AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 39

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

awesome

Thank u 😊

Originally posted by: Redrose1208

Unres

Mera matlab tha ki aisi jagah pe neil and detective ka discussion band kiya hai ki main kal raat se hi soch rhi hoon ki aage kya hua hoga, aise kaise karte ho yaar humko hawa mein latka ke chodh diya...😒 Hahahaaa.! 😆 and i thought i ended their conversation over there. Jaldi jaldi past reveal karao and avni ka reaction laao... Intezaar nhi hora ab mujhse... Jaldi ka kaam shaitan ka kaam.! So have patience and hold onto ur horses

Baki toh yaar... Ek mahine se itna bada office chodh ke yeh millionaire ek signal pe dhoondh raha tha apne love at first sight ko... Hahahaha... Meko laga tha abhi abhi pagal hua hai.. But nhi yeh banda toh ek mahine pehle se hi pagal hai.. .😆 Ek mahine nahi 5 mahine se.! Remember he saw Avni 5 months before their First official meeting

Avni ka vo gesture was so gud... She is sweet as well as fierce... Thank u for mentioning that

Aur yeh detective wala idea pehle nhi aaya neil ko...yeh ladka bhi na. ..akele akele dhoondhta raha...help le leta toh jaldi mil jati... Ab kya kate voh hai hi itna pyaara.! Apne pyaar ko bhi khud hi dhundna chahta tha

But neil's interaction wid the detective is hilarious... Aur uska description of avni for the detective got me rofl..🤣. Mujhe laga voh Romantic tha. I didnt know it came out to be funny

Chalo hamare love sick puppy ko ek info toh yaad aayi barabar ki vo doctor hai.. And that was the most imp info, as u may have read in next chap

Ab na jaldi se yeh shaadi ke rishtey wali mystery ko solve karo... Yes.! On it

Aur tomorrow laao baba.. Kitne updates tak intezaar karaogi hamare tillu ka sapna poora karane mein... Tomorrow ke phle 5 months Ka Past Aayega na toh thoda time to lagega hi 😉

Waitng for the next update eagerly... Update soonish...❤️

Thank u so much buddy for ur kind words.!

Originally posted by: An_Introvert

Aww!! Can Neil get anymore picture perfect?!!I bet he will. This guy always stumps me😆 Yes ofcourse he can coz its in my hands 😆

Sinha ji is in his 20s😲Dont tell me.! I always assumed him to be some old man by their intial interactions Yes he is.! I have given his description in initial chaps too, like the same geeky clumsy stupid teenager Yeh meeting toh kuch aur hi level pe tha🤣Enjoyed that one alot. Thank u so much

I'm more than ever eager now to know how everything fell in place😊And I can't wait for Avni's reaction to all this. And i am more than eager to reveal everything. Some parts are already revealed in next update 😉

Loved the poem Riya❤️It perfectly sums up this story in few lines😳[B] Aww. That was such an amazing compliment.! Thank u so much dear.! And yes i have written it with the same thoughts as u have mentioned.! 😉

Thank u so much dear for ur amazing words.!
They mean everything to me.!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I entirely forgot about Abishek . He was apponted by Neil to fetch information about Avni .😆Kuch jyada hi soch liya meine . Hahahaaa 😆 I was so enjoying ur guess game. Had so much fun. U even brought kareena.😆

He was following her for one whole month forgetting everything😲Total love struck at the very first sight . Nah.! He wasnt following her. He was searching for her. He saw her once in signal and then she vanished. He searched her for a whole month when he saw her again for second time in that Accident fiasco. Then he got to know she is a doctor and then he lost her again Now I am impatient for Avni's reaction on this. Firstly it feels strange to hear that someone had been following you for so long without your knowledge and had appointed a detective to get information about you . Gussa bhi jayas hai . Hope she doesn't misunderstand . i agree with you that it feels strange. But you are taking it as a stalker angel. It wasnt like that.! Pata nahi kisne sabke dimag me stalker wala scenario fit kar dia hai. I am making it clear again, he wasnt following her, he was searching for her.!

Thank u so much Sri.!
I hope i am clear as to what i wanted to tell un the story.!

