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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

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Hey sorry for not commenting on all other chapters ! Exam tume u see... im busy studying... But i did read all them and they were all too good..

Specially the one wer Neil teased Avni by getting close and just left... then Avni massaging him and did exactly like he did leaving in btwn after arousing him so much 😳 wwwooo tat was hott

Coming to the recent update... so happy that finally my dear ones confessed their love 😊😃 it was so pleasant... loving AvNeil ❤️ wish to read more...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy


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Hey sorry for not commenting on all other chapters ! Exam tume u see... im busy studying... But i did read all them and they were all too good..

Specially the one wer Neil teased Avni by getting close and just left... then Avni massaging him and did exactly like he did leaving in btwn after arousing him so much 😳 wwwooo tat was hott

Coming to the recent update... so happy that finally my dear ones confessed their love 😊😃 it was so pleasant... loving AvNeil ❤️ wish to read more...

Hi! Honetly dont apologise , im a uni student so I get it! I hope you do well on your exams!
Thank you! Im glad youre enjoying it, I will update soon x
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Roy slammed the pictures down on the desk
"Dating the woman youre meant to be protecting"

Neil stood up "Sir, we cant help who we love"
"Look boy, I have treated you like a son for years, but you must choose, its the job or her"

Neil sighed, massaging his temple "Why cant I just be put on another case"
Roy shook his head "The job or her"

Neil stopped "How did you get that recording of us confessing our love and those pictures"

Roy slid the letter over
" If youre reading this, then you should know your dearest bodyguard Neil is having relations he shouldnt.
And thinking about it, im a loyal citizen and want the best for the people.
Meaning, his relation with Avni goes against the values your staff believe in.
Going back, I cant say how long its been going on for.
Of course, it could have been from day 1.
I just want the best bodyguards to protect the jewel.
Not someone who wont respect his role.
Great work though.
Time is running out to find a better bodyguard.
Of course, I can always help with that.
But for a price.
Obviously I have helped you, now you help me with a job.
Maybe something temporary.
But thats your decision.
Thanks for your time.
Hit me up sometime.
Even if its late.
Many regards
V"

Neil skimmed the letter, each sentence he went through until he stopped.
Using each starting letter of the sentence he frowned.

"You f**king idiot Roy, its a threat and im not there " slamming his hand down he ran out of the office.


Neil finally arrived at the house, sirens surrounded him as the house blew up
He prayed Neela and Avni werent at home

Any ideas what will happen next or anything you want to happen next?
Vivaan is smart and Roy is an idiot, incase you dont remembr Roy is Neil's boss who gave him the job in the first chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
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"I AM GOING TO BOMB THEM" OMG it's V- Vivaan, so this guy is all active now. How could the boss be dumber than the employee? 🤣 Why am I having some feels that something wrong is going to happen with Avni? But still I know Neil would do his best to save them from the bombing as well as Vivaan. Continue soon
Edited by Zara_Imam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
It's superb. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

"I AM GOING TO BOMB THEM" OMG it's V- Vivaan, so this guy is all active now. How could the boss be dumber than the employee? 🤣 Why am I having some feels that something wrong is going to happen with Avni? But still I know Neil would do his best to save them from the bombing as well as Vivaan. Continue soon


Yes! Hes back, I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veenapain

It's superb. Waiting for next.

Thank you, I will upload soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
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Neil ran into the house, as he looked for the two women
Covering his mouth he coughed loudly, he saw the murky shadow of someone facing him

"Khanna"
"Avni" Neil sighed in relief, jumping over the log he grabbed her
"I didnt know you were a fire fighter in your spare time"

Neil smirked, he was sure he couldnt live a life without Avni's remarks
"Where's Neela"

Coughing she grasped his arm as the smoke blackened their skin
"She went out"
Neil nodded

"Avni I need you to jump over the"
Avni had already jumped, Neil shook his head as he went to jump, the stairs fell through separating the couple

"Avni, go"
"Im not leaving you Neil I can fix this"

He shouted loudly as his leg got trapped
Avni climbed through the hole, trying to lift the bannister she wiped the sweat off her head

Avni panicked as Neil passed out
Pushing the bannister she finally got it off as she tried to wake Neil up

The fire continued to spread , Avni grabbed him, pulling him across the floor she screamed as his leg nearly got stuck again

Finally dragging him far enough out of the house she dropped to her knees
The paramedics took Neil in the ambulance as Roy rested his hand on her shoulder

"Hi Avni, im Roy, I think we need a chat, I will take you to the hospital"
Avni agreed as she watched her house burn in the flames


"So, you and Neil huh" asked Roy as he started the car
Avni nodded "Youre his boss right"

"Yes and I gave him an ultimatum today, you or the job"
Avni gulped

"And what did he say"
Roy shrugged "He didnt have the time to pick"

Avni nodded as she drummed her fingers on her leg
"Youve got to understand Avni I just want the best bodyguard to protect the jewel , not somebody who doesnt respect his role"

"Neil does respect his role, hes done nothing wrong and has saved my life multiple times, I dont want him to lose his job"
Roy patted her leg

"Then I trust youll ensure he makes the right decision"
Avni nodded

She was willing to sacrifice anything to make him happy.
"Maybe you should hand over the jewel to me, for safekeeping, since thats causing the issues "

Avni furrowed her brows, what was with this guy, well if Neil trusted him then she should to.

"Ill consider it, right now my priority is Neils health, thanks for the lift"
Pushing the car door open she ran into the hospital without looking back
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
I don't know but I'm suspicious about this Roy. Is he supporting Vivaan? (Don't know, just an assumption)
Aww,Avni and Neil are each other's guardian angels. Amazing update, continue soon (I know I am shameless) hehe, love u Maya( hugs and kisses)
Edited by Zara_Imam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's getting very interesting.Thanks for fast updates.

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