AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 40

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

101.6k

Users

84

Likes

2.8k

Frequent Posters

docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: zaini_avneil

i just loved it...super amazing yaar...fantastic...have no words to describe...do update soon...😛😊👏


Thank u so much dear.!
Will update soon.!
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneill

Superb

Conversation between Neil and bebe was just Awesome
Waiting for next update


Thank u so much buddy.!
Will try to update soon.!
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: deekshitaamidal

Just amazing. I have no words


Thank u 😊
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Thank u so much.!
WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99


I cant tell u how happy i am after reading this comment.!
Thank u so very much for this.!
I am honoured.!.


Detective Sinha...God I'm tubelight sometyms😆
So all 50 chapters...were planned out from the beginning itself.So 50 chapters in total.
PS: u absolutely deserve the compliments
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Redrose1208

Riyaaa... What a surprise... .🤗 Thank u

Yaar... Mujhe plz kahin se ek neil khanna laa do jaldi se... Kya hai yeh banda... Aisa bhi koi ho sakta hai???... Ahaa hota hai.! I know someone. Also Neil Khanna ko story se bahar lana toh bohot mushkil hai
Finally Abhishekh ne apna kaam kar hi diya...vaise ek baat batao... Yeh Abhishekh ko toh vapas bulane ki baat chalri hai toh baki ke pics jo neil ke room mein hai vo kisne click kiye??...🤔 kuch Chize aagle update ke lie bhi toh chod deni chahie ki nahi 😉
Aur agar abhishekh ne sirf ek pic click ki thi avni ki toh uss pendrive mein kya tha... Again next update will tell u that
Jaldi jaldi sab solve karo yaar... Yes. On it.!
Shaadi ka rishta kaise gaya that toh we can easily guess...😆 Yes.! But still its a story and i will have to give a detailed explanation to it
But neil is shooo goood... The way he explained his bebe as to why he didnt approach avni directly...that was aaawww...❤️ Yes he is.! Thats where he stand out from the general crowd
Yaar ab plz na jaldi se pendrive ka raaz kholo... And avni ka reaction laao na... Yes ofcourse
Eagerly waiting for the next one...
Aise hi surprises dete raha karo...🤗


Thank u so much dear 😊
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Superb👏

Abhishek🤣I really felt bad for him.Avni ke chakar mein chaar ladki pitli.🤣 Avni ke chakkar me nahi, Neil ke chakkar me 😉
But bohath hardworking hai ri. Yesi detective sirf aapke update mein milega.Hahaha so true.!
Great update.👏Four month ki mehnath hai dr.parikh.😛Yes Exactly.! 4 month Abhi ki and 1 month Neil ki.
Anmol ratan neil ki.😃
Neil khanna is to cute. But usmein bohath saare patience hai ri. Four month he bear his helplessness.😒 and still his condition is no better. He is still strughling for her love. Poor guy.
Bichare detective sinha ki band bajgai. But d.sinha convinced bcoz of neil's pure love and his helplessness.😛 How can anybody deny him. He is so humble and genuine, Abhi ko bhi manna hi pada
Wow,yeh banda bebe se bhi sab kuch bata diya. Actually ri, mujhe toda yaad tha bebe ke sapno ki rani dialogue. Conform karne keliye bohath chapter ko phirse stalk karke aayi hoon.😆 Arey, ab kya stalk kis tumne, maine refrence diya toh tha, link bhi di thi
So bebe knew Everything about avni. Now,its time for official proposal.😃 Yes. When he got the confirmation about her existence then only he shared with Bebe.
I told u he's too cute but he's perfect ri. I loved how he respect her. He dont wnt to approach her directly. He want approach her family first. Good impression chata hai ladka.😎 Bus Avni ko khona nahi chahta, Apne Pyaar ki Or uski Family ki Respect karta hai.
Voh milgai first meeting se hi. Neil khanna ki charm se koi nahi bachsakte.😎
Now,iam really scared for sherni reaction. I know his intension wasnt wrong but dont know how she gonna take it. Ahaa. This will be something worth reading.
Awesome ri continue soon.


Thank u so much saf for ur detailed comment.!
Means a lot dear.!
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

amazing👏the chapters are just better and better and so much more interesting thank u so much neil's perfect plan and bebe helping him is awesome Family's support is must and loving this detective guy he is super cool and funny😆 Thank u for mentioning that. I will take the full credit 😉

every scene is so beautifully written i see adiza performing right infront of the whole story is excellent keep up the good work😊 Aww. That was a huge compliment. So sweet of u to say that

love
safia


Thank u so.much safia for ur kind words.!
Means a lot to me dear.!
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Redrose1208


Are by 1 month i meant neil khud 1 month se dhoondha na... 4 month toh detective dhoondh raha tha... N neil's decsription of avni was romantic...rather very romantic but infront of a detective... It was funny... Yeh sab personal diaties mein likhne ki cheeze hai bhai...


Haa yes.! 1 month Neil ne khud Dhunda then Detective did the job.!
Accha that way.! Yeah i agree, But jab Tak Usko bataega nahi voh dhundega kaise, thodi na Neil ke pass koi photo tha Avni ka. But i get ur point.!
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth



Detective Sinha...God I'm tubelight sometyms😆
So all 50 chapters...were planned out from the beginning itself.So 50 chapters in total.
PS: u absolutely deserve the compliments


😆😆 hota hai hota hai, kai baar tubelight moments bhi aate hai life me.!
Yes, the whole story is planned out from the very start.!
Initially i thought it will go atleast upto 50 chaps but now as i see it, it is surely going much ahead than 50 chaps.! I hope u guys wont be bored.!

Thank u for saying that.! 😉

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".