kuch ankahi..Navya ki zubani.updated page 20... - Page 12

Originally posted by: sajni786

Urmi...U really are talented...and must say...by God's grace gifted as well...
Shayari is not something anyone can do anytime...it takes a beating heart and flowing emotions to even give the feelings a covering of words...And just by the way u write...I can tell that u have a heart of a lover who have experienced the depths of this ocean called love...

Simply outstanding sweets 👏

Hey Shilpa..thank you so much for your kind words...you are yourself so talented, and i adore your writing so much, that i am really happy to read your comments...and I must say..you were able to peep into my heart thru my words..not everybody can do that...

Originally posted by: mridula.shome

Urmi, Urmi, Urmi I can't express how much I liked it.
U guys are simply blessed I must say. Could feel their hearts yet again. I am just switching between ur lines and the clips. Perfect to the T. Added to my fav list.
Keep going.

Hey Mridula( i think that is you name..pls correct me if i am worng)...thank you for such kind words dear...I am glad you liked my work...your comments means a lot to me..thank you

Originally posted by: Love_Anant

wow urmi di...gr8 wrk huh...

Hey Juhi..thank you for your sweet reply dear...

Originally posted by: harini2010

wow amazing ...nice post👏👏👏👏 ...loved each and every line ...doz words which anant and navya cldnt speak up ...ur navya ki zubani did dat😉😉😉 ...m glad v r havin such talented members in diz forum ...😃😃😃

keep posting wld love to read more

Hey harini..thank you for appreciating my work..i am glad i was able to justify ANYA silent convo...

The poem is very well written.👏👏👏
I think there is some magic in your pen (I mean keyboard).
Keep writing di.

Originally posted by: supria

hi urmi...u r one star writer⭐️ ⭐️.👏..first of all i had to wipe away the tears n read each line more than once...then had a YT window n looked at the entire AnYa part thru ur eyes...simply awesome...n how perfectly u ended it...just as beautiully the cvs n shaheer brought out ananth's soul going away from him ...u rock n pls do keep writing...this forum is getting better n better by the day...such talented writers...i just keep wishing the cvs n the stars of navya come back here n read how much they r inspiring people...three sheers n keep updating...these lines gives us the hope...that we dont have to see them separate for long...beautiful words!

Apna dil tumhare pass chode jaa rahi hun,

Usse apne pyar se sambhal ke rakhna,

Main bhi tumhare dil ko bade jaatan se apne paas rakhungi'

Aur hamare Milan ki aas main har ek pal guzardungi..

Wo bhi to yehi kehraha tha mujhse ki,

Main bhi tumhare lautneka intezaar karunga

haan hum phirse milenge, mujhe yakeen hai'

Hey Supria..i am obliged by your kind words dear..thank you so much for all the encouragement and inspiration..yes..i had to end it with the promise of togetherness, because that is waht Anya have given each other and that is what even we wish for ANYA..that they be together forever...

Urmi - What a splendid post. I almost had tears reading the post. COuld and am still feeling the pain. VERY WELL Written.

Originally posted by: TheRoopsy

you are really blessed to pen down emotions so beautifully...emotional posts mein toh none can beat you di...loved it as always and the moment when navya realizes his presence and their heart-heart talk has been expressed by you in an awesome manner...👏

Aww.rropsy thank you so much dear...I am touched by your reply.but there are many talented writers like shilpa ,tanu and geeta..who make me cry too..so I have to still get better i guess..but that was so sweet of you...

Originally posted by: X-xNishax-X

Urmi, I loved it! Much like everyone else also because it truly is magnificent how you've put emotions into words... All that was unsaid from their mouth but was spoken through their eyes and their expressions was amazingly written by you! I don't really know how to pick my favourite lines from your piece like everyone else because I loved it all!! But the way you've written the emotions into words unspoken between Anya in the epi... well quite simply I'm left speechless because I felt it all!

Sorry I couldn't reply to your other posts withyour other written work, but I was away for a while and have only just come back- but I'll be sure to read them too and leave a response! But definitely keep writing more and more because it's lovely to see your beautiful written portrayal of an epi. (: Oh and by the way, best of luck for your other two exams! (: If they're anything related to writing, I'm sure you'll ace it after seeing you can write like this! (:

Hey Nisha..thank you so much for your kind and encouraging reply...it means a lot to me...I am glad my words were abel to touch you and you were abel to feel Anya's silent convo thru my words..

Originally posted by: ashakd

Urmi, after such a episode, was sure u would put up a poem. Inspite of the exams, u managed to pen this down, is gr8. U have summarised it so well, there is nothing left to add. Loved it and keep writting more. 👏

PS: if u keep writing like this within a few months, u will make me expert in hindi.

Hey Asha..you know me so well😊..yes even exams couldnt stop me from penning down my emotions after such an heartrendering post...thank you for liking my poem and for your kind words dear..it means a lot..