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Naina Arora

@Naina_Arora

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

I read all the chapters in one sitting.. I must say the story is really good with occasional fights and mushy romance.. I loved it too much. I must say you that I am gonna read this story when ever I feel bored.. It is such an instant turn over for mood..

All the chapters are really good..from starting to this latest chapter I never felt bored or timed out..

Waiting to read more from you.. keep going..

Are you on Wattpad? I have seen an ID which I thought must be you..

Sorry, I can't stop my curiosity. do let me know if it is you.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: RomComFan
This is sooo adorable, love him with those chits and letting her win Abd all her excitement...can't wait for the next part

Thank you! Happy you liked this chapter. Stay tuned for the next!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Naina_Arora
I read all the chapters in one sitting.. I must say the story is really good with occasional fights and mushy romance.. I loved it too much. I must say you that I am gonna read this story when ever I feel bored.. It is such an instant turn over for mood..
All the chapters are really good..from starting to this latest chapter I never felt bored or timed out..
Waiting to read more from you.. keep going..
Are you on Wattpad? I have seen an ID which I thought must be you..
Sorry, I can't stop my curiosity. do let me know if it is you.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this story. And yes I am on wattpad too...joined not too long ago because of the same issues you were having with IF- not much response/feedback!😆 so I figured I could put it up on wattpad as well so that a few more people may read! But IF has great discussions and there are a few people here who are super generous with their comments and also consistent with their feedback!

Anyway I'm glad you found the time to read the entire story in one go and that you enjoyed it...hope the upcoming bits won't disappoint.

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Naina Arora

@Naina_Arora

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this story. And yes I am on wattpad too...joined not too long ago because of the same issues you were having with IF- not much response/feedback!😆 so I figured I could put it up on wattpad as well so that a few more people may read! But IF has great discussions and there are a few people here who are super generous with their comments and also consistent with their feedback!
Anyway I'm glad you found the time to read the entire story in one go and that you enjoyed it...hope the upcoming bits won't disappoint.

I am sure you won't disappoint me. but put it on wattpad too only if you are patient cause people on wattpad take a lot time to come out of their shells..😆

initially I was very disappointed there also.. but later on the genuine readers will support you as long as you keep writing..

it is completely up to you.. I agree IF has great discussions to carry on but I have never been a part of it.. keep going.. I would love to support you on wattpad also..😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#255

@ Naina I have put up my stuff on wattpad too. there's this FF and also a few of my oneshots too. So if you have time you can check that one out too...it's only about 3-4 oneshots. Username is neeraja09. Look forward to hearing your feedback on that too!

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Naina Arora

@Naina_Arora

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Posted: 7 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: neeraja91
@ Naina I have put up my stuff on wattpad too. there's this FF and also a few of my oneshots too. So if you have time you can check that one out too...it's only about 3-4 oneshots. Username is neeraja09. Look forward to hearing your feedback on that too!

I will check them😊

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#257

what I love in your story is how you bring DD and Ali in it as important part . Special hug and flying kiss 🤗 I badly miss them yar.

Avni and her silly tricks to settle the choice for honeymoon😆 I love this playful and carefree side which we will never get to watch in show . Forget that we won't even get to watch them together any soon and I doubt are CVs in any idea to resolve their issues . 🥱 Sorry for rant ! I couldn't just hold it and am just loosing connect with both Avni and Neil who have become total side kicks in the show .

Europe itself is a beautiful continent . I always wanted them in City of Love Paris ! 😳 I will wait for your honeymoon updates . A special request . Just like KaiRa let them relive their marriage moments and do a white wedding as a honeymoon gift of Neil . I always wanted to watch wholesome white wedding of AvNeil😭

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Originally posted by: AgnesFan
what I love in your story is how you bring DD and Ali in it as important part . Special hug and flying kiss 🤗 I badly miss them yar.
Avni and her silly tricks to settle the choice for honeymoon😆 I love this playful and carefree side which we will never get to watch in show . Forget that we won't even get to watch them together any soon and I doubt are CVs in any idea to resolve their issues . 🥱 Sorry for rant ! I couldn't just hold it and am just loosing connect with both Avni and Neil who have become total side kicks in the show .

Europe itself is a beautiful continent . I always wanted them in City of Love Paris ! 😳 I will wait for your honeymoon updates . A special request . Just like KaiRa let them relive their marriage moments and do a white wedding as a honeymoon gift of Neil . I always wanted to watch wholesome white wedding of AvNeil😭

I can totally relate to your feelings with regard to the show...kaash we could see more Avneil moments...they have so much to talk about but here girgit has taken center stage.

I want to see the characters we love and adore like DD and Ali get more screen time but show main aisa hota nahi...that's why it's a conscious effort to include them in my FF. Happy avneil toh sapna ban ke rah Gaya Hai...sadly!

As for white wedding like kaira...honestly the idea is very romantic and cute but if I include it in my FF it'll be a copy na! Hope you understand why i am reluctant to include it. But i hope i can put enough cute moments in it to satiate the avneil romance quota that everyone craves. Also i had considered other cities but Paris seemed too cliche that's why it came down to italy and Spain. And since I have visited a few places in Italy I thought I may be able to do justice to writing it...

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Wow I loved it.

It's so cute and sweet update.

I love this side of avni. Her tricks to convince him was commendable.

Ali and dd have special part in avneil love life. Unfortunately CVS forget them. Just like how they forgot Neela ma.

In this chapter, I loved how you bring dd in their life. He's so cute. Totally loved everything.

Yay!!! honeymoon

Yeh Neil bhi na cheating karrahi te. Lady don Ko pata chalgai.

Can't wait for next chapter.

Bring it on. Iam waiting.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#260

Wow I loved it.

It's so cute and sweet update.

I love this side of avni. Her tricks to convince him was commendable.

Ali and dd have special part in avneil love life. Unfortunately CVS forget them. Just like how they forgot Neela ma.

In this chapter, I loved how you bring dd in their life. He's so cute. Totally loved everything.

Yay!!! honeymoon

Yeh Neil bhi na cheating karrahi te. Lady don Ko pata chalgai.

Can't wait for next chapter.

Bring it on. Iam waiting.

Continue soon.

Thank you! I'm also excited about the honeymoon... hopefully the chapter will turn out ok. As for DD I love his character. He's loyal,sweet and such a lovable guy. He deserves to get more screen space on this show. Neelama Ko maar diya but poor Ali is just out of the show... disappeared! Wish that could happen to girgit! The shows current track is really depressing...things between avneil are not getting better at all and usko dekh ke mood kharab ho Raha hai :(

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