AvNeil SS: The Vows We Take; Complete - Page 25

Omg how awesome... But I can't believe its cover. Pleased write again soon coz your talent is undeniable

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Omg how awesome... But I can't believe its cover. Pleased write again soon coz your talent is undeniable

I guess in AvNeil home will be filled with Avni's gadgets . So gadgety . 😆😆

Brilliant.! I am speechless.!

The whole showdown was spot on with perfectly placed emotions and nerdyness and gadgetyness.(i dont even know whether those words exist or not)

Avneil together as a team are unbeatable and to par. No wonders. Chalo finally Vidyut or Neela ka bhi milan hogya.

What a complete package this uodate and whole story was. Absolute class apart.!

Also not a single kiss.. dil todh dia yaar. I was even expecting some guttergiri too but remained in Avni's thoughts only. Anway i am demanding an absolute gutter epilogue. And i wont stop at just there, i want new story/stories too.. Demanding shamelessly with a plastered goofy grin on my face. Chahie chahie matlb Chahie...!!!


On a serious note, I didnt even realise when this story came to an end. It was an utter pleasure to read this. Thank u so much for writing such brilliant piece for us. Keep up the good work and do surprise us ofter lime this.

Love ya.!

Dont forget *Chahie, Chahie..Chahie.!!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I guess in AvNeil home will be filled with Avni's gadgets . So gadgety . 😆😆

Indian forces should be equipped with such gadgets to baet down the terrorists groups . They are only given guns sadly ! So true!

You tech brains . I guess you are so much gadgety😆 Loved every bit of it . I didn't get Vidyut's part anyways . He was just used by AvNeil , Ali and DD to take down DVM ? Vidyut was to get info on DVM's plan. He couldn't be of help further because the confrontation happened at the warehouse itself! If DVM hadn't shown up then, maybe Vidyut could have done more.

Will be waiting for epilogue . White wedding Jo adhoore reh gaya in show I want here . Ali being maid of honor for Avni and DD best man for Neil .

Originally posted by: docritu99

Brilliant.! I am speechless.! Thank you!!😳

The whole showdown was spot on with perfectly placed emotions and nerdyness and gadgetyness.(i dont even know whether those words exist or not) I don't care coz I love it!! Thank you!😃

Avneil together as a team are unbeatable and to par. No wonders. Chalo finally Vidyut or Neela ka bhi milan hogya. Yeh to hona hi tha😆 Neela ko sexy bar dancer banney key liye to nahi chod sakti thi na😉

What a complete package this uodate and whole story was. Absolute class apart.! Thank you so so much!🤗

Also not a single kiss.. dil todh dia yaar. I was even expecting some guttergiri too but remained in Avni's thoughts only. Anway i am demanding an absolute gutter epilogue. And i wont stop at just there, i want new story/stories too.. Demanding shamelessly with a plastered goofy grin on my face. Chahie chahie matlb Chahie...!!! 😆😆 Imagine Avni being such a gutterbaaz😉

New story...lets see when the inspiration strikes...but I don't think it will be this long!


On a serious note, I didnt even realise when this story came to an end. It was an utter pleasure to read this. Thank u so much for writing such brilliant piece for us. Keep up the good work and do surprise us ofter lime this. Such high praise coming from you is truly humbling!

Love ya.!
Same to u!❤️

Dont forget *Chahie, Chahie..Chahie.!!😆

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Awesome dear

Loved it

Bonjourr!

Originally posted by: basket_101

Bonjourr!

The credit has me like 😳😳. I'm glad I was of help!!

And moving on to the part, I feel like I say this every chapter, but this was my favourite chapter of the story so far! The pace of it was very nice, and I even enjoyed the length 😉

It was truly a perfect tie-in of the plot = an effective climax basically. Thank you so much for saying that!😃

I love that AvNeil don't need words to understand each other! That's the beauty of their relationship, especially in your SS! In fact even their initial attraction began without words so it's all a full circle <3 Their connection was instantaneous & is now so deep that words r no longer necessary!

I won't lie, when Neil said, "Stay with me sweetheart," I was smiling so wide. It was pretty cute, regardless of the circumstances in which he said that. Thank you.😃

"Keep your head out of the gutter Avni!!" - No please don't 😆😆 Somebody has to I guess😉

Anyway, this whole part was such a good way to end off the story, sans the epilogue of course! I'm really sad that after the epilogue, this story is coming to an end - but the journey was well worth it 😃

Once again, very well written!!! Going to check out the epilogue very soon and get back to you!! 😃