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

You like ending on cliff hangers now a days...

Neil to bahut pehle hi avni ke pyaar me gir gaya tha..

Ladka bas shayar bnte bante reh gaya🤣

😆😆
That is so true.!
You never know, kya pata shayar bhi ban gaya hoga toh.😆

Originally posted by: prathe

wow what a cliffhanger yaar😆but bantha hai readers ko satana chahiye todi bahuth writers ko bhii😛

accha build up dia hai apne maza agaya padne mein😳

will wait for your next part😳

Hahahaaa.!

Ab chapter ko kahi na kahi to stop karna hi hai na.!
But i used to give cliffhangers very rarely.!

Thank u so much.!
Next is also up, i hope u will read it soon.!

Originally posted by: Kathy_927

Aww this Khanna shahab is too cute and iresistable I agree.!

yaar he is a totally gone case. I can understand the

poor fellow Abhi's state and not to forget that he is

also adorable. I think I kindaa like him. Aww. Thanknu so much for mentioning that

Yaar this is the thing I love about your writing

that you make all the characters relatable and

lovable. That was really a hearttouching compliment for me. So i am really thankful to u for saying that

Waiting for next Chap.😉

With Love

Kathy❤️

Thank u buddy.!
I have alredy updated the next chap too.
Do have a look at it.!

Originally posted by: darsh333

I reread the whole 30 chapters from the beginning at a go today to notice where all i had missed the hints you had dropped way back then!😆Stalked both threads till this page😎 OMG.!!!!!!! Like Really.!!!! Whole 30 Chaps at one go.!!! That is something.! Impressive.! And only to get the hints.! Oh man.! I dont to know how to process this news

Now i get it how you had managed to keep the suspense alive😉you had actually dropped the proper hints only in the 1st few chapters.. Haww. You cant say few chaps. They were almost untill chap 14 then the story kinda went to a phase where you successfully managed to keep us in the avneil land for long until you broke the suspense😆i appreciate your writing skills for that👏am i not right??😉 Hahahaa 😆 Do i really need to stamp it for u 😆 Right now i am feeling like the mischevious child whose mischief has been caught

After rereading i understood bebe knew it from the very beginning..sapno ki rani😆..neelama from the 1st meeting at pareikh house..and i guess boys gang knew it too??though their chances are less😆shweta and avni were the people who had no idea about this😆 woh woh woh.! Are u doing a thesis on this or what.?? 😆 Yes.! You are right about Bebe which i have told in very next chap after this.! About the rest of ur guesses u will have to wait and read. The story will itself tell u

Photos were taken by abhishek as according to your latest update?😆but neil started hanging those photos only recently..after their engagment as avni had been to his room then and there were no photos then or the photos was hung after his fever chapter??😆especially after his kiss miss scene😃 Another good observation.! The pics wefent there till Engagement. I agree.! I feel like u have already done a detailed PHD in this Story and i cant me more happy than this

You had already left a teaser way looong back about neil entering his room to find avni seeing all these pics..how did i miss them then and paid no heed that was a hint too!🥱 Yes i told in the teaser that Neil came running and Avni was shocked to see something in his room but i never mentioned that she saw her pics. That was the whole suspense.

I know avneil are now in mumbai..but if incase she is going back to jaipur in upcoming chapters can you include avni dd ali aakash anjali conversations in that emergency exit areas..i realised after reading today that they never clubbed up after the initial chapters.. Yes ofcourse i will add those things. They have interacted but on WA and not face to face.

