AvNeil-Shweta RS: The Deceptive Facade ~ Ch. 2 (24-11-2017)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Burning in anger reading this! I hope show mein Jab ye ho vahaan Neel na ho. But brilliant writing! Please update fast. Mujhe Tum sab FF writers say shikayat Hai ki Tum log ya to take too long to update or leave the story hanging...please don't. Reading all ur amazing stories now over and over again now especially when the showw is frustrating us! Loved this piece.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Omg,its awesome.I just want to break my phone aur andar aakar juhi aur neil maardoon.how could nril do that.hope,show yesa nahi dikaye.cont soon.iam waiting.

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Posted: 8 years ago

👏👏its awesome they way you wrote rip the head from rats body Wah Wah kudos to Swetha and her brain which is sensible not dumb like her family you really portrayed Swetha thoughts hatred and suspicion towards chuhiya very well at the same time her concern and love for Avni I really loved it.

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iykyk

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Originally posted by: neeraja91
Burning in anger reading this! I hope show mein Jab ye ho vahaan Neel na ho. But brilliant writing! Please update fast. Mujhe Tum sab FF writers say shikayat Hai ki Tum log ya to take too long to update or leave the story hanging...please don't. Reading all ur amazing stories now over and over again now especially when the showw is frustrating us! Loved this piece.

Sorry! I didn't intend to enrage you. 😛 But don't be too angry at Neil. Who knows? He may have some reason to act the way he did. 😉

Sorry for the delay in updating my stories dear. I was a bit busy. I may update my other stories too by today or tomorrow. My exams are coming up. So a bit busy with the preparations.

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing..!!👏👏

Can't wait to read more! Update soon..

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iykyk

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: avneil2
Omg,its awesome.I just want to break my phone aur andar aakar juhi aur neil maardoon.how could nril do that.hope,show yesa nahi dikaye.cont soon.iam waiting.

Calm down sweetie! Don't break your precious phone for that Chuhi. 😆 Don't worry. I won't butcher our Super cop like the CVs. 😳