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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks asihaseen and Neha375. Means a lot!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmgfan


@bold...I hope!😃It all depends on the brain function.😛


Agreed.. Even i had that problem after i started writing my RS.. 😳

My brain used to get stuck dreamin about our Anya 😆
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Agreed.. Even i had that problem after i started writing my RS..😳

My brain used to get stuck dreamin about our Anya😆


LOL yeah. I know the plot, but I dunno how to proceed in words. LOL. Hope God stuffs something good in my brain.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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how did I miss this??!😲Meethi...do I even have to say this was awesome??!👏
U should seriously consider writing FFs,that is If time permits...!😊
absolutely loved this...only If CVs showed us this!😒If they didnt know how to handle the track..they might have as well asked us...we would have done a better job!I cant curse them enough for ruining it for us...had they shown us something like this..Im sure Navya would still have been on air!😭
and..Grr.U had to stop it der,didnt U??!Update it ASAP..I cant wait ji!!😃
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Thanks malini6941, vanshu90, richa_shamya, anamika_0
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Originally posted by: --Sapphire--

how did I miss this??!😲Meethi...do I even have to say this was awesome??!👏

U should seriously consider writing FFs,that is If time permits...!😊
absolutelyloved this...only If CVs showed us this!😒If they didnt know how to handle the track..they might have as well asked us...we would have done a better job!I cant curse them enough for ruining it for us...had they shown us something like this..Im sure Navya would still have been on air!😭
and..Grr.U had to stop it der,didnt U??!Update it ASAP..I cant wait ji!!😃


Aww!! *blushes*😳Thanks Neels!! This means a lot to me😃I was seriously bored that day, and I thought I should give this a try. Yup, Kanpur track ended disastrously. Let's see if I can sudharo-fy it😆Time does not permit me most of the times😲but I will try to update soon.


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Hi guys! 😊I am overwhelmed by your response. I do not know how to thank you guys for such a warm response. Thank you, everybody!! This really means a lot to me. I am back with part 2 of this story. Could not take it much forward. It is purely Anya based. 😉I hope you guys like it.So sit back, and get reading!!



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Part 2



Navya could not believe what she saw. Standing in front of her was the man she loved, the one without whom she could not live. She did not know how to react. She did not know if she had to laugh or cry. She was totally lost in his hazel brown eyes. And before she knew it, Anant had pulled her behind the curtains, into his arms. He was thrilled to bits to see her, and involuntarily showered her with a hundred wet kisses, all over her face. All Navya could do, was blush. She felt like she was in heaven. Time had literally stopped for the two lovebirds.


"Anant, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Tum kaise ho? Tum toh Dilli gaye the na? Tumhari behen ki shaadi mein? Tum theek ho na?" Navya went on and on, without a pause. "Navya, Navya, NAVYA!! Kya kar rahi ho yaar? Itne saare sawaal pooch rahi ho? Main jawab kaise dunga?" Anant giggled. "Main abhi pahuncha hoon, apni poori fauj ke saath, meri didi ki shaadi hai yaar" "Par Ritz ne kaha tha ki tum Dilli gaye ho?" Navya was confused, and Anant burst out laughing. Navya smiled. "Ab bas has rahi ho, kuch nahi bol rahi ho?" Anant questioned. "Tumhi ne to kaha ki main bahut sawaal kar rahi hoon" She crossed her arms and turned away. "Arre meri Navya, char haftey baad mila hoon tumse, tumhe aisa rootha hua dekhne keliye thode hi. Tum kaho toh main wapas chala jaaon?" He said, disappointed. "Nahi, kabhi nahi!" Navya ran into his arms once again. "Tum mujhe ab kabhi nahi chodke jaaoge" She said, almost sobbing. "Chodke tum mujhe gayi thi, remember?" Anant snapped back. But he could not bear to see her sobbing. "Arre, theek hai baba, hum ab kabhi bhi ek doosre se alag nahi honge, I promise! Accha ab ye batao Navya, tum kaisi ho? Theek ho na?" Anant's four-week long worries seemed to surface again. "Kaise ho sakti hoon, tumhare bina? Haan, lekin ab main bilkul theek hoon!" Navya beamed with happiness as she said this, and Anant was happy to see her smile.


