The Bodyguard- (25 Parts) Part One Complete P18 Announcement - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Yahh!! I'm first. Okay so Riya is so sweet and understanding here. Mr bodyguard got beaten up again by his lady. Aww poor Neil! I'm loving it. Do continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Yahh!! I'm first. Okay so Riya is so sweet and understanding here. Mr bodyguard got beaten up again by his lady. Aww poor Neil! I'm loving it. Do continue soon

Yay! I did consider making her bad but decided against it, thanks for commenting x
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
It's so great to read AvNeil having open relationship. They never shy to show their feelings for each other openly .
Omg !Avni is a death to Neil . She hit him there 😆 The girl is such badaas .

The song was really great . Which film is it from ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

It's so great to read AvNeil having open relationship. They never shy to show their feelings for each other openly .

Omg !Avni is a death to Neil . She hit him there 😆 The girl is such badaas .

The song was really great . Which film is it from ?

Thank you, I feel sometimes its better to be ovbious , I am not sure but its called Maahiya - Teri Kasam and Adnan Sami sings it x
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Posted: 7 years ago
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"Avni" Neil shouted as he ran down the stairs after her
Screeching she ran behind Neela

"Neela ma look, he won't leave me alone"
Neela laughed as Avni ran around Neela

Neil jumped over the table as Avni ran around the sofa
"Im going out bye" shouted Neela

Avni stopped "You cant leave me hes obsessed"

Neil raised his eyebrow "What do you mean obsessed"
Avni poked her tounge out "Means you cant get enough, how does it feel to be two timing me and my cousin"

Throwing a pillow at him, he ducked and picked it up
"I sang the song for you, you crazy woman she just happened to be there"

Throwing the pillow back at her, she groaned as it hit her in the face
"Khanna you should know me well enough by now to know I wont fall for your lies"

Neil hurled himself over the sofa and picked her up
"What the hell are you doing put me down" she screamed

"Sure" dropping her on the floor she glared up at him

Standing up, she pulled her jacket around her chest, huffing she walked away

Neil dropped to his knees "Ruk jaa, o dil deewane "

Avni turned to face him "Who do you think you are?
Runnin' 'round leaving scars
Collecting your jar of hearts
And tearing love apart
You're gonna catch a cold
From the ice inside your soul
So don't come back for me
Who do you think you are"?

Neil gasped, putting his hand on his heart

"Ha mohabbat ki yeh saja hai
Ha mohabbat ki yeh saja hai
Tu bewafa hai tu bewafa hai
Tu bewafa hai tu bewafa hai"

Avni slapped her forehead "No, you were meant to say "Only love, only love can hurt like this
Only love can hurt like this
Must have been a deadly kiss
Only love can hurt like this"

Neil stood up "So that means , you love me"
"No Khanna, youd be lucky"

As she walked away he sat down " Yes Avni, yes I would"



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its so cute. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Its so cute. Continue soon

Thank you x
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
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Avni rolled her eyes as she saw Neil leaning against the tree watching her

" What do you want Neil"
Shrugging he walked over to her "You, is that so hard to believe "

"But when you could have someone like Riya, why would you want me, shes everything im not"
Neil took her hand "Thats your view, it isnt mine, all I am asking for is a chance "


"For what " she focused on her hand lying in his
"To prove to you I can be everything you want and need"

Shaking her head she laughed "I didnt know you were so soppy"
"Just take me seriously for one minute"

Avni cupped his face with her hand "I will never be good enough for you"

"Why, dont I atleast deserve a chance"
She nodded "Of course, but with someone good enough and that isnt me"

Neil realised that maybe Riya's plan was the only way
"Why arent you good enough"

"A tainted woman could never fulfil your life, I dont do love, I dont do this"
"Youre doing it now"

Avni smiled "No Neil, you are"
Neil grabbed her arm "What did you just call me"

"Neil"
"You dont call me that, dont do this Avni, dont distance yourself from me"

Yanking her hand back she walked away
Wiping her eyes she held her phone to her ear

"You hear that, its done, just please dont hurt her" Avni begged
"Avni, Avni dont you listen to him" cried Neela

Neil sighed "Im going to make you admit your love Avni, no matter what it takes "

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh! I read the whole thing in one go!! It was so gripping. Absolutely loved their bickering. And the fact that how attentive Neil is to everything about avni. Great stuff!

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