RS: ek hi guzarish hai...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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as we know ub,bd r trying 2 seperate anya. Navya tries 2 fail their plan. With d almonds incident anant comes 2 know d truth...

Anant standing beside window. His right arm on d wall. His eyes r firing red by anger. He is that much angry that if bd,ua comes b4 him now,he will kill them. He turns his face 2 navya. Cs she is crying hiding her face in her knees. He realises he should make navya feel easy. He somehow overcomes his angry look. Comes 2 her,sits b4 her. Lifts her face up by own hand. Cs her eyes have bcome distend by crying. He wipes her tears. Then holding her hand says..

A: tum keu row rahi hoo??
N: anant...mujhe bahot bura lag rahi hai
A: tumhe keu bura lag rahi hai? Jo kuch v hua uch mei tumhari koi galti nahi hai..
N: mujhe bura lag rahi hai keuki woh log mujhse meri pyar ko alag karna chata hai..
A: kar paya kiya? Mein aca hone nahi dunga. Hum donoko bhagwan v alag nahi kar sakta. Humhara rishta hamhara pyar se bani hai. Iss rishte ko torna na munkin hai..

navya cries out. She hugs him. Places her head on his chest. Till now anant was trying 2 hide his tears. But now he couldn't control it. Tears comes out of his eye
N: kavi v mujhse dur mat jana. Agar kavi mein koi galti karoon toh mujhe bahot datna..lekin dur mat jana...mein ji nahi paungi..
A: arey pagal ladki...tumse dur kaha jaunga mein. Mujh mei utna himmat nahi hai k tumhari pyar ko chodke dur chala jaoon. I love u so much...
N: mujhe bahot dar lag rahi hai...agar kavi baba,bd hum donoko alag karde toh..

anant wipes his tears with 1 hand. Then lifts her face up. Lookin in her eyes says..
A: yaad hai...tumhari maa tumhe kanpur bejhke hum dono ko alag kane ki kousis ki thi. Kar payi kiya? Hum avi v sath hai na..
smile comes on navya's face..
A: tab hum dono lovers the. Aur aab hum dono pati patni hai. Humhara rishta..pyar aur v jada gehera aur majbut hai. Agar baba,bd lakh kousis kare phir v humhe alag nahi kar payega..
a sweet smile comes on navya's teary face. She hugs him tightly..
A: baba,bd ko kiya lagta hai,tumse dur rehkar mein bahot khush rahunga?? woh logoko yeh pata nahi hai k anant-navya doo alag insaan jarur hai,leking dono ka jaan ek hai. Jabse navya anant ke jindegi mei ayi hai,tabse anant ka dil sirf aur sirf navya ki liye dhadakta hai. Agar iss dil ko navya ki dil se dur kiya jaye toh. . .dhadakna band ho jayega
navya quickly lifts her face up. Stops anant 4m saying more by putting her finger on his lips..
N: khabardar agar ace baat kiya toh. Tumhe mei pehle v bolchuki hoo...tumhara dil mere paas hai. Agar uch dil dhadakna band kar dega toh. . .navya maar jayegi
tears comes in anant's eye hearing this. He holds navya in his arms tightly. Both remains silent 4 a moment. Then...
A: janti hoo. . .mein hamesha ek swapna dekhta hoon. Mei mere navya ko koi aca desh mei le geya...jaha humhe koi nahi pehchanta hai. Sari duniya milkar v humhe dhund nahi payega. Jaha hum dono apne jindegi apne tarike se ji chakta hoon...koi rules nai. Woh desh jaha jab v hum dono ek dusre ki akhon mei dekhenge...tab sirf khusiya aur pyar dekhne ko milega. Na hoga koi asu na hoga koi dar. . . . . .kash mein tumhe uch desh mei le ja pata..
navya holds anant's face in her hands. Then smilingly says..
N: aca desh toh sirf heaven mei ho sakta hai. Aur kisne kaha tum mujhe uch desh mei nahi leke aye hoo??. . . Jab jab tum mere pach hote ho..sath hote ho,woh sari pal heaven se v kahi jada khubsurat hoti hai. Bach tumse ek hi guzarish hai. . .iss heaven ko mujhse dur mat jane dena
anant with a smile kisses her 4head. Then says..
A: janti hoo...tum ek bahot bari galti kiye hoo.
N: galti? Keca galti?
A: tumhari galti yeh hai ki...tum mere jindegi mei ayi hoo. Aur mujhe itna pyar diye hoo..itna pyar diye hoo k aab iss pyaar bina ek din v guzarna muskil hai. Iss liye mere v ek guzarish hai tumse. . . .hamesha acehi pyar karte rehna.

navya with a sweet smile kisses his cheeks. Anant also kisses her 4head,cheeks. Then both lays down on bed. Anant again kisses her. Then he softly touches her lips with his lips. Navya blushingly closes eye. They starts feeling each others breath...

At morning navya gets up 1st. Opening eyes she cs anant's face. He is holding her hand in sleep. Smile comes on her face and tears in eye. She 4gets d fear of losing anant that was hurting her so hard till last night. She places her head on anant's chest. And softly says...
I LOVE U SO MUCH
Edited by Sagar_Minhaz - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good .. nice update ... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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realy nice update dear !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow beautiful rs dear...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AditiReddy1

too good .. nice update ...👏


thanx dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful..👏👏👏👏👏..the emotions are very welll portrayed..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishwarjya

Wonderful..👏..the emotions are very welll portrayed..⭐️


thanx a lot dear:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...all the RS writers are sooopperb writers..amazing writing skills...gr8 work guyss...keep writing..
VIMAL.SM thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice post.Loved Anya conversation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing really no one can live with out each other.

love you anya/shamya

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