AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68)

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Reenaxavneil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

I am smiling wide whilst reading this, I love it and I can't wait for your next update

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Hood19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Awesome update..

Waiting for next part

Continue soon...

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Prnmani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Hi Riya congrats on new thread.

Amazing update. Waiting for the surprise.

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vaish_patel

@vaish_patel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Hey!!

Firstly a huge congratulations for thread no. 3!! I hope this shows just how popular your story is! The slow burn has got us all hooked!!

Secondly, HAYEEE!!!!! Neil is a gem, an actual heera!! So so in love with him! And our girl is getting possessive and jealous - TWICE in one chapter: Neela Ma and Mitali! She's getting there, slowly but surely!!

Thirdly, HELL YES I'm excited for a super hot chapter!! As much as I love them being all cutesy, if they're both starting to feel something, it's about time the hormones start flowing! CANNOT WAIT! Please update soon!!

PS I'm still in AdiZa-heaven!! 😳

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-Tom-Jerry-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Hey Riya...

Sorry I didn't get to comment on chapter 46...So here's my view on both chapters together 😃

Needless to say...They were both amazing chapters...although I missed the presence of Neil Khanna in CH46 😳...Neelama's teasing about the Dreamcatcher and Angie teasing over the phone about Neil's singing and their date was all very amazingly penned down. Hats off to your creativity👏

Coming to CH47, I loved how Neil addressed her as 'My Munchkin'😳...It had that 'You-are-mine' effect I guess! And most importantly I am just loving the transformation of Avni from being a person indifferent to Love and Relationships in spite of being engaged to Neil, to becoming a Jealous fiance questioning Neil about a girl who was his friend. The transformation has been very slow, subtle and realistic 👏

As always, eagerly eagerly waiting for the next Chapter! 🤗

Shreya 😊

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Nidhii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Awesome Riya just loved it.

Loved the combo between Neil and Avni. She is becoming more and more possessive of Neil each passing day.

And where do get such nice words to write a whole article. I know u are a doctor still by any chance are u a literature student as ur write up is just mind blowing.

Aur kitna praise karogi yaar neil khanna ko mera dil uspe aa jayega phir heart break ko kaun sambhalega kyonki neil to sirf or sirf avni ka hai.

What a surprise that was from neil to avni he arranged for her friend's visit all by himself keeping it a secret from her.

And now at the last u are so perfectionist in teasing us with ur parting words. Ab agle update ko padhne ke liye abhi se hi excitement build up ho gaya hai ye jaanne ke baad ki agla wala hot hoga.

Waiting eagerly for next.

Pls try to update it by tomorrow.

Much love for u.

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doctani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Hey Riya,

U knw u write awesome or should i say perfect...the story is amazing and so r you!!!!

I dont know what else to write but ya i just love your story.

Looking forward to next part..update soon😊

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1127246

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Hey !! Dude I think this time, a lil early than expected.

I'm happy to be back and this is really a very cute chap.

I felt myself genuinely smile and chuckle at times.

Awww " Jealous AVNI ", why do I feel you are up to

something naughty haan ?? Anyways this was too cute

and THAT WAS A GRAND ENTRY of our beloved DD.

Just loved it and want her to be teased more. (wink !! )

Time and again you proved to be the best one in making

these simple yet impo scenes look more appealing Ri.

HATS OFF 😃

P.S Neil was too cute at times, his gestures at last and

him getting smacked by Bebe was all lovely.

With Love

Kathy ❤️

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Binh

@Binh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Amazing! Loved all of it... There was absolutely nothing I would want to change about it ... Can't wait for the next update!

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Hey Riya

Such a fun filled chapter loved there cute morning talks these 2 are getting cuter with each passing chapter, I keep falling in love with this Neil Khanna he wants to keep a tab on everything in his lady loves life 😊
The article part was brilliant 👏
Jealous Avni was a treat 😳 , Mitali ne yahan bhi peecha nahi Choda par koi nai yeh Neil Khanna ko usse koi lena dena nahi hai and I am so happy for that 😃

You have increased my expectations for the next chapter now I really can't wait for It please update soon 😉

Much love
Safia

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