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Posted: 13 years ago
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story line, supporting characters information all are interesting,
Edited by malini6941 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Wow Neetha Excellent jobšŸ‘

i loved there convo 😃

Anant:haan..bolo kya keh rahi thi tum??
navya:yahi..ki tumhara dimaag teek hai ki nahi??
anant:tum jis tarah se baat kar rahi ho..isse toh yeh lagtha hai ki..tumhari akal
ghaas chaarne gayi hai..
navya:(super angry)wat??hello mister..tum nahi jante tum kisse baat kar rahe
ho...
anant:oh..i really dont wanna knw..
navya:luk m nt interested to get into arguments so apni car hatao..n mujhe jaane
do..
anant:nahi hata saktha..
navya:(she gets total pisd..she walks closer to him)i said car hatao ryt nw..
anant:(he steps more closer to her..n nw her back is stickin the car n anant
leanin on her..n starightly lukin into her eyes..)firstly..apni yeh do badi badi
ankhon ko na teek se kholo..aur dekho..(he is bitin his lips in anger..u knw
attitude kinda talk)
navya:(she had never seen such amazin pair of eyes ever in her life)huh??
anant:coz of landslide raasta kharab ho gaya hai..n u cant drive further..(still
attitude)
navya:(luks at the road..pushes him away)soo..toh..tum keh sakthe the na..main
khamaka itni rude nahi hoti..
anant:tumne mujhe baat karne ka mauka hi kaha diya..miss..watever..
navya:(poutin)navya..mera naam navya mishra hai..gt it??
anant:well m nt interested..navya mishra ho ya jhansi ki rani..(n turns his face)
navya:(whining)well..ahh m losin ma temper..dekho well..i dont wanna fight k..tum
pls apni gadi hatao..
anant:tum kya apna brain ghar par chodkar ati ho??
navya:wat do u mean??
anant:rastha age kharab hai..so hume gadi peeche lena hai..toh tumhari gadi mere
raaste main hai..so u ll hav to back out first..
navya:(patch)oh..huh..ya..k..k..
anant:(again steps closer to her)apna dimag na istemal kiya karo..
navya:(lukin into his deep eyes)yaa..


Simply SuperbšŸ‘

update soon...šŸ˜

Edited by Abommi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Wow beautiful character sketch...waiting to read 1st part. Thanks for pm neetha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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neetha u updated it, wah, bt y dint u updated d title yar? coming to update wah wah wah wah what a start, hats off dea.. excellent mind blowing start.. loved each and every bit of it.. realy lacking words yar.. wel i must say firstly it was dificult to imagin navya lik tht but nw its alri8.. i can absolutely imagin anya like that.. cant wait 4 next update dea.. get wel soon..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hope you are fine now, stay well dear and yes what a mind blowing start, loved the way they both met, loved their attitude filled convos. Loved every bit of it, waiting enthusiastically for the upcoming chapters.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Hpe u r fyn nw! Awesome update luvd it so much, hpe u update da nxt chap soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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šŸ‘ wow!!! its amazing Neetha ,really interesting !!! kya entry maara hai hero ne !!! can't wait for the next update and hope you are ok now
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
amazing start dear:) Love this new avatar of Anant n Navya:) Keep updating soon :) being waiting fr loong fr this to start:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
superb neetha šŸ‘ update it soonšŸ˜›
Edited by rashi_anya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hey Neeta superb beginning...Your fantastic writer yaar luved ur ff and this ss looks really promising.Can't wait for the next chapter. šŸ˜›

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