kuch ankahi..Navya ki zubani.updated page 20... - Page 14

Originally posted by: chucklebuddy

awesome dii... reli enjoyed it to bits though the epi was an emotional tear jerker.. i haven't watched the epi.. just caught up with the written updates.. still, i could feel the pain beautifully portrayed in the scenes...

keep 'em coming...

Originally posted by: zara990

Great post urmi👏. Loved every lines in this poem.

Originally posted by: trisha17

r u a poet????????????,u write so well that i cant express in words,last 3 lines r very touching👏

Originally posted by: spdp

You write beautifully Urmi,

love reading it! 😊 Keep it coming!

(does yr hubby know of this skill of yrs?! He shud be real proud!)

Originally posted by: Reshmi_AnYa

Urmi..beautiful again...ur words made me emotional...it was soo touching..could feel the pain on the lines...keep posting...

Originally posted by: barbie2011

Hey All;

Todays epi..was a very emotionaland tear jerker..everybody did a increible job..bu wah lingers around is the love and the pain between the cutest couple ever ANYA..yes they are so close to reality that it is difficult to acept that they are mere characters of the silver screen... so true!! As everybody todays epi..touched me deep down and gere i am tryign to portay some of the emotions in my lines..there were many emotions at play today that i was having difficulty finding words to say it all..but have tried to capture a little bit of essence of that silent conve and the good bye...i am not sure abt my own lines today, te emotion inside me are so high,that i dont know where to start and whatto say...but i have made an lame attempt..I hope you guys enjoy it..

Khud ko sambhalkar, apne aansoons pochkar

Laut hi rahi thi main,

Ki achanak mare kadam ruk gaye,

Uski saanso ki garmi ka ehssas ho raha tha jaise..

Jaise wo yahin kahi tha, mere ass pass,

Aur jaise hi maine mud kar dekha to haan,

Wo yahin tha, bilkul mere samne,

Is lamhe se jitna dur bhag rhi thi main,

Sach mano to usse bhi jyada besabri se intezaar tha mujhe..

Jaane se pehle ek baar phir uska chehra dekhneka,

Shayad is judai ke dard ko sehne main,

aur thodi himmat mil gayi mujhko,

Hum dono ke dil main ek hi sa dard tha, judai ka..

Aur waqt se ek hi shikayat'

Hamare shabado ne bhi hamara saath choddiya tha shayad,

Par aankhon ne hamari ye mushkil bhi aasan kar di..

Wo jaise keh rah thi ekdusre se..

Aakhir main tumhe jaane se pehle ekbaar dekh hi paya..

Main bhi to tumhara chehra dekhne ke liye betab thi..

Kyun kyun mujhse itni badi baat chupayi,

Kya itna bhi jaan ne ka haq nahi tha mujhe?

Main janti hun, maine tumhara dil dukhaya hai,

Par main kya karti,

Kaise batati tumhe ki tumhari zindagi tumse dur jaa rahi hai,

Kaise batati ki hum kal parso nahi,

Ab bahot dino tak mil nahi paayenge..

Aur batane ke baad kya main khud ko sambhal pati?

Nahin,Tutkar bikhar jaati main,

Tumhe dukh pahochnae ki himmat nahi thi mujhme..

Kya tum mujhe maaf nahi kar sakte..

Nahi navya nahi..aisa mat kaho,

Mujhe tumse koi shikayat nahi hai..

Mujhe khush rakhne ke liye tumne saare gam khud hi seh liye,

Ab isse jyada kya kahun tumse..

Bus yehin ki main tumhare bina nahi reh sakta..

Main bhi kahan reh paungi tumhare bina..

Magar, hume is imtehaan se guzarna hi hoga,

Tumhare pyar ki yaadoon ko apne saath le jaa rahi hun.

Aur tumhara muskurata chehra bhi nazron main band kar liya hai maine..

Usne pocha;

Kya mujhe tumhara muskurata chehra apne saath lejaane ka haq nahi hai?

Apne aansu rokkar, humne phir ek bar muskura diya.

Par yekhushi, kuch hi pal hamare chehre par tik paayi,

judaai ka gam phi se hamari aankhon mai bhar hi aaaya,

Bus unhi yaadon aur muskurahat ke saath hume rehna hoga..

Par mujhse wada karo tum apna khyal rakhoge,

Apna dil tumhare pass chode jaa rahi hun,

Usse apne pyar se sambhal ke rakhna,

Main bhi tumhare dil ko bade jaatan se apne paas rakhungi'

Aur hamare Milan ki aas main har ek pal guzardungi..

Wo bhi to yehi kehraha tha mujhse ki,

Main bhi tumhare lautneka intezaar karunga

haan hum phirse milenge, mujhe yakeen hai'

Pleas hit the like button if my lines make any sense to you all...I'll as always look forward to your comments/replies

Love you Anyans..ANYARocks...

P.S.Thank you all for your wishes.. my test was good today..two more to go...so I am apoligising before hand if i could not give individual replies ,but i'll get back to you all with my replies soon..

Originally posted by: bs8889

Hats Off 2 u👏👏...brilliant piece of work..each line is so beautifully emotes the feelings..i jst flow wid d words n keep on reading ur poem wishing it wont end...touches me deeply...it said everything that navya was feeling in starting lines..her anxiety, fear, desperation n her pain.. it has left me wid a painful lump in d throat...

@underlined: u have so perfectly managed 2 give words 2 d silent conversation those two had..d scene was playing my head as i read these lines...each word, each line fit perfectly..

Loveddd it..👍🏼..plz plz plz plz continue updating this post n making more such posts as an ven u get tym..😊

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

wow di that was stupendous .i m speechless .the way u bring out the intricacies abt relations be it Anant Navya or Navya meeta is just mind blowing .i m awestruck .i m so grateful to the show Navya n this forum had it not been them i cud never meet such a talented gem .just loved ur post dii

n sorry for the late reply