Navya remembered their situation and said "Anant, maa ko lagta hai ki hum alag ho gaye hain, aur main tumhe poori tarah se bhool chuki hoon. Par maine maa ko kuch nahi bataya. Pehle toh mujhe laga ki mujhe unke bataye raaste par chalna chahiye. Par ab nahi! Main nahi reh sakti tumhare bina, cheh hafte nahi, ek hafta nahi, ek din nahi, ek pal bhi nahi. Main tumhare bina mar jaaongi Anant." Anant placed his finger on her lips. "Dubara aise kehne ki jurrat bhi mat karna. Main tumhe kho nahi sakta Navya, kabhi nahi!" Navya went on "Please mujhe yahan se le chalo Anant, sab se door, jahan sirf tum aur main honge, aur koi nahi, koi nahi" Navya could bear it no longer. She started weeping, bringing out all her pent up emotions and sorrows, that she had hidden from the world for the past four weeks.


Anant wiped her tears and cupped her face. "Navya, yahan dekho, meri aankhon mein. Kya tumhe mujh pe bharosa hai?" Navya nodded. "Toh phir, mujhe koi dar nahi. Tum dekhna Navya, hamara pyaar zaroor jeetega" Anant said with a sparkle in his eyes. "Kaise hoga Anant?" Navya was worried. "Navya, abhi tumhari maa ko vaise hi sochne do. Jaise hamare beech mein kuch nahi hai. Humein sambhalke rehna hoga. Kuch dino keliye sab aise hi chalne do, aur jab sahi waqt aayega, toh main khud aaonga tumhare papa se tumhara haath maangne." Navya was overwhelmed. She kissed him on the cheek.


"Oye hoye, meri Navya kanpur aake badi smart ho gayi hai, kya baat hai" Anant said cheekily. Navya turned red. "Accha suno, main yahaan 2 hafton keliye ruk raha hoon, didi ke ghar. Baba ne kaha hai ki do hafton keliye yahan rukna hai jab tak chuttiyan khatam nahi hoti, aur mujhe chachaji se kaam seekhna hai. Ise mini-internship hi samajhlo! Vaise bhi shaadi parso hain, toh uske baad do hafton keliye main yahin ruka hoon, tumhare paas!" Navya could not believe it. "ANANTTT!!! Tum yaha rukoge? Do hafto keliye? WOW!! Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha. Mujhe bhi toh yahin rehna hai. Maa ne pehle kaha tha ki shaadi ke baad woh sab mujhe Mumbai wapas leke jayenge, par phir kahan ki main poori cheh hafte yahin ruk jaaon, jab talk college shuru nahi hota. Main uss din bahut royi thi, par ab nahi!!" She was on cloud nine.


"Anant, chalo abhi mujhe jaana hoga. Maa mujhe dhoondh rahi hogi." Navya realized that she was missing from the wedding scene for quite long now, and thought she should get going. But Anant was in no mood to let go of her . "Thodi der aur Navya, please! Abhi toh mile hain" Anant complained. Navya pulled his cheeks and went "Aww! Sorry mister! Better luck next time" She hit him on the arm and peeped out of the curtains when she saw Meeta heading towards her.


Navya was petrified.


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That's all for now guys. I could come up with only this, right now. I hope you guys enjoyed it. I dunno when I can update next, coz' I have these boring night shifts and long day duties. Will try to continue soon. Thank you for your patience.Likes/ dislikes/ comments are welcome.


Meethi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a nice update...do continue...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Meethi.. loved it..

Loved this line ..

"Oye hoye, meri Navya kanpur aake badi smart ho gayi hai, kya baat hai" 😆 😳

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