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Posted: 7 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Yay! 25🥳
Congratulations
Awesome update as usual.
Thank god Ali forgive her.
Bichari ne bohath kaam ki usskeliye.
Loved this chapter. They are friendship goal. Hope CVS usse phirse le aai. Iam missing him.
Last group hug was awesome.
Continue soon.

Thank you so much saf!😊 forgive toh karna hi tha! Afterall ali cant be angry with avni for too long!I also really miss Ali!. I wish uske saath aur scenes hote! His bond with both avni and Neil was special.even Aman was good. I wanted to see more bro sister bonding also. She came back only for him and now he's been sent away permanently! Wish he could make a comeback too along with Ali.

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Long time due neeraja!

So, I had read first 4chapters initially, when you had started on, but later due to my travel plans I couldn't really keep up with it. And lo! The story is already 25 chapters old. Big congratulations !!

So, I had some time on hand today, and started reading it again and couldn't keep it down at all. I am super proud to say, I am already 10 chapters down. The chapters are beautiful ! How colorfully they potray Avni's life in a daily routine. I absolutely love how the little details you've placed in the story. Her building relationship with Neil,her taking up a job, her insecurities in life, her relationship with shweta and prakash. Everything is perfect.

I'll surely read the next parts as and when I can.and then you will definitely hear from me again.

Anticipating more beautiful chapters. <3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me
Long time due neeraja!
So, I had read first 4chapters initially, when you had started on, but later due to my travel plans I couldn't really keep up with it. And lo! The story is already 25 chapters old. Big congratulations !!

So, I had some time on hand today, and started reading it again and couldn't keep it down at all. I am super proud to say, I am already 10 chapters down. The chapters are beautiful ! How colorfully they potray Avni's life in a daily routine. I absolutely love how the little details you've placed in the story. Her building relationship with Neil,her taking up a job, her insecurities in life, her relationship with shweta and prakash. Everything is perfect.

I'll surely read the next parts as and when I can.and then you will definitely hear from me again.
Anticipating more beautiful chapters. <3

@puja thank you so much for such a sweetly worded comment! I'm glad that you not only found time to read it but spent enough time to read a bunch of chapters in a row. I hope that the remainder of the FF will also be an enjoyable read for you and iI'l definitely look forward to your feedback on those too! I do have a few more ideas brewing and hopefully I can write them in my future chapters...

P.S waiting to read more of your FF too so keep those updates coming!😊

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Anu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Such a cute update... Love the tie in to the past and how she tried to gain her forgiveness... and esp the inclusion on Neil on the hug. Congrats again.

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Binh

@Binh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Such a cute update... It definitely brought a wide smile on my face...

Loved it...

Edited by Binh - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Binh
Such a cute update... It definitely brought a wide smile on my face...
Please update soon

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it:)

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Kiranrathore

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Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Wow awesome chappy neerja 👏👏...after long tym 😊😊...loved the way neil thought abt avni and avni dd cute devar bhabhi moments 😛...nd also neil avni cute fights and romance 😳.. It all was awesome dear...plz plz update next

Edited by Kiranrathore - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: rinku95
superb
continue soon

Thanks rinku!! Humesha apne comments likhne ke liye thsnk you! Much lou😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore
Wow awesome chappy neerja 👏👏...after long tym 😊😊...loved the way neil thought abt avni and avni dd cute devar bhabhi moments 😛...nd also neil avni cute fights and romance 😳.. It all was awesome dear...plz plz update next

Thank you babe! Appreciate the double comments😉 it's very very sweet of you to take the time to do this! ❤️