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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: .FunLuvingGirl.
Hey dear ! Really beautifully written..luved it..
continue soon..waiting for the nxt chapter..and yeah do send me a PM
when you update 😊

luv,
Soma 😳

Thanks Soma! Shall definitely keep you posted about the updates!

Sending a friend request, please accept (:

JZee

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Athena.
JZephyr,

That was a nice start. And quite different from how the characters are depicted in the show, yet it was easy to accept them in this new avatar so kudos to u for that :) By the end of Ch2, it seemed as though the tables have turned in favour of Navya, but it looks like Anant is going to strike back. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Hoping that you don't make Navya too slow or make her seem unwitty!

-Anushka

Hey Anushka,

I'm happy that you find the difference of character sketch plausible enough - and hopefully it shall remain that way. Like I said, I only borrowed the names but wish to give them another story - cause what the show does with them, is what they can and will do best (:

I have no intentions of making any character slow - but did she come across as such from Chapter 1? Because that was more of a reflection on her than anything else. Anyway, shall be updating soon and hopefully you will be approving of the way the character sketches unfold - because they are vital to any writing.

Thanks for stopping by with your take on the story so far (:

JZee

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans
Lovely FF pl add me on your pm list

You're on! Thank you for dropping a line (:

JZee

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Have you worked in a library? And if you really have, even then you are awfully detailed in your descriptions..right from the notice to Navya..to the scene of her waking up-i could really visualize it..to the way you described Anant's character. Fantastic job really. Looking forward to the showdown between Anant and Navya! 😉

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ASRaddictKKGholic

@pluviophile.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

WOW!!! U r going on the right way, i love the story so much, Navya waking up nd etc was sooo superb nd i hope you continue it soon,it is not a story like others have this one is diffrent and special so do continue soon nd Thanks for the Pm!!!🤗

~Tamana

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hullo, I just read through the entire thing! Howdy?

I'll tell you what, the first chapter was tough for me to comprehend, my vocabulary is pretty decent but I had to Google some words you'd mentioned in there. You've gotten an endearing writing skill, the reader can not possibly get away with the fit of laughter which encloses them reading chapter two, and not notice how benevolent and enchanting your descriptions are. Yes, when I dun have to Google your words, I mean. You're splendid!

Reviews matter essentially the most to the author, I get. I write as well and I'd love to share my pieces with you, if you'd like. However, much to my dismay - astoundingly fascinating and distinctive works such as yours hardly ever receive the amount of readership which they deserve in IF, pardon me. Anyhow, you'd always find loyal readers round, dun be disheartened if they are not a huge figure, though. I'd like to show up as one of the party. I like this piece very much. Keep notifying me, thanks for the previous PMs and proceed soon.

Period.

Kankshita

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Anushka

@Athena.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

That was.. interesting.

These "overdue" books could not possibly be the ones she dumped in the box, right? 😆

Anant is being extremely unprofessional - not that I mind, of course :P I think the pace is good because these filler chapters, as you call it, developed a more 3D image of the characters. So Anant has no stable job, he is a musician, only works because it's necessary to sustain his living and he moves around quite a lot. Navya, on the contrary, knows exactly how her life works - it's almost like a routine. For instance, when she got that email she immediately started tracing back to the possibilities - what she would have done. I don't think Anant is like that.. he seems more take-life-as-it-goes.. maybe im wrong?

I've been pondering for a while so I might as well just ask - why 'Shakespeare in love'? & Is that line from Macbeth symbolising Anant cooking up a meeting with Navya? Is it going to lead to trouble? Or is it because that one encounter last night is leading on to more meetings..? I haven't read Macbeth so I'm just wondering :)

I liked it, but im now left with a craving for the confrontation. Bring that soon please!

-Anushka

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
Have you worked in a library? And if you really have, even then you are awfully detailed in your descriptions..right from the notice to Navya..to the scene of her waking up-i could really visualize it..to the way you described Anant's character. Fantastic job really. Looking forward to the showdown between Anant and Navya! 😉

Hola Megz!

I have done a term's shift at the library one undergrad semester just for kicks... but that's been a while ago now (: The mail as such is almost a copy of the kind of mails I keep receiving as a perpetual defaulter! I dare confess I now know the wording nearly verbatim given I always have a pile on me, and there's always something overdue that I've missed checking back in or renewing - cause I'm this utterly unorganized person who has paperbacks sticking out of odd places and corners of her space! Navya's check list was something like my own, I daresay... In fact there's this common joke among my housemates about how my paths could be traced with books I left behind - the Hansel and Gretel way?! 😆 So yeh, you get the picture!

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter despite the passive underlay. I am trying to bring out the characters in their many nuances through their routine trivial nothings, and that sort of slows down the plot... but I have a vague outline in mind for the next couple chapters at least - so I won't be stuck up to then for ever at least!

Thanks for the prompt comment (: The showdown is coming...!

JZee

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bebosallu4eva
WOW!!! U r going on the right way, i love the story so much, Navya waking up nd etc was sooo superb nd i hope you continue it soon,it is not a story like others have this one is diffrent and special so do continue soon nd Thanks for the Pm!!!🤗

~Tamana

Thank you for the lovely comment Tamana🤗 I'm glad you like the story, but I'm most glad you're enjoying its difference from the show - cause that I was apprehensive about initially.

Shall keep you posted about the updates (:

JZee

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

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Originally posted by: -Kanky-
Hullo, I just read through the entire thing! Howdy?

I'll tell you what, the first chapter was tough for me to comprehend, my vocabulary is pretty decent but I had to Google some words you'd mentioned in there. You've gotten an endearing writing skill, the reader can not possibly get away with the fit of laughter which encloses them reading chapter two, and not notice how benevolent and enchanting your descriptions are. Yes, when I dun have to Google your words, I mean. You're splendid!

Reviews matter essentially the most to the author, I get. I write as well and I'd love to share my pieces with you, if you'd like. However, much to my dismay - astoundingly fascinating and distinctive works such as yours hardly ever receive the amount of readership which they deserve in IF, pardon me. Anyhow, you'd always find loyal readers round, dun be disheartened if they are not a huge figure, though. I'd like to show up as one of the party. I like this piece very much. Keep notifying me, thanks for the previous PMs and proceed soon.

Period.

Kankshita

Howdy to yourself, Kankshita! (Texas lover, eh?! 😆)

But whoa! You throw me off guard with that huge say - about vocab and whatnot! The flattering way - I'm really humbled, and my high school English prof would be proud, I reckon?! She often said we should use a language for the love of it - and not the convenience or inevitability! I kinda liked her thought, and its just stuck (:

As for the story - I'm glad you like it, and think so much of it! Reviews are important, critical even, but I assure you I'm not running after numbers! I'd like to have readers who see where I come from, as they read the story - people I can connect with, and them who can connect with my characters and their world...?! I'll be happiest with a smaller numbers like that! (:

Btw, I'd love to read your work sure - I'm still catching up on the way some of the IF functions work, and am not sure how I can find your stuff without having to search through pages and pages - so could you link them? Here or in a PM - either is fine (:

Shall keep you posted with the updates, and will look forward to your reviews!

JZee