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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

Oh! I read the whole thing in one go!! It was so gripping. Absolutely loved their bickering. And the fact that how attentive Neil is to everything about avni. Great stuff!

Hi! Thank you, im glad you like it:) x
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
I have a doubt: has Anand kidnapped Neela to make Avni stay away from Neil? Just an assumption. I can't wait to read more of it sweetie. Continue soon and much love
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

I have a doubt: has Anand kidnapped Neela to make Avni stay away from Neil? Just an assumption. I can't wait to read more of it sweetie. Continue soon and much love

You will see in the next chapter😆 Thank you, much love x
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Posted: 7 years ago
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*FLASHBACK*
Avni unlocked her phone to see a message from an unknown number

It was a picture of Neela, tied up and gagged
A message beneath it read 'Go outside, by the tree, pick up the paper and make sure you follow its instructions'

Huffing she ran over to the tree
Picking the paper up she read it

"Break that bodyguards heart or I will break Neela's face"

*FLASHBACK OVER*

"Shut up Neela ma" Anand mimicked
Neela rattled her chair around

Anand bent down, cutting her ropes, he dragged her to the car outside
"Take her home "

The driver sped off as Anand smiled down at the picture of Avni in his wallet

Avni wiped her face as Neil called her
Turning to face him she smiled

"Avni"
"Yes Neil"

"Call me Neil one more time and I will"
Avni furrowed her brow "You will what"

"Kiss you"
Avni blushed, damn he was smart

Neil crossed his arms "Either way Avni, I win"
Avni gulped "Oh really, is that so"

Neil nodded "You could end this game really quickly, by admitting how you feel"

"I already have"
"What you speak isnt what your eyes show Avni, so let the games begin, if you dont admit how you feel by the end of the week I will get you a new bodyguard and walk away"

Avni nodded
"But Avni, if I am right and I always am, make sure youre ready for a marriage"

Avni choked "what do you mean marriage"
"So you will be Avni Khanna"

Avni nudged him "Its the new age Khanna, women can keep their own name"
"Oh Avni, no one has ever proposed to me before"

Slapping his shoulder she laughed "If anyones on bended knee, it will be you not me"

Neil rubbed his hands "We shall see about that"


This chapter is dedicated to Zara_Imam, for guessing what had happened
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
I love jar of hearts by christina Perri 😳❤️ It was really so cute .
Anand kidnapped Neela so that he can make Avni dance to his tunes . I'm confused who is anand . Is he working for anyone or just an obsessive lover who wants to win her by hook or crook
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I love jar of hearts by christina Perri 😳❤️ It was really so cute .

Anand kidnapped Neela so that he can make Avni dance to his tunes . I'm confused who is anand . Is he working for anyone or just an obsessive lover who wants to win her by hook or crook

Hi, so do I! Thank you! Anand had a past with Avni, but they broke up, he is working for someone , but that is still unknown as to who he js working for.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avni ran into Neela's room, holding her close she kissed her cheek

"Im so sorry, I should have gone out with you"
Neela shook her head "Avni, I got us into this mess when my husband divorced me for not being able to bare a child, adopting you was and will always be the best thing I have ever done, Anand and Vivaan are just an obstacle, we can and we will get through them"

Avni led her head on Neela's lap "But if I would have stayed with Anand"
"Then you and I would be unhappy, he could never love you, never protect you, but Neil, he can Avni"

Neil gritted his teeth outside the door, walking away he dialled a number "I want Anand found and brought to me, alive, I will finish him myself "

Avni left the room about half an hour later after Neela had fallen asleep

Lying in her bed she huffed, Neil a constant on her mind
She felt something crawl on her leg

Shaking it she pulled the blankets up but could see nothing
Closing her eyes, she was nearly asleep when she felt something tickle her foot

Pulling herself up she switched on the light
Neil's face came into view from under the blanket

"Neil, what are you"
"I heard you were ticklish"

"Well, whoever told you that was a liar"
Avni turned her head away

Neil yanked her hips, pulling her closer to him, wrapping her legs around his waist, his nose touched hers

"Then dont move, let me explore, prove me wrong"
Gulping she nodded

She suddenly felt very hot as Neil's fingers traced her waist, his other hand tracing her leg

Her breathing turned ragged as she tried to control herself and her thoughts
His hands now at the top of her spine, traced over her top, all the way down to the bottom of her back

Arching her back she gasped, her chest now hitting his
Smirking he traced her neck with his finger, down to her chest

Breathing in her scent , his nose trailed across her neck
His tounge licked the crook of her neck

Avni couldnt take it anymore and with a breathy moan she called out his name "Neil"

Losing all sense and control he pushed her down onto the bed, her eyes flew open as she looked into his
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
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"Im all yours when you admit it"
Pulling himself up, he walked out of the room

Avni glared at the closed door, he had gotten her all hot and bothered but in the end had not delivered

Well, two could play at that game
Running her hand through her hair she laughed

"Oh Khanna, youre messing with the wrong woman"

The next morning

Neil had just gotten out of a very cold shower, his towel hung low around his waist

Avni, walked over to him, licking a drop of water on his arm, he turned to face her

Licking her bottom lip she sighed as she bit into it "Sorry I was thirsty"

She ran her hands over his broad chest, dragging her nails down his arms "I do like a man who works out"

Neil was in shock, he had never seen Avni so confident, but he was damn sure of one thing, he liked it, he liked it very much

Avni massaged his shoulders "You must be so tired all of the time, come sit, let me massage your back"

Neil sat down, Avni poured oil on her hands
Rubbing it on his shoulder blades, she ran her hands down his back

She bent her head round, sucking on his neck "Avni" he gasped
Standing infront of him, she ran her hand through his hair, tugging it back, he looked up at her

"Tell me what you want Khanna"
He couldnt take his eyes off her as he tried to get closer
"You"

Avni ran a sharp nail, all the way down to the top of his towel
"Tell me to stop "
He shook his head "I cant"

Letting go of his hair she winked "I can"
Walking away she ensured her hips swayed just that little bit extra

Neil shook his head "Come on dude, youre better than this"

Looking down he realised, he needed yet another cold shower or two.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Sorry for being late to comment and thank u for dedicating the 15th chapter to me. Now coming to the story I'm glad that Neil came to know that it was all Anand's trap. I can well imagine Anand's condition when Neil gets his hands on him😆 I'm loving how Neil and Avni are teasing each other (hotness overloaded)☺️. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Thank you!x

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