takraye?
ANANT - excuse me. Aap to aise bol rahi he jaise me jan kar takraya
NAVYA - why not.. I know very well. Tum jaise ladke ek mauka nahi chodte ladki se takrane ka. Dikhne me to sharif ho par...
ANANT - one minute
Anant inturpts her. They both look at each other angrily
ANANT - peheli bat to me sharif lagta nahi balki hu. Ek to mene aapko girne se bachaya aur aap mjhe hi bol rahi he
NAVYA - ha to dekh ke chalna chahiye na. Mobile me sar ghusa dete ho fir age piche ka dhyan hi nahi. Agar chalne ki tamiz nahi he na to ghar par bethna sikhiye
ANANT - agar bat karne ki tamiz nahi he to chup rehna sikhiye
They both look at each other in hatred. They left from opposite ways and looks at each other in anger...
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" Love at first sight may not happen always.. But love after fights can happen most frequently.. Let's see what's up to them.. "
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first will read and comment . But thanks alot for starting new one .missing anya very badly.love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I remember this story when u started long back.loved it continental soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganganavya

Me first will read and comment . But thanks alot for starting new one .missing anya very badly.love u

Me too missing our anya yar.. Well thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganganavya

I remember this story when u started long back.loved it continental soon

Thanks dear.. Surely will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Loved it..cont soon :)

Thanks dear.. And I have started working on your topic.. Will definitely try to write something about it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i remember this ff.. thank you so much for starting this ff again... continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JutheeAlam

i remember this ff.. thank you so much for starting this ff again... continue soon..

Welcome dear. And thanks to you too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Am really glad that you
restarted this ff coz i love
this concept excited to read ahead
plz update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Am really glad that you
restarted this ff coz i love
this concept excited to read ahead
plz update soon dear

Thank you so much

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