AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 44

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb
update soon


Thank u 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan


I was really feeling sorry that I have hurt you🥺I expected some reaction from Avni . I really missed her . It wasn't boring . Don't cut short for me .
Sorry if I have hurt you😔 No, its nothing like that. Dont be sorry. I have reshaped the story and will write it to the point from hereon.
Take your own time to write .
I was asking whether you put them as a book !😉

A request . Could you write AvNeil meeting after 10 years both Avni and Neil's POV . if you have time . I am not following the show so i am sorry i cpuldnt write anything related to its plot. I can only write Alternate universe stories on Avneil. Sorry for that


😊😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mariajamal

love it yrrr... when fb end what will be avni reaction... yeh sooch ker he butterfly wali feeling aa rqhi hai... heheheh


Thank u so much for ur appreciation.!
Means a lot.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

<font color="#cc0066">Beautiful update dear...</font>

<font color="#cc0066">Loved it totally...</font> Thank u so much
<font color="#cc0066">Bebe n neil ne bahut mehnat kia hai literally avni se neil ka rishta karane ke liye...</font> Yes.! Agar Neil direct Avni ko approach karta toh pakka jute khata
<font color="#cc0066">Thats how khanna mansion se avni ke liye rishta gaya...</font> Yo, by taking the official arranged route 😉
<font color="#cc0066">Totally loved this part...</font>


Thank u so much Eku, i was missing talking to u on AT, but then i actually dont follow the show.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Srivanithummeti

Wonderful excited to read more


Thank u so much.!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kathy_927



Kabhi kabhi aisa hote hai.( Is that correct if not plz tell me)
What ever you are doing is fully justified and here nobody is
to be blamed and the thing I loved most about your work is the
pace, I have mentioned it before and I have no problem with it.
Well some readers are loosing patience and its a natural reaction
dear don't get demotivated.
Well, what can i say, Its an old story now.! Let bygones be bygones. It was a tough phase but some friends naturally came to my rescue as they really helped me and supported me, including you. The only best thing out of this fiasco was this only. So i am cool now. The support and help was incredible. I am very much sorted coz of some special friends.
We regular readers are there and this dull attitude doesn't suit
our Riya.(wink!!!) Come on cheer up man. I want that chirpy
Ri back in action. Lets hope for it to be soon.
Once Avni comes in play this all will
be set back (Guess ppl are missing our Avni😉).

Dude I will give my reviews for the chappy next time.
Now stay positive and I hope you get back on track.

With Love
Kathy❤️


Thank u so much for everything.!
Much appreciated.!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Awesome
Continue soon


Thank u
Will try my best.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hii Riya ..am so sorry for the delay .. have been terribly caught up in RL ..
Loved the story and the flash back so far .. hehe I was jumping guns in my previous post saying Neil could be stalking or get someone stalk ..I take back my words 😊

Sorry Khanna sahab .. galat bol Diya .. aapke sharifness pe ilzaam lagadi 😆

Loved how Bebe and Neil teamed up in Avni dhoondho mission .. I always thought The formal meeting was the first time Neil saw her .. I somehow missed the clues you gave back then.. now I realize you were hinting all along . Loving how you are tying up past chaps with the flashback ..it's really good that there are no loopholes 😊..

I am looking forward to how the photos came in since Mr D Sinha was already called back and Neil is in Mumbai at the moment ( in the flashback) .. and I am looking forward to Avni's reaction too .. I am in half minds about if she is gonna be happyily overwhelmed or freakout that his love is quite purana and deep while she is nowhere close to realization and they are already engaged ...so I am waiting to see how you take it forward ..

I saw just few posts above on this page and I understand you were in a not so good mood and not happy with responses few days back .. I hope you are feeling better now and am so sorry from my side for lack of comments .. I am loving the story , the pace , the style and the details .. and I will always look forward to your updates ..

pS : just read the latest shade .. it's nice and light .. 😊 frustrated tillu is fun .. looking forward for the ahem ahem tillu..do you have drunk tillu on your list as well ? If not could you please include him 😊..it's a request ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Helooo... Bahut hi jyada late ho gaya iss baar toh... Yeh ent ne jindagi mein raita faila rakha hai...
Well the update was uberrr cccuuttteee... Neil n bebe ki bonding... Seriously it was awesome... Although bebe ka idea sunke do min meko bhi shock lag gaya... Itne saare numbers but bebe is right... Sachha pyaar hai... Manzil toh milegi hi...
Chalo ab shaadi ki baat kaise hui vo mystery toh clear ho gayi... Ab avni ka reaction laao... N vo pendrive ki mystery bhi... Plzzz...
N update do na jaldi se... Waiting waiting...
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Posted: 7 years ago

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