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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
haaai meri writer ji, bahut bahut bahut acha tha šŸ‘šŸ‘
it is really a gud start and please continue it, eagerly waiting what will happen at college for navya.
all the intro was awesome, do continue writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
really nice update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
very nice, eagerly waiting for next part update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Bilkul wow!
ARROGANCE.. aah m lovin it :))
NEEtha.. please NAvya ko inna silly mat show karo :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
😊 I'm loving the new storyline, entirely different Navya,
As far as i am concerened, While reading this, the innocent,lovely face f navya is coming into mind..
bt... Th starting is superb, i am eagerly waiting for the remaining 😊😊😊
Tnx a alot for being in touch with them again ... :) :) :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
dis was superb,di plzz do update the nxt part fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Update the next soon pleeease
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
CHAPTER 2

on her way to college the only thing tat navya did was bashing anant..she finally
reached college..

navya:(to herself)well navya..its valentine's day aur uss sadoo ke wajah se apna
mood mat kharab kar..u knw..its ur day today..so be happy..usse ek nightmare
samajkar bhool jao..

sayin ths she gt down frm her car..

ritz:hey navya..
navya:hii...
appy:woow navya hamesha ki tarah u luk awesome n super hot..
navya:well thanx appy..waise woow its so amazin feel ..love..
appy:haan haan..aaj toh koi tumhare liye bohut hi special cheeze karega..
navya:ya..woh toh hai..
ritz:pat tumhe itni der kaise ho gai??
navya:uff..pooch mat yaar..arrghh!!
ritz:kyu kya hua??
navya:ek psyco mil gaya tha..
appy:kya..usne kuch kiya toh nahi..
navya:gosh appy..mera matlab ek arrogant ladka mil gaya tha..uske wajah se dero
ho gayi..
ritz:arre teek teek bata kya hua??

*flashback*

navya tld abt the flooded road..so she tuk a shortcut..ther hw she met anant..n
their not so gud convo n everythin..

*flashback end*

appy:hmm tere description se toh yahi lagtha hai ki..woh angry young man ki tarah
hai..
navya:right
appy:matlab handsome bhi hoga..nai??
navya:hmm..k tha handsome..(dreamy mode)..par uthna bhi nahi..(back frm
dreamland):P
navya:chodo uske baare main lets go..

they start walkin towards the college..one by oone all the guys in the college
come n giv roses to navya..she being very proud of herself accepted all the roses
she gt..she had so many roses in her hand it was hard fr her to manage..so she
shared it with appy n ritz too..suddenly she heard a voice in the bg..

hey beautiful..

navya stopped n a smile craved on her lips..

navya:hey adi..
adi:hi gorgeous..ths is fr u..

he handed over a bunch of roses..it had 100 red roses in it..n a small gift
box..she opened the gift box and it had a beautiful silver chain wit a hear
shaped pendant..witten AN in it..

navya:aww adi ur the best..thank u soo much..
adi:come on sweet heart yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai..u knw hw much i love u..
navya:(hugged him)i knw..i love u too..

appy n ritz covo:

appy:hayye yaar..adi kitna pyaar kartha hai na navya se..she is soo lucky..
ritz:come on appy..tujhe sach main lagtha hai..adi navya se pyaar kartha hai..
appy:haan..agar nahi kartha toh uske liye itne costly gifts sab kyun lata..
ritz:appy..pyaar jathane ke liye na..mehenge gifts ki nahi.sirf pyaar aur saat ki
zaroorat hai...aur yeh tu bhi acche tarah se janthi hai..adi sirf navya ke saat
isiliye hai kyunki she is the hottest gal in the col..
appy:may be tu bhi sahi hai..par navya usse pyaar karthi hai yaar..
ritz:i knw..woh serious hai adi ko lekar..but..
appy:chodna..uski life hai yaar..let her decide..
ritz:k..

anant's office:

anant just cmpleted a meetin..but his mood was kinda off n his best friend cum
his cousin ranbir noticed it..

ranbir:kya hua..upset kyun lag raha hai..
anant:no..m alright..
ranbir:meetin sab acche se hua...par jab se tu aya hai..
anant:din accha tabhi jatha hai jab uski shuruwaad acchi ho..aur
ranbir:k..matlab kuch hua aaj subah??
anant:ek sarfiri ladki mili thi..(angry mode)
ranbir:(excited)kya..tu aur ladki..
anant:wat rubbish..woh pagal thi..
ranbir:(murmurin)tujhe toh duniya ki har ladki pagal hi dikhthi hai..
anant:tune kuch kaha??
ranbir:huh..nai..nai..kuch nahi..tu batana exactly kya hua??

*flashback*

anant tld abt the landslide in the shortcut road...ther hw he met navya..n their
not so gud convo n everythin..

*flashback end*

ranbir:navya??nice name..
anant:naam main kya rakha hai..she had no manners yaar..nonsense akal toh usse
pehle nahi..i hate such gals jo apna dimaag museum main rakhar ghoomthi hai..
ranbir:k yaar cool down..ho jatha hai kabhi kabhi..itna kyun uske baare main soch
raha hai..sach bata..acchi lagi kya..??(teasin)
anant:(as usual angry moden yelled at top of his voice)tera dimaag kharab ho gaya
hai ranbir..
ranbir:k yaar sorry..m sorry..itna kyun gussa hota hai..
anant:(senti)m sorry yaar..u knw na..mujhe yeh sab baatein acche nahi lagthe..i
hate all thse relationships..yeh pyaar vyaar..
ranbir:dekh yaar anant..i knw tumhara surroundin he aisa raha..jis wajah se tum
aise bane ho anant..but its life bro..zindagi ko mauka de fir se jeene ka..
anant:kehna asaan hai ranbir..but mere liye bohut mushkil hai..bachpan se mom dad
ko ladthe dekha..pyaar to door..i dont even knw still ki unhone shaadi kyun
ki..life sucks..aur love..yeh relationships mere liye nahi hai..
ranbir:(mind voice)ek din ayega anant jab tum pyaar ko mehsoos karoge aur jiyoge
bhi m sure..
ranbir:k teek hai..ab bhool jao woh sab baatein..aaj city centre mall main party
hai..valentine party wahan chalthe hai..
anant:valentine party...main kya karu wahan akar..
ranbir:come on yaar..meri bhi koi gf nahi hai..but valentine's party main toh ja
hi sakthe hai..chal maza ayega..aur tera mood bbhi teek rahega..
anant:accha k..tere liye main chal raha hu..
ranbit:tats like ma buddy..teek hai shaam ko chalte hai k..??
anant:yeah..

~~~CHAPTER 2 END~~~

K guys hope u all like it..do hit the like button n do comment..plss i need ur
views too..n ya one more gud news to share wit u all..i got ma date of joinin frm
hp..its on august..so m super happy..so i updated soon..love u all..well one more thing guys..in ths navya's character seems a litl childish coz she is still a col gal..n yet her character has to grow..but anant is matured n responsible guy..so his characterisation is quite different k..
Thank u
**Neethu**
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Wow Neetha awwwšŸ‘

lovely updatešŸ‘

Edited by Abommi - 13 years ago
-Divya.S- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
firstly congo 4 ua new job dea. šŸ¤— party toh banti hai yar.. lovely awwsome update dea.. loved it to d core.. btw y ua nt updating d heading? šŸ˜•
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago

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