*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54)

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

This FF was continued for all of my friends, and all those readers who PMd me, and all those people who made accounts JUST to PM me and tell me not to discontinue this! I couldn't disappoint so many people, God wouldn't forgive me! And thank you so much for liking the chapter, and all the love you all have showered!

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@unknown2341

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Wow!!!! ritchelle...amazing update dear...loved the way u have written the AnYa cute scenes and their feelings...beautiful dear... 👏👏👏👏.Keep writing.. ⭐️⭐️waiting for next chapter...😃

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Reshmi

@-Reshmi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Ritch, another awesome chapter...🤗🤗🤗 for you for presenting such a beautiful proposal...I wish the real proposal was ultra romantic like you wrote...The CVs ruined the scene giving unnecessary screen space to the kabab mein haddis...Forward the FF to our director Vivek Behl...Let him get an idea how to handle romantic scenes...

Great going...Meeta maa to spot Majnu...!!! I know that you will make it interesting...Cant wait for the next chapter😍...

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Thanks Yamini!

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

@Reshmi- Thanks hun! IMO, a proposal is a very intimate scene, where no one else should be there. While it was very brave and romantic of Anant to propose to Navya in front of the whole world, I would have preferred it if it was more intimate and private, kinda adds to the romance and chemistry naa? Next chapter will be all wedding masti, and *spoilers* the actual Meeta-Anant confrontation won't happen until they reach Mumbai! And LOL, if you guys wanna send this fic to the CVs, be my guest! Just acknowledge me in it!

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supria

@supria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

ritchelle...this was a beautiful Anya moment...ananth feeding navya whose hands are full of mehendi n he getting khaandani kangan...them on the swing n ...hands across waist, head resting on shoulder...uve transported me to Anya dreamland right at the start of my working day!!! n here we have the show where i wait only to see them togther in one frame..leave alone holding hands...navya to has almost stopped going anywhere near ananth in the show...so im overjoyed visualising ur mehendi wali scene...word by word...great detailing n a writing superb style ...👏 👏looking forward to chapter 10...wish the cvs had such scenes in the early days of anya..all wasted on silly family , sagun n kanpur drama!!!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Ritch darling 🤗

Awesome, awesome awesome. Lovely chapter yet again. 👏 👏

How I wish we had really seen this romantic proposal in the show. The old CVs had completely ruined the romantic effect by having the proposal in the silly canteen with the whole college in tow.

How I wish, they had shown something similar to what you've written, phir toh baat ban jaati. 😆 And yes, it is super nice to see a romantic Navya in your FF at least, varna we know what happens in real na 😔 Chalo tumne humara yeh sapna pura kar diya. 😆

Awesome story, waiting for the next chapter, hope Meeta won't scare Anant like in the show. 😆

Keep writing dear, and YOU ROCK!!!

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Thank you Supria! Well, I actually wanted him to give Navya a promise ring, but that culture is not so well versed in India, so I went along with the cliched khandaani kangan! Glad to know you liked it, I'm trying to put in romance and drama, so the fic seems realistic! Thanks for the appreciation!

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Geeta! 🤗 Thank you so much for liking the fic! Well, I wanted Navya to be a bit more confident and mature, cause in my fic, the relationship has made her mature and sensible, which is why she's not cringing away from Anant! I too wish we got such scenes in the actual show, and since we couldn't get such stuff, I put it in my fic! Thanks for the appreciation, means a lot!

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shanukit007

@shanukit007

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Hmmm...

Anant Proposing Navya in Kanpur Itself & Presenting Khandani bangals to her...

Good Going & Nice work...

Waiting for d next one to upload...

P.S: It is good to see that U r finally back wid a big bang, Hope u will continue it forever...