AvNeil-Shweta RS: The Deceptive Facade ~ Ch. 2 (24-11-2017)

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nina282

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Love it. I like the bonding between avni and shweta.

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theodyssey

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Omggg update soon please! You're a crazy good writer!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Two cheers to Swetha . She is gonna be the rock for Avni through this . I'm waiting to read justifications for Neil's action .

This ratty 😡🤢

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Hola people!

Chapter 2 is up! Please read & leave your review.

Love,

Ashi. :)

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swati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Lovely update waiting for next

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Great update! Neil shouldnt control himself though...let him blast that chuhi so she crawls back into the hole she came from! Love the bit about jubi having only one expression! Lol so true! Can't wait to read more. If you have time please update ur other FFs too!

Edited by neeraja91 - 7 years ago

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Neil being uproaringly angry on Avniz behalf👏👏

Only one expression on Juhiz face😆😆

Neil bomb ab Juhi par phatney wala hai...bechari majbbor maa with a najayaz aulad ka ab kya hoga😕

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

What could be the expression on her face . That crybaby face she makes or now that disgusted looks she gives to Avni .

I feel in show too he was angry for Juhi lashing out at Avni . He raised hands too .

I wish in your story he just gives a taste of her own medicine .I don't want Avni to stop him . That nerve of the women .

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Afsana103
👏👏its awesome they way you wrote rip the head from rats body Wah Wah kudos to Swetha and her brain which is sensible not dumb like her family you really portrayed Swetha thoughts hatred and suspicion towards chuhiya very well at the same time her concern and love for Avni I really loved it.

Thank you so much dear! :)

@Bold: That was the frustrated fan inside me saying it. 😆