AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: drbeth

</div><div>Hey Safia
Thank you so much for the double bonanza.You actually gave two separate reviews for two chapter.So swt of you.
I shouldn't be writing dis here but you just caught me at d wrng time.I'm feeling so emotional.Story is reaching its destination .I have lost my connect wid NK completely.Feeling bad.
Anywys...ignore

Much love.

I would say the feeling is mutual about the show even I am feeling really bad that a show I loved so much has nothing to offer in terms of leads story when there's so much I wanted to enjoy it's my 1st time I stuck onto a show for this long usually I don't watch any show more than a month infact I have stopped watching from Tuesday and I don't feel I have missed much so I stick to written updates

About this story it's sad that it's SS hopefully u write some more stories and I get to enjoy your writing

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#392

Ajmer is a beautiful place to be explored in our country, I'm so glad you took up this place as Avni's hometown. This separation is much needed, as I said in my previous reply, it will bring them only closer and will be helpful in them understanding the importance of each other in their lives.

Did I ever tell how much I loved Neela ma in the show, the character was a well-written one and powerful too. I'm so happy to see her playing a major role in AvNeil's lives here, she is going to play one, right?

I guessed something like this, children are the most affected during their parents' divorce. They don't understand anything, confusion, chaos and quarrels affects their little minds a lot. Avni has to come out of her shell and see that Neil is not like her father who will leave her for his family, she has to fight those inner demons which hold back her feelings for him.

Neil finally is well aware of his feelings and has accepted them without any hesitation, bravo my boy! Avni decided to let her armor down in front on Neil, her friend's so-called to-be fiancee, this itself shows how much she trusts him to share an integral part of herself, the reason why she is against love or commitment. Girl has come a long way from not trusting that 'stranger' to letting him know her fears.

Neil, how much of a gentleman he is. No questions, no qualms about staying away from his love. He doesn't want to be the reason why she is away from her job, her friends. He is crazily in love with Avni and I pray she realizes and reciprocates his feelings very soon. Now that Neil himself has decided to part away from her, I really hope Neela ma and Avni's friends, especially Richa make her understand his love for her.

Waiting for the next chapter, baby!

Love,

Nivi

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#393

So finally I am here with the comment.

Waited for the update till 11 but then sleeping or not I have to switch my cell off otherwise meri mumma belan leke mere paas khadi ho jayegi. Two rule still going in my family eat together and don't use mobile after 11. And I am an obedient kid still.

So now coming to the update. I know I bored u with my Ramayana. The update was awesome . Felt glad to know avni's pov . So she knows what she felt but still running away from the feelings due to her dark past. And Neil also so gradually accepted her condition if they will not meet then how come he will propose to her? I know something is running in that head of Mr. Neil khanna otherwise he will not accept it so easily. Now what will happen now. Is his accepting the condition a trap to first take her to Delhi then propose her.

Loving this ss more and more each passing day.

And much much love

Thanks for the update.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#394

My goodness! He followed her to her hometown to propose her . Avni could have easily put down his request but he was more smart so that she couldn't say a no . I am happy that she said everything she was holding back and also that she knows she couldn't help but fall for him if he crosses her path often which made her to keep that condition of not being friends and not meeting. My heart broke for her when she said if don't want to be third wheel in my friend's relationship. Poor girl! 💔 Hope Neil does something which doesn't lead to heartbreak of any one involved in this issue . I am guessing him to be discussing with Richa about this . It's the best time coz engagement is yet to happen and the damage will be less if he makes Richa, her family and his family understand.

I expected Neil and Bebe talk 😕

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840837

Suspended

Posted: 7 years ago

#395

I've really enjoyed the way this story has been written. Your style, the way you set it up and the pace of the story is great. It never feels like too short or too long an update. Look forward to reading more. My request is please could you confirm that Neil breaks things off with richa in your next chapter...atleast to the readers if not to Avni.

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#396

Feel so bad for Avni...to witness so much emotional abuse towards a parent by another & breakdown of relationships at such a young age has obv made an impact on her psyche.

But she & Neela have emerged stronger with obvious internal scars.

Even though Neela has been through so much she still wants happiness for her daughter & wants someone to heal the scars of her childhood. Shez been intuitive enough to know that 'the friend' on the ph is the one to do the job!

Avni has nice loyal friends & a job that shez good at & is happy with.

It is only when she met Neil that her carefully created barriers came crumbling down...leaving her exposed & confused.