And where is rhea??she is missing since long..or will she come to close some other loophole??😆 Every character has some purpose to serve in This story. Riya has also been assingened some work by me in this Love story. Abhi uski jarurat nahi hai. She will be back with bang to do her job in Avneil's story.! She will be required later.! I have planned everything.! Like everything. So just trust me with this

And it suddenly struck to me..why did you choose avni's profession as doctor!Afterall coz our writer riya is a doctor!😊or any other reasons behind it??😊 Keep guessing 😉

And lemme say..after rereading all the chps at one go it brought such a good soothing feeling..i was all smiles while reading it..thanks for the smiles🤗 Awww.. so so so glad to know that I could make u smile.! Mission accomplished

And you are indeed such a good writer riya!..you use very simple words to write your story and your words connect so well with us readers..i loved the whole ff..😊 Yes. I have started writing this with the same intent. I wanted this story to be simple written in plain normal english but with the feelings and emotions to be on point. That will be the highlight of this. Now that u gave me a feedback about the same, i am so happy that i could convey what i wanted to and in a way as planned. So thank u so much for that till now on reading it occasionally after every update i never realised its beauty..reading at one go i understood this indeed deserves to be a book!and it is becoming one😊 Awww... that was a huge compliment for me. I am honoured.! Thanks a ton

Now onto the latest update..abhishek had captured her photos..and neil followed her 1 long month..hope it doesn't make avni angry.. Neil searched for her for a whole long month when he found her just once in that span. Avni is unpredictable, u never know woth her

Neil was a gone case way back then..he staying at jaipur for such long..no wonder he was so madly in love with her..😆 Yes.! Exactly.

I have got a suggestion..if you could use the black colouring for the flashbacks instead of the blue..i personally feel it is a bit difficult to read the blue one..instead could you change to a different font in black to show it is flashback..only if you are comfortable and okay in considering this bechari reader's request😆 the black are the present time na, i wont be able to make the difference then, coz later i willl write both the parts parallely, like present and then past. It will be really confusing then, also i am going to include the parts from previous chaps too, so i will have to make them stand out too, so i have no other option except colour coding.! I am doing it for ur easy reafing only.! I hope u can understand

Update the next part very soon..!

Firstly, itna lamba comment dekh ke dil garden garden hogay.!

Secondly, Kya Analysis kia hai boss.! Hats off.! Puri ka pura Dissection kar dala previous chaps ka or abhi ka.! What a connection u have made.! Well done.!
Proud to have such readers.!

Congrates on Guessing Bebe's involvement correctly before mine revelation.!

Lastly, Thank u so much for everything.! This made my day.!
So so so happy after reading ur comment.! And sorry for such a late reply.!

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thank u so much buddy for ur kind words.!

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Riya! Hey buddy

Another great update. Thank u so much

First things first.I love the the characterization of Abhisheik.Since he is completely ur creation so all credits go to u. Yeh hui na baat.! Isko bolte hai compliment.! Thank u so very much.! That was huge for me He is funny, hardworking and talented.The guy took up such a daunting job and didn't give up on it.I can only imagine how difficult it is to take pics of girls without getting manhandled.Bechara pit bhi gya is chakar mein🤣 Hahahaa.! Yes you have got the essence of his character. I am so haply i could convey it

Neil's love struck looks and helplessness helped in convincing Mr D.Sinha. Neil can make anybody dance in his tunes, be it with his Humbleness or his genuineness

Btw what does D stand for? Detective.! D. Sinha is Detective Sinha.

I wonder what Neil would hv said to Avni had he been able to find her himself. Definately, not ILU in the first meeting.! He is that much sensible.

I still remember the old conversation between Neil and Bebe but honestly I hadn't guessed Bebe's involvement.Though the 'sapno ki rani' dialogue had left me confused dt tym. To be honest i though everyone would guess, it was so toight for me to keep the suspense alive but yess it has happened

Riya u hv so effortlessly sewn the lines from the old chapters with the new revelations.Dts some really smart writing on ur part👏. Thank u so very much for saying that. This was the exact feedback i was looking for after writing this chap
Means a lot to me dear

So did u write the whole scene during that chpter only or did u write it nw?? no no. I am writing it now.! Nothing was written from advance but i had the vision for this story na so i knew what and when to write. If you ask me what will be coming in chap 50, i can tell now itself. Though i havent written it. 😉

Neil not wanting become a sadak chap aashique... loved dt... matured with a sense of humor. Thats where he stand out and Define Neil Khanna's attitude

Waiting for Bebe's jasoosi...dt is ur next update.

I cant tell u how happy i am after reading this comment.!
Thank u so very much for this.!
I am honoured.!.