AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 39

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Ashi.

Welcome.So happy to know you found this worth reading and dt u are loving it already.

Let me know how you like the rest of d chapters aftr u read.I'll wait for ur review.

Thank you so much.

Much love

What a beautiful update...love the direction you are taking this ..Abd their vulnerability with each other, looking forward to how they come together

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Hey Tapsi,

Sorry dear, I couldn't read the rest today. Some urgent work came up and had to attend to that. Just got free. I'll read the rest and comment tomorrow. Replies in red.

Love,

Ashi.

Originally posted by: manizeh

the story is damn interesting waiting for next part soon 😊😉😉

Originally posted by: RomComFan

What a beautiful update...love the direction you are taking this ..Abd their vulnerability with each other, looking forward to how they come together

Tapasi I loved both the updated
Chapter 11 was super hot the way u described about the almost kiss was excellent 😳 you created such a dreamy sequence light off rain and 2 hot people deadly combination 😉 , you know AvNeil falling in bed reminded me of one of the scene from the show when Bebe caught them both it's one of my favorite and to read ur version of the same was even more amazing uff light ko bhi tabhi sana tha thoda wait karke aati toh kya hota

Chapter 12 is such a emotional one let me 1st say that's Neela ma she's truly a beautiful soul always a Cupid between AvNeil finally I know what's haunting Avni it's a burden of broken relationship which is really difficult to overcome, I am loving this Romeo type Neil Khanna can go to any extent for the lady he's fallen for I am glad they had this one sided conversation now it give neil a change to understand Avni and try to find a better way to express his feeling and I can't wait to know the other side of the conversation I am sure smart Neil Khanna will be able to convince avni

Overall the story is unfolding beautifully I can't wait to know what happens when they get back

Do I need to say the writing is brilliant Naaa u already know that

Much love
Safia 😉

This was very surprising. Didn't expect Neela to be real mom and she would run to Ajmer. I was thinking she will be at the graveyard. And the part where Neil came was also another surprise. Hehehe. I think he has spoken to Richa and his family abt her before coming, just a guess. Let's see how it goes. Nice update indeed. Thank youn

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Tapasi I loved both the updated Thank you.
Chapter 11 was super hot the way u described about the almost kiss was excellent 😳 you created such a dreamy sequence light off rain and 2 hot people deadly combination 😉 , you know AvNeil falling in bed reminded me of one of the scene from the show when Bebe caught them both it's one of my favorite and to read ur version of the same was even more amazing uff light ko bhi tabhi sana tha thoda wait karke aati toh kya hota I'm really very happy to read that.I didn't know if I would be able to pull that scene off without making anyone cringe.So I'm really relieved dt it played out exactly like I wanted it to.That scene where Bebe catches them is one of my favs too.I rewatch it many times.

Light ka aana jaruri tha...coz uske aage ka likhna mere capability ke bahar hai😆

Chapter 12 is such a emotional one let me 1st say that's Neela ma she's truly a beautiful soul always a Cupid between AvNeil finally I know what's haunting Avni it's a burden of broken relationship which is really difficult to overcome, I am loving this Romeo type Neil Khanna can go to any extent for the lady he's fallen for I am glad they had this one sided conversation now it give neil a change to understand Avni and try to find a better way to express his feeling and I can't wait to know the other side of the conversation I am sure smart Neil Khanna will be able to convince avni. You had already anticipated something was wrong wid Avni.Yes Neil needed to hear that to understand Avni better.Romeo Neil😆...Maine Neil ko kya bana diya😆.I literally can't imagine any story of AvNeil widout Neela Ma in it...She is a gem of a person.Btw u r really a smart reader.

Overall the story is unfolding beautifully I can't wait to know what happens when they get back

Do I need to say the writing is brilliant Naaa u already know that
No no I dnt knw dt really.Its you guys who keep make me believe that I'm ok as a writer.So Thnk you
Much love
Safia 😉

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

This was very surprising. Didn't expect Neela to be real mom and she would run to Ajmer. I was thinking she will be at the graveyard. And the part where Neil came was also another surprise. Hehehe. I think he has spoken to Richa and his family abt her before coming, just a guess. Let's see how it goes. Nice update indeed. Thank youn