Even then, shez strong enough to know what's right & what's wrong & when one should stop! She knows she has feelings for Neil but she can never betray a friend to act on those feelings.

Her words have made Neil realize that only love is not important, honoring that is equally important. He has understood that to be able to declare his feelings to Avni & have these feelings reciprocated he needs to first talk to Richa & his parents.

Now Neil has to ensure that Avni gets the love, acceptance, & respect that she deserves from Neilz family, something that her own mom never got.

That's why he agreed to not being her friend because what he wants to be is her life partner & that too for forever!

Too good Tapasi & I ll stop now coz I ve blabbered too much already!

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Superb update
Love it
Continue soon

Thanks a lot.

Keep reading😊

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV
Ajmer is a beautiful place to be explored in our country, I'm so glad you took up this place as Avni's hometown. This separation is much needed, as I said in my previous reply, it will bring them only closer and will be helpful in them understanding the importance of each other in their lives. Yes Ajmer is indeed beautiful.The separation was very much required.Otherwise Neil would hv never known this side of Avni.Now he knows clearly what her fears are .
Did I ever tell how much I loved Neela ma in the show, the character was a well-written one and powerful too. I'm so happy to see her playing a major role in AvNeil's lives here, she is going to play one, right? Neela Ma was my fav too.Everytime i saw her...I felt so inspired.She is the strongest character I hv ever seen.Absolutely love her.Its a short story...so I hv tried my best...rest is upto you to decide.
I guessed something like this, children are the most affected during their parents' divorce. They don't understand anything, confusion, chaos and quarrels affects their little minds a lot. Avni has to come out of her shell and see that Neil is not like her father who will leave her for his family, she has to fight those inner demons which hold back her feelings for him. Yes children are badly affected by domestic fights.Divorce is brutal for the kids but somewhere I feel its better than staying together forcibly...and making the kids suffer every day.Yes Avni needs to see Neil is different ...den only she will be able to accept her feelings.
Neil finally is well aware of his feelings and has accepted them without any hesitation, bravo my boy! Avni decided to let her armor down in front on Neil, her friend's so-called to-be fiancee, this itself shows how much she trusts him to share an integral part of herself, the reason why she is against love or commitment. Girl has come a long way from not trusting that 'stranger' to letting him know her fears.That's shows progress.Thats what a story is supposed to be doing.Thats how relationships develop.Trust is the foundation .So that is done They just hv to build their relationship now.Yes dts how I wanted Neil to be...you don't always need catalysts to accept your feelings.
Neil, how much of a gentleman he is. No questions, no qualms about staying away from his love. He doesn't want to be the reason why she is away from her job, her friends. He is crazily in love with Avni and I pray she realizes and reciprocates his feelings very soon. Now that Neil himself has decided to part away from her, I really hope Neela ma and Avni's friends, especially Richa make her understand his love for her. Read carefully what Neil said.He made no promises to stay away.I wanted you to get that.So I didn't exactly put it out there.Its like a theory of exclusion😆
Waiting for the next chapter, baby!
Love,
Nivi

Hey Nivi.

Thanx a lot dear for always being this awesome.Love the way you read and interpret.

Much love

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
So finally I am here with the comment.
Waited for the update till 11 but then sleeping or not I have to switch my cell off otherwise meri mumma belan leke mere paas khadi ho jayegi. Two rule still going in my family eat together and don't use mobile after 11. And I am an obedient kid still.So for another sleepless night then😆.Ahan obedient one ...gud for you.I love d first rule of your family.
So now coming to the update. I know I bored u with my Ramayana. The update was awesome . Felt glad to know avni's pov . So she knows what she felt but still running away from the feelings due to her dark past. And Neil also so gradually accepted her condition if they will not meet then how come he will propose to her? I know something is running in that head of Mr. Neil khanna otherwise he will not accept it so easily. Now what will happen now. Is his accepting the condition a trap to first take her to Delhi then propose her.Haha ...no problem...it was cute.I'll tell you what i told Nivi...read carefully again .Neil has made no promises to stay away.Rest you will know soon.
Loving this ss more and more each passing day.
And much much love
Thanks for the update.

Hey Nidhi

Thank you for showering so much love.I love ur 'ramayana' ...it was cute.

And I'll upload before 11pm today.Ok?

Much love.

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Nivi.
Thanx a lot dear for always being this awesome You're our queen of awesomeness 😳 .Love the way you read and interpret.
Much love

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