AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46)

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darsh333

@darsh333

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#471

Helooo riyaaa!

You haven't lost this reader for sure!😊(eventhough i dont reply for every chapter)

Lemme begin with a sorry for not replying for the previous chapter.

As i had decoded earlier it is bebe who helped neil all theee way!!bebe is such an awesome grandma😃this shows how much she loves neil and the extent she can do things for him..im loving bebe and neil😊

Abhishek is indeed a hardworking guy😆 if it wasnt for him we readers could have never got to see avneil's story here😆

Why is my shweta not knowing anything??why is she kept hidden from all these??

Neil under the moonlight looking at avni's pic..he is a gone case for sure😆

Now that it has come to the present i want to see how avni is going to react after knowing even neelama knew all this..it already looks kinda scary😕

I felt this update was soo short girl!i wanted a lonnngg update😊update a very looong one soon😊

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Redrose1208

@Redrose1208

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thank u so much dear for always being there for me.!
Means a lot.!

Are no... No exams till july atleast... Just ent clinics...hell irritating... Dey jst don't gv time to study nythin else... Psm toh strt bhi nhi kiya... Jst 4 more days if ent clinics n den m freee...

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Tanvi4

@Tanvi4

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#473

Omg such a nice one but big cliffhanger hope avni takes positively

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#474

I will wait for her reaction . Will she be angry with Neela ?_If she has learnt the truth before maybe their equation might have been different.

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canzasana

@canzasana

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#475

well waiting for your new update, I want to know her POV,. Bebe , neela ma all involve in their milan plan. the question is if she decide to punished Neil😉 will she include her gang in it. update soon dear. love color coordinate to present timeline.👏 well written.

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#476

read all d chaps in one go

roller coaster ride i say

totally diffrent and unique concept

loved d way u wrote

update soon

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Athira_nv

@Athira_nv

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#477

Nyc update. Waiting for the next. Plzz update soon😭

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1127246

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#478

Awww that's so sweet, Neil falling in love even with her

name.That soo so sooo cute and adorable. Well Abhi

has did a good job and now I realize what that pen drive

might have. Well I have always liked Bebe in here and

she is a guardian angel. Poor Neil, even we are confused

with Avni's reaction let's wait and watch.

Riya see the no.of likes god 76 and do you even need

anymore assurance than this.Let bygones be bygones.

Waiting for you."THE GREAT RIYA"

P.S : Dear Riya I couldn't be more happy than to see your

updates.YOU KNOW WHAT IF ANYBODY WAS IN YOUR

PLACE THEY WOULD HAVE LONG AGO BUTCHERED

THE STORY OR ELSE WOULD HAVE LEFT, but you are

trying to fit the story in a way for the sake of readers.

You are too good and (I lost the count Ri) again in quest

for words. 😉

With Love

Kathy ❤️

Edited by Kathy_927 - 7 years ago

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Zara_Imam

@Zara_Imam

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#479

Phew! Long wait but it was worth it!

Don't feel low Riya... There are so many readers for your story just see!

So the pendrive mystery continues... suspense is killing me!

Hmm so now I get it why Neil just fell for her name in an instance... I love how you leave no loop holes and write the story in a smooth manner... its just really soothing

Now coming to my crush after Neil, Mr Abhi😆 he did a commendable job and as Neil said any one else could have just quit if he was Abhi... This was a joint effort

Avni's reaction is giving me goosebumps already... I think she'll be really upset with Neela cuz she knew the whole thing but didn't tell her, the girl trusts her so much for the instance

I'm really waiting to see how you unfold the whole thing😊

God Riya I really hate cliffhangers when I'm completely immersed in your story

Continue soon and keep smiling😃

Edited by Zara_Imam - 7 years ago

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: Redrose1208
You updated... Yyyiiipppeee... I lllooovvveee u riya... To d moon n bck...❤️ Hahaha 😆 I love u too..
Now d update... Haaye re paglu neil... He fell in love wid her name too... Dat was shooo adorable... You know the feeling when u finally get to name the person u were searching franatically for like ages. It was a reflection of that
I loved dose previous chaps parts... They had such a different feel now wid neil's pov included... Exactly what i wanted to convey. I hope i could justify that I was always wondering why did neil had a smile n he ws glued to d pic aftr seeing it jst once but now i noe ki majara kya tha... Hehe😆 Yes exactly.! It was very unreal for him if u read the in starting. Initially it cane out as an instant attraction but now that u know the history behind it, u know the depth of that love and not just the attraction. 😉
Avni's reaction... God... Dat one question n her expressions r so damn scary... Usko jyaada gussa mat krna neil se plz... Hamare baby ka dil toot jayga...🥺 Ohkay i will consider that but thoda gussa hona toh banta hai na.! 😉
Pendrive mein hai kya yaar... Kab bataogi...😒 Next chapter me. Pakka
Next update jaldi se dena plz... Will b waiting... Bahut lamba wait mat karana haa...❤️🤗 oopss sorry fro already taking too much of time but i am free now i guess so will start writing soon.
N I'll always b ur loyal reader... Plz do keep writing a lot mny chappies fr us loyal readers...😳 Aww. That was so cute. It really lifted up my mood to higher degrees.! Blessed to have such readers.