AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 47

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Hii Riya .. Hey buddy am so sorry for the delay .. have been terribly caught up in RL .. No problem 😊

Loved the story and the flash back so far .. Thank u so much hehe I was jumping guns in my previous post saying Neil could be stalking or get someone stalk ..I take back my words😊 Hahahaa 😆 Yeah i remember, but then u didnt know the story na thats why i told u to not jump.into any conclusion. I am glad its clear now

Sorry Khanna sahab .. galat bol Diya .. aapke sharifness pe ilzaam lagadi😆 Hahaa. Dont wry Khanna Sahab wont mind, unme woh feature hai hi nahi

Loved how Bebe and Neil teamed up in Avni dhoondho mission .. I always thought The formal meeting was the first time Neil saw her .. I somehow missed the clues you gave back then.. now I realize you were hinting all along . Yes exactly.! I have given hints till almost 14 chaps 😆 Loving how you are tying up past chaps with the flashback ..it's really good that there are no loopholes😊.. Thank u so much. The lines of old chaps are totally redefined in terms of feels and emotions after the revelation from Neil's side, just trying to portray that. I hope i am able to

I am looking forward to how the photos came in since Mr D Sinha was already called back and Neil is in Mumbai at the moment ( in the flashback) .. Ahaa that is something i will be revealing in next chap and I am looking forward to Avni's reaction too .. That too in the next chap I am in half minds about if she is gonna be happyily overwhelmed or freakout that his love is quite purana and deep while she is nowhere close to realization and they are already engaged ...so I am waiting to see how you take it forward .. Well i know what i have planned is quiet dangerous but then it is how normal persons react. As i said i am trying to keep the story as real as possible

I saw just few posts above on this page and I understand you were in a not so good mood and not happy with responses few days back .. I hope you are feeling better now and am so sorry from my side for lack of comments .. I am loving the story , the pace , the style and the details .. and I will always look forward to your updates .. Yeah u are right, i wasnt happy but then it is the old story. With help of some friends i can say i am in a better shape and in a better state of mind now, otherwise i was all set to discontinue this story. Thank u so much for ur kind words

pS : just read the latest shade .. it's nice and light ..😊frustrated tillu is fun .. aww. Thank u so much dear. looking forward for the ahem ahem tillu..do you have drunk tillu on your list as well ? If not could you please include him😊..it's a request .. Yes ofcourse will surely try to write on it too..

Originally posted by: Redrose1208

Helooo... Hey Bahut hi jyada late ho gaya iss baar toh... Hmm Yeh ent ne jindagi mein raita faila rakha hai... Hahaaa.! Ent isnt that bad. I struggled with PSM more. Exams.??

Well the update was uberrr cccuuttteee... Neil n bebe ki bonding... Seriously it was awesome... Thank u so much. I am so glad u enjoyed it Although bebe ka idea sunke do min meko bhi shock lag gaya... Itne saare numbers but bebe is right... Sachha pyaar hai... Manzil toh milegi hi... Bebe is always right and she is that guiding angel to Neil. She came to his aid exactly when he was loosing hope.

Chalo ab shaadi ki baat kaise hui vo mystery toh clear ho gayi... Ab avni ka reaction laao... N vo pendrive ki mystery bhi... Plzzz... Yes. Sure it will be on the very next update.

N update do na jaldi se... Waiting waiting...

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Res🤗

Unres

Ri I missed u and ur update.😭 Missed u too buddy

Awesome update ri. Thank u so much

Its a cliffhanger.😭

U r brilliant. U connect every chapter in this single chapter. Thanks again

Now,its makes sense. Abhisek was such a cute and nice character. Yes, now it really make proper sense 😆 Aww, lot of readers like Abhi, thats so heartwarming to hear.

Omg, bebe is rockstar. Uske hote kuch bhi galath nahi hosakti.

Yesi har daadi hoga na. Har banda love marriage karlega.😆 Indeed.! Bebe is the best.! She stepped in exactly when Neil needed her the most

I loved neil reaction when bebe said about avni to swetha.

now we are in present. Its time to face sherni wrath. Hmm. I agree. Plz dont throw chappal jutte at me for this 😉

Dont know wat she gonna do with poor blue munda?

Now, she know her mom also knew this.

Cant wait to know about her response. That will be coming very soon. 😉

Continue soon ri. Thank u so much for this update.😳

Originally posted by: deekshitaamidal

Amazing. Eagerly waiting for next post to see abnormal's reaction

Originally posted by: Atyay

😉 Small installments to excite us & keep waiting for the next update!!!

Anyway, loved the update & please update soon...

Originally posted by: prathe

Wow very well written yaar I always love the way u narrate scenario superb👏

Originally posted by: Prnmani

Hi Riya, missed u and ur update.

Pls update regularly. I love the update. Its nice.

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb

update soon