AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46)

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prathe

@prathe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#451

Wow very well written yaar I always love the way u narrate scenario superb👏

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Prnmani

@Prnmani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#452

Hi Riya, missed u and ur update.

Pls update regularly. I love the update. Its nice.

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Redrose1208

@Redrose1208

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Posted: 7 years ago

#453

You updated... Yyyiiipppeee... I lllooovvveee u riya... To d moon n bck... ❤️

Now d update... Haaye re paglu neil... He fell in love wid her name too... Dat was shooo adorable...

I loved dose previous chaps parts... They had such a different feel now wid neil's pov included... I was always wondering why did neil had a smile n he ws glued to d pic aftr seeing it jst once but now i noe ki majara kya tha... Hehe😆

Avni's reaction... God... Dat one question n her expressions r so damn scary... Usko jyaada gussa mat krna neil se plz... Hamare baby ka dil toot jayga... 🥺

Pendrive mein hai kya yaar... Kab bataogi... 😒

Next update jaldi se dena plz... Will b waiting... Bahut lamba wait mat karana haa... ❤️🤗

N I'll always b ur loyal reader... Plz do keep writing a lot mny chappies fr us loyal readers... 😳

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#454

Lovely update

So maybe this is what neil and neela talked when they chit chatted during first meet...

When avni was confused as to what they r talking...

Maybe thats how neelaa maa gor confirmed that neil does love avni n hence she said yes for marraige

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#455

Amazing
Continue soon
Can't wait for Avni point of view

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#456

Finally you updated.

I can see the story is moving forward really fast.

Every doubt I had in the early chapters are now clear except the pendrive ofcourse.

Avni's reaction was scary.Guess she will be more upset with Neela Ma cz she knew everything and didnt tell her.

Waiting for the nxt chptr.

PS : Riya if you dont mind my saying, then please write ur story the way you always wanted to.Don't change the way you write.

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#457

Hey Riya finally you updated I waiting for you update 😊
It's beautiful chapter everything was so well planned neil Khanna nd bebe are super smart 😉 toh Avni pictures abhi ne diye hai 😲 and when Neil went and spoke to to neelama on the there first meeting he told everything to her 😲 but I am loving it can't wait to read the next chapter to know more about avnis reactions

Much love
Safia

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Javisha11

@Javisha11

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#458

Hello

I somehow missed the last chapter thinking I had read it but I didn't.

Loved both chapters. I could've never imagined Bebe using the directory to find Avni's contact details.

Neela Ma was involved. My guess was correct

Love love loved it

Continue soon

PS please write the way you intend too. I would love to read Avni's POV too

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#459

awesome job, wonder what she will do and say now

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Kiranrathore

@Kiranrathore

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#460

Finally after long tym...i really missed it riya...it was awsm dear...

Loved to see neil crazyness for avni...and one more shock u gave that neelama is also involved...i never thought abt that...u r superb yr...giving such awsm twist in story u r making me crazy for next...plz update next

Edited by Kiranrathore - 7 years ago

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