AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: docritu99


Hey,
Thank u so very much for ur amazing words.!

Means a lot to me.!

I know the excitement level is already high for next update, so will be posting it soon.!


Much love


SOON did you say???? YOURE A BABE ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Ri🤗
Congrats🥳
Awesome chapter. Totally loved it.
Cute update. Their morning talk was so cute.
They are so cute. Iam falling in love with their cute talk.
I loved how he called her my munchkin. Hayee yeh teekh nahi karre AAP mere weak heart ke saath.
That article part was beautiful. Loved it. Encyclopaedia Ko saath rakne ki uses.
Aww, she got jealous. Wow, this is a huge turn. Bcoz avni got possessive. Look at him. He can't be real. Kitne ache se Samjaya usse. He is love.
I love her possessiveness. I love the phase in their love. Shayad yahi hai pyaar moment.
Iam so excited ri. Pls pls update soon. Wats gonna happen?
Oh god, I seriously can't wait.
Wat do u mean by 'SUPER HOT'.
I can't wait.
Cute update ke baath hot update😎
Issliye bolti hoon u r the best.😳
Continue soon pls jaldi.
Congratulations for third thread. Iam really happy for u.🥳🤗

Edited by rilsaf - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Awesome chapter esp the last part 😆 Avni has made it a point not to leave him any soon . Though he gave a genuine answer she was still on accusing mode which was broken by DD . I loved him catching her red handed 😉 Avni you are jealous 😆😆 this possessive doctor sahiba is a treat to watch just like Neil who should be in seventh heaven by now . Any man will love this possessive side of his lady . Guess whole length teasing session is on the way 😆
Article was wonderful . You have to try writing columns 😆

Early morning phone conversation was so adorable for words 😳 Avni becomes serious so easily . 😆 Kya karein aadatein ! Neil's munchkin 😳 I loved that ! And his bribing bebe to send her with Prakash 😆 Lol ! Accused for ploying 😆😆 I'm such a fan of Bebe and Neil jodi . Impatient for his diamond Neela Ma 😆 He knows to catch her off guard even while talking on phone .

Super hot update . 😲 I thought he is gonna introduce her in front of media . 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Awesome Riya just loved it. Thank u so much

Loved the combo between Neil and Avni. She is becoming more and more possessive of Neil each passing day. Pyaar ke side effects, i tell u.!
And where do get such nice words to write a whole article. I know u are a doctor still by any chance are u a literature student as ur write up is just mind blowing. Thank u so much for the compliments. But i have been reading UC news articles from quiet a long time, so it was just a reflection from that. Also no i didnt take up any class in literature, all these started with my passion to write poems, from then i started writing fiction and then u a know.!
Aur kitna praise karogi yaar neil khanna ko mera dil uspe aa jayega phir heart break ko kaun sambhalega kyonki neil to sirf or sirf avni ka hai. Haila, abhi tak already aaya nahi.! So much of tolerance, i must say.!
What a surprise that was from neil to avni he arranged for her friend's visit all by himself keeping it a secret from her. Yes, he has taken Avni as a package deal in his life, with all her relations and friends.!
And now at the last u are so perfectionist in teasing us with ur parting words. Ab agle update ko padhne ke liye abhi se hi excitement build up ho gaya hai ye jaanne ke baad ki agla wala hot hoga. Marketing techniques, you see.! 😆

Waiting eagerly for next.
Pls try to update it by tomorrow.
Much love for u.


Hey Nidhi,

Thank u so much dear for ur kind words.!

You know how much they mean to me.!

And i will try to update next soon, so stay tuned for it.!

Much love
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: docritu99


Hey Nidhi,

Thank u so much dear for ur kind words.!

You know how much they mean to me.!

And i will try to update next soon, so stay tuned for it.!

Much love

Khudko sambhal rahi hoon abhi tak kyonki I don't want my first love to be left incomplete but if you continue doing this I can't guarantee in future I will be able to cop up with it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: doctani

Hey Riya, Hey dear.!

U knw u write awesome or should i say perfect...the story is amazing and so r you!!!! Aww, thank u so much for all ur compliments.
I dont know what else to write but ya i just love your story. Its heartening to know that.!
Looking forward to next part..update soon😊


Hey buddy,

Thank u so much for all ur amazing words !

Means a lot to me.!

Keep reading and appreciating.!

Much love.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Kathy_927

Hey !! Dude I think this time, a lil early than expected. Early.!! You are late by few chaps 😆

I'm happy to be back and this is really a very cute chap. Welcome back.
I felt myself genuinely smile and chuckle at times. Glad to know that my story could make u smile

Awww "Jealous AVNI ", why do I feel you are up to
something naughty haan ?? Anyways this was too cute You never know with me 😉 Ab AvNeil naughty honge toh isme meri kya galti.!
and THATWAS A GRAND ENTRY of our beloved DD.
Just loved it and want her to be teased more. (wink !! ) Haha. We all derive pleasure from teasing Avni.! 😆

Time and again you proved to be the best one in making
these simple yet impo scenes look more appealing Ri.
HATS OFF😃

Aww, Thank u so very much.! That was a huge compliment for me.!
P.S Neil was too cute at times, his gestures at last and
him getting smacked by Bebe was all lovely.

I am gald you enjoyed those parts.!
With Love
Kathy❤️


Hey Kathy,

Thank u so much for showering so much praises.

Thoroughly enjoyed ur comment.!

Keep them coming my way.!

Much love.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Binh

Amazing! Loved all of it... There was absolutely nothing I would want to change about it ... Can't wait for the next update!


Aww, thank u so very much for saying so.!

Will try my best to update soon.!

Keep reading and appreciating.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb
update soon


Thank u so much.! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Such a lovely chapter Riya ..had a smile throughout 😊
The phase of courtship is the best and most important in any marriage and especially for arranged marriage .. you are portraying this phase of avneils life in a fantastic way 👏

When o think back to the time Neil was scolding himself for writing his number on avni's palm and nervously waiting for her call to the previous update where he has this free casual banter and flirting with her and her being his munchkin

When avni was irritated about the thought of going on a date with millionaire to being worried sick when he didn't call due to bad health and then to yesterday's disconnecting Angie's call yo pick his call to today's happy banter blushing and jealousy ..

What a fabulous journey 👏

They have discussed the seriously stuffs , gotten closer to each other's families , started to know each other's likes and dislikes , Neil started to flirt recently and now avni is getting jealous and next a super hot update .. 😳 bahut sahi ..they aren't leavingany of the aspects of courahip period untouched 😃
And needless to say I am totally looking forward to the next update 😉😳
Just like I do for all your updates ..😆 .tumhe Kya laga ..I said I am waiting because it's gonna be a super hot one ? 😳.mein bahut innocent Hoon jee 🤣
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