Shakespeare In Love *DISCONTD & Content Removed* - Page 4

Originally posted by: Athena.

That was.. interesting.

These "overdue" books could not possibly be the ones she dumped in the box, right? 😆

(LOL! Of course not, sheesh! Boys, will be boys, will be boys, is a highly exaggerated assessment of the male species anyway 😆 )

Anant is being extremely unprofessional - not that I mind, of course :P I think the pace is good because these filler chapters, as you call it, developed a more 3D image of the characters. So Anant has no stable job, he is a musician, only works because it's necessary to sustain his living and he moves around quite a lot. Navya, on the contrary, knows exactly how her life works - it's almost like a routine. For instance, when she got that email she immediately started tracing back to the possibilities - what she would have done. I don't think Anant is like that.. he seems more take-life-as-it-goes.. maybe im wrong?

Oh I could give you a big tight hug this second! I suppose the best way to compliment another's work, is to actually spot and point out the very things they had hoped would subtly glare at the reviewers!

I was going to write that in my A/N in the beginning - that I'm trying to develop the characters here, peeling off their many layers one at a time - hence this filler seeming chapter, but then I just didn't say. And I feel so elated reading your comment! You've got a lot of stuff bang on, and its very encouraging to me (:

Also, between your last comment, and this one, I'm coming to assume you have a thing for closely observing the character sketches - at that, you and I have a staunch common! I'm a strong believer of the role character build ups play in making a hit (or not) out of any piece of fiction. Characters immortalize stories, don't they?!

I've been pondering for a while so I might as well just ask - why 'Shakespeare in love'? & Is that line from Macbeth symbolising Anant cooking up a meeting with Navya? Is it going to lead to trouble? Or is it because that one encounter last night is leading on to more meetings..? I haven't read Macbeth so I'm just wondering :)

So the title is namesake the Layla Kaylif song, as I said at the very start. In essence, I chose it because of one way to look at Shakespeare - the man, and not Shakespeare the legend. So let's say the man Shakespeare had fallen in love and we were tracing his love story - a man who been there done that for nearly every experience he believes life could have thrown at him. He's a self convinced knows life for what it is and calls a spade a spade - but he's never realized that falling in love - for all his knowledge of it - can still cast a whole new world of revelations upon his very expansive understanding of humans, their psyches, and their love stories!

Does that make sense? This is not a subjective treatment of William Shakespeare. It's only my line of thought in objectively imagining a contemporary version of Shakespeare falling in love 😳

Also, er, I'd like to sum up something of Macbeth for you, but can I recommend you Wiki it instead? Trust me, its a good summary of the gist - and while Macbeth shall have no straight consequences on this FF, or its characters, I was only using it as a tool to A) bring out some character shades to Navya, and B) now, just ripping off a line from it, on Anant's account - for he imagines this girl to be nothing but trouble - a challenging trouble. I'll let the rest come in the chapters, by and by (as fast as it comes to me (: )

I liked it, but im now left with a craving for the confrontation. Bring that soon please!

-Anushka

Originally posted by: Simi_PagalLadki

I will be reading it later when I get time!

reserved! x

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

wow...another wonderful chapter..m just loving it..love the way u write...i can just imagine everything in front of my eyes while reading it...its fantastic...u have to be one of the best writers on IF and many more things...i don't mean to embarrass u but i really mean it...u have been gifted in writing..keep it up!!

loved Anant's character...naughty and playful..its really sweet

i wonder wats gonna happen when she gets a hold of him...he's sooo in trouble lol...anyways update soon..desperately waiting for the rest!!

Originally posted by: nami2811

Hey JZee.. m really very sorry I still din get 2 read ur FF.. But will defo read n comment later.. 😳 Don mind.. 🤔

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans

Bechara Anannt woh toh buri tharh pass gaya hain ab