Avneil FF: Love me forever (NEW CHAP UP PG 7) 21.07 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Interesting story
Avni was Ali's girlfriend and he tried to kill her
But who's the person tried to save Anika????
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Originally posted by: ...star...

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They fell in the sea. Stranger and avni both swims to the shore.

The stranger says" what were you doing. Have you gone mad. Why were you going to commit suicide. Dont you know that attempting suicide is a crime. Oh god if i hadnt came on time dont know what might have happened"

Avni says " are you done speaking? Even if you dont, then also i am going"

Stranger says "oh hello miss. Where do you think you are going? "

Avni says "its none of your business". And she says to walk. He follows her. He holds her hand to stop her.

He says "Miss. You are not going anywhere, after your attempt i cant leave you alone"
She glares at her hand and then at him. She shouts "leave me hand. And dont you dare to touch me again"

Neel leaves her hand and says "Sorry"
Avni glares him and turns to leave.

Neel says "you are not going alone". Avni turns.

Avni says "and who are you to say that"

He says "i am ACP neel khanna madam, and its my duty to make sure EVERYONE'S safety"

Avni says " how can i believe you". Neel takes out his ID and shows her.

Avni says" fine now let me go"

Neel says " no, you are going with me"
Avni says "no"

Suddenly a snake comes in avni's vision. and avni jumps seeing it.

Neel holds her and makes her quiet as the snake is seeing them. He removes her hair clip and throws it at the snake. Snake goes away. Neel smiles seeing that avni is still scared, a girl who is so fearless is now hugging him to life as she is scared of a snake.

Neel says "interesting"
Avni gets away from him and looks away.
Neel says "moments ago you were so fearless and now so scared"
Avni says "its nothing like that i was just shocked"

Neel says "fine as you say. Now let's go together as there are many snakes around that forest"

Avni says " fine if you insist so much"

Neel smiles and they leaves.

They walk to the car.

Neel says "So you havent told me your name yet"

Avni ignores him and walks ahead.
Neel runs to her and says "hey miss wait"

Avni gets annoyed and says "what do you want"

Neel says "nothing.. just want to know your name"

Avni says "fine"

Neel says "i suppose your name is not 'fine' "

Neel smiles and she gets more annoyed.

Avni says "my name is avni"

Neel says "nice name"

Avni says "Thank you"

They reach to the car and they sit in it.

Neel tries to start conversation many times but avni didn't let him succeed. She instead keep looking outside the window after telling him her address.

After 20 mins of drive they reach. They got out of the car.
Neel says "So you live here"

Avni ignores him and walks away.
Neel shouts " atleast say thank you"
and she goes inside the mansion without even turing back.

Neel moves his hand in his hair and says "she is a mystery. By the way i will take my thank you anyway".

And he goes in his car.

In mansion.

Neela sees avni coming inside. She rushes to her and says " bacha where did you go.. i was so worried about you"

Avni says "just to get some air ma. And don't take tension". And she smiles. And sits on the sofa.

Neela says "avni bacha i think you should go to a counsellor. And there is a best counsellor in Mumbai itself"

Avni says "ma you know na that it doesn't work"

Neela says "i know that but its try one last time"

Avni says "ma you have said this three times already"

Neela says "this is the last time. Please say yes"

Avni says "fine ma.. i will go"

Neela hugs avni and she hugs her back.


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Nice one. So Avni is not hiding her identity here..

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In Khanna house

Neel comes to his home after having a tedious day. He tries to sneak upstairs slowly. But Shweta catches him and says "tillu where are you going"

Neel lies and says "nowhere"

Shweta says, "you are trying to skip dinner, again right?"

Neel says "no, I was going to change clothes"

Shweta says, "no you were going upstairs to study a case then you will forget to have dinner and lie that you have had come back to have dinner"

Neel thinks 'how does she know' and says "actually"

Shweta cuts him and says, "don't say anything, just come and have dinner"

Neel follows her and sits adjacent to Shweta.

Shweta serves to Neel, and Neel serves to Shweta.

Neel says, "you also haven't had dinner, right?"

Shweta nods and says "this mom is just like her son"

neel smiles

They start to have food,

Neel says, "how was your day mom"

Shweta says, "packed as usual, tomorrow will be like that only"

Neel says "okay, so when is dad coming back"

Shweta says, "I talked to him today, he said that maybe he will be back by tomorrow evening"

Neel says "nice, then we will have a nice family time"

Shweta says "of course, that's why I am even working extra"

Neel says, "that's good mom, but don't stress yourself because of our family time, we will get it anyways sooner"

Shweta says, "I know and for family it's not stressing"

Neel says, "as you say"

Shweta says, "so how was your day, what happened today"

Neel says, "same as usual, but today was weird"

Shweta says, "tell me what happened"

Neel says, "I met a girl, she was such a ajooba I must say"

Shweta says, "a girl, tell me I am curious"

Neel says, "mom its nothing like that, actually she was full crack, she was committing suicide and when I saved her she was like I wasn't committing suicide and because of me we fell in the sea, stupid isn't it"

Shweta sees him curiously and sarcastically says "very" but neel didnt catch sarcasm in it as he is engrossed in ms ajooba's thoughts.

Neel says "also she is very bold and fearless kind of, like come near me and I will kill you types. But when she saw a snake she hugged me to life. Seriously such a ajooba"

Shweta says, "yeah what a ajooba" and she thinks 'yeah what a ajooba that made neel feel so comfortable around her and also that made him think about her till now'

Neel says "when I told her of her two sides, she said she wasn't scared but a little shocked. And guess what she said she doesn't trust that I am a cop, I had to show her my ID"

Shweta says, "what's the name of this ajooba that didnt believe my supercop " but she wanted to says "that effect my son so much that he is continuously talking about her"

Neel says "Avni"

Shweta says, "nice name"

Neel says, "mom I have to study a case now, good night"

Shweta says, "good night"

Neel gets up and goes.

