AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46)

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thank u so much dear.!
This really Means a lot to me esp at thi time whem i am running low on motivation.
Much Love.!

Hey whats wrong??

Y is our amazing story writer lacking motivation?

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#412

Ummm ...🤔

Will Neil speak the whole night ? Or kitne mahine ki kahani baki hai .I was wondering whether Avni was existent in the room 😕So it was Bebe who helped him in the whole process . I should appreciate their efforts of calling each Parikh in the telephone directory and inquiring about Avni . I think I'm not so patient 😆 Aur they cracked it too and Bebe even asked her family friend to keep Neil's proposal in front of Neela . Wah ! Aisi dadi mil jaye toh zindagi ban jayegi . Bebe is the brilliant of whole lot 🤓

Neil should write a autobiography of how he reached till Avni 🤓

Ri you should definitely try your hands in writing poem .

A special request !

Edited by AgnesFan - 7 years ago

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#413

I don't have words to appreciate u.

Bcoz no words can't compared with ur writing.

Yesi daadi har grandchildren Ko Naseeb huve.

Mein aaj sirf yeh emoticon use karne Vaali hoon=>

Bcoz mera haal vahi hai.

Yeh kya kardi aapne. Blue Munda toh perfect hai hum jaante.

Voh fictional hai hum voh bhi jaante.

But yeh nahi jaante uski bebe bhi perfect hai.

Uff, meri daadi bhi itni cool Hoti( she loves me but itni cool nahi).

NeNe scenes always rocks. But BeNe scenes bhi kuch Kam nahi hai.

They rocks. Wow,Cid mein hona chahiye bebe ko. Theen din mein ek ladki Ko dhoondhli.

Itne jaldi koi detective bhi nahi karpayi. Kya Abhishek ki character katam hogai.🥺(sirf yaha pe yeh emoticon maaf karna)

Aapke story mein voh bhi perfect hai.

Sach mein Munda ne bohath mehnath Kiya hai.

He love her very much. I hope humari sherni jaldi green signal.

Itna tadapaneki bhi achi baath nahi. Bichara.

So bebe ne itna kuch Kiya unke pote ki sapno ki Rani Ko dhoondne keliye.

Superb update ri,really loved it.

Continue soon

Edited by rilsaf - 7 years ago

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey whats wrong??
Y is our amazing story writer lacking motivation?

Ahaa.! Nothing much.!
Just going through a phase of writer's block and the responses arent helping me either.!
I think i need a break.!

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Ummm ...🤔
Will Neil speak the whole night ? Or kitne mahine ki kahani baki hai .I was wondering whether Avni was existent in the room😕 Ohh.! I am so sorry if this was boring. I was trying to relate everything from past chaps, so that no question left unanswered. But i think thats where its not clicking with the readers. I will cut short this things and wrap this up soon So it was Bebe who helped him in the whole process . I should appreciate their efforts of calling each Parikh in the telephone directory and inquiring about Avni . Yes. I thought it needed to be mentioned. If i would have directly wrote about Bebe has found Avni then there will be Lots if How's and the story would have lost the connect. I think I'm not so patient😆Aur they cracked it too and Bebe even asked her family friend to keep Neil's proposal in front of Neela . Wah ! Aisi dadi mil jaye toh zindagi ban jayegi . Bebe is the brilliant of whole lot🤓 Yes.! Bebe is the cutest

Neil should write a autobiography of how he reached till Avni🤓 Hahaa 😆 Do you think Avni or The readers would have digested his Summarised Story of How he fell for her and then how he found her 😉

Ri you should definitely try your hands in writing poem .
A special request ! I do write poems. Infact Poems are the first thing i have started writing even before Fiction 😊

Thank u so much for the needed insight.!
I am grateful.!

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: docritu99

Ahaa.! Nothing much.!
Just going through a phase of writer's block and the responses arent helping me either.!
I think i need a break.!

Oho writer's block!! Dnt worry happens to the greatest of writers. I'm sure you will be back with a bang.

As for the responses...actually there was less to analyse in this chapter.Atleast dts the case with me.But I understand u wanted to give a clearer picture of evrythng that has occurred in the past... and requires a few chapters.

Dnt worry.People r enjoying it.Soon comments will pour in.

Gud luck for the next chptrs.

Love

Tapasi

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#417

beautiful update riya loving this dadi pote ki jodi such cool relationship 👏 itni mehnat ki dono ne aur joy of finally finding her was absolutely thrilling loving how this story has so many surprise elements

bas avni ke reaction ka pendrive info ka wait hai pls update soon

love

safia

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thank u so much for the needed insight.!
I am grateful.!

I was really feeling sorry that I have hurt you 🥺 I expected some reaction from Avni . I really missed her . It wasn't boring . Don't cut short for me .

Sorry if I have hurt you 😔

Take your own time to write .

I was asking whether you put them as a book ! 😉

A request . Could you write AvNeil meeting after 10 years both Avni and Neil's POV . if you have time .

Edited by AgnesFan - 7 years ago