Originally posted by: AgnesFan
AN tech ki founder toh she has to definitely take Neil on a surprise rude .But banda was bit foolish to check whether her AI works . 😆 Coz he has never seen anything like this in his life before...kneejerk reaction tha...I was really stunned by your descriptions . Good stunned I hope?😳
Avni is such a badaas ladki . She went to Neil to confront him . That's actually better instead of waiting for his reply . U have really balanced his anger and confusion so well keeping our composed Neil intact . I am loving the characterisation . Thank you so much! I find taking a proactive approach to things is much better than cleaning an even bigger mess retroactively!
Your humor sense man 1 Take a bow for that ! DD and his untimely humor 😆🤣 Neil's wit must have been out . He is an expert in catching Neil off guard . He thought about operation and therapy too 🤣🤣 The guy is seriously a wife to Neil 🤣😆 I thought, if anyone can actually make fun of Neils's sexual dilemna tastefully...it will be DD! Also, hez so pure hearted that hez not making fun of Neil. Infact hez expressing his relief! Ofc in his innocence he doesn't realize the blunders hez committing! But he didn't talk abt operation...just therapy!
Ali being the undercover CBI was a shocker 😲 Good one, yes?
Ali-Avni reunion 😭💔 I thought Ali will shoot questions to her . It was beautifully written . How did her learn she was Avni . As I've mentioned it, he came here as the liaison after the briefing from the defence dept, thats where he finds out her true identity! Neil ko jealousy 😆😆 He knows Ali is Avni's childhood friend na ? Yep. The jealousy was at their instant closeness & probably the overlong hug!😉
I am waiting how will they use Vidyut as a bait . I mean how did he agree to work for Neil Stay tuned for answers..
You are wonderful writer man ! 🤗 Your story has everything balanced . Romance , humor , emotion , 👏⭐️ Completely an entertainment package 👏 I am completely intrigued 😃
Arjun
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