Shweta says to herself "I have to meet this girl who had such an effect on my son after one brief meeting, I am impressed. after juhi I never thought Neel will ever talk about a girl"

Shweta's phone rings. She sees the caller ID and picks it up. Shweta says, "hey Prakash"

And she gets up and goes to her room.

In Neel's room

Neel comes and lies on his bed. Neel murmurs "why am I thinking about Ms ajooba"

Neel says, "shut up Neel, and sleep"

And Neel sleeps.

In morning

In avni's home

Neela is in the kitchen making sandwiches, she says "Avni where are you, you will get late for the appointment"

Avni comes and hugs neela from behind. She says, "good morning maa"

Avni grabs the sandwich, and runs to the gate.

Neela runs after her saying "at least have breakfast properly"

Avni says "I am getting late"

Avni runs out of the house and sits in the car.

Neela says "oh this girl" neela thinks 'this is the first time i am not accompanying her, god please dont get her nervous'

Avni starts the car and goes to her doctor's clinic.

After 20 mins she reaches, the building is nice and big. After some minutes she goes inside. The interiors are also nice, Avni goes and sits at the reception.

The receptionist calls her name and Avni goes to the doctor.

Avni knocks at the door

Someone says, "come in"

Avni opens the door and comes inside, that person says, "please have a seat"

Avni sits.

Avni reads the name plate that says, "Shweta Khanna"

The chair revolves, and the doctor is seen, reading a file.

The doctor puts the file down and says, "hey I am Shweta Khanna"

Avni says "hey I am Avni"

Hearing avni's name, Shweta thinks "why am I feeling that she is tillu's Ms ajooba"

Shweta says "hey, I was just re-reading your file, you have gone to many psychologists, but none helped you, right"

Avni nods.

Suddenly the door of cabin opens, and a man comes.

He says "mom"

Avni sees him and says "you"

The person sees Avni and says "you"

Shweta thinking "that means I am right'

Neel says, "I didn't know that you will take my advice to go to a psychologist so seriously that you will come to my mom, or do you liked me so much that you stalked me"

Avni says "none"

Neel says "then"

before Avni can speak, Shweta says "what brings you here tillu"

Avni silently smiles hearing tillu.

Neel says, "actually mom, you forgot this file"

Neel gives the file.

Shweta says "thank you, now please let me do my work"

Shweta smiles and Neel nods. And he goes out.

Shweta says "so where were we, yeah, so Avni what's your biggest problem"

Avni says "doctor, actually I have trust issues and hatred towards men, also that one incident changed me. I have nightmares too. "

Shweta says "what kind of nightmare, and when do have it mostly"

Avni says "like someone is killing me, and its not fixed as such, it mostly comes when I think about my past and around 1st September."

Shweta says "what happened on 1st September"

Avni's eyes becomes her depiction of her soul which is pained, emotionless, rock and black, she says "on 1st of September, my boyfriend stabbed me literally"

And a tear fell off her eye, Shweta passes her tissue, Shweta is also pained to hear that.

Shweta says "I need to know about what happened from the starting so that I could help you, can you tell me"

Avni says "yes I will tell you everything about my life"

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precap: avni tells her story

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in Shweta's cabin

Shweta says, "I need to know about what happened from the starting so that I could help you, can you tell me"

Avni says "yes I will tell you everything about my life"

Avni starts to narrate her story

Avni says "actually I used to live in Mumbai till I was 10 i guess. My father and mother has eloped and got married. After I was born my grandmother got to know that my father is married and has a baby now, but she didnt like this. She never wanted my father to marry my mother because of their financial difference. She wanted to get my father married to Neela ma who was a businessman's daughter. My grandmother and father had many fights due to his marriage therefore we used to live somewhere else and my father to used to do job in some company. My grandmother used to hate my mother but has a soft corner for my father so she wanted him back either by hook or crook. She neither hate me nor loved me much, because i was her grandchild she couldnt hate me but as i was my mother's daughter she didnt love me much but she do love me a bit, i felt love in her eyes. But when my younger brother was about to be born, my father had to give divorce to Ayesha ma and had to marry neela ma because my grandmother had threaten him. Still he used visit us with neela ma since she knew the truth. They both used to love us but i used to hate my father for the reason that he couldnt took a stand for us. One day, after my brother was born, mom and dad were gone to do some shopping for us but unfortunately they met with an accident and they passed away. Since then neela ma have taken care of us and nurtured us like we were her kids only. we shifted to live with our grandmother. But our life was not easy, as it was a joint family we used to have many fights. Though my grandmother used to love us but my uncle's family used to trouble us very much. We couldn't take it more so when I was 10 neela ma took me and Amol to Delhi.

In Delhi, everything so going well, I had made many friends and one of them was ali. Everything was so good. Maybe my fate didnt want this, my happiness was short lived. My life's best thing became the thing which ruined my life.
When we shifted to the society no one talked to us or wanted to be friends with us as we were new. But when the next day neela ma took me and amol to the play ground to have fun, a boy came to become friends with us. His name was ali. He started playing with us, seeing him many came to us and we all became friends. Same happened with neela ma, ali's mom become neela ma's friends and later many other became her friends. Everything was so great in life then.

=Beparwahiyaan kar na tu yaara
=Mainu tu ae jahaan ton vi pyara (x2)

=Hmm.. lele saari khushiyan
=Tu dede saare gham tu
=Tere utton sab kuch waaran

Later Ali and I became best friends, we used to go to same school also we live and play in the same society. All our things used to be same. We used to care about each other very much, also we used to have fun together. Life was so good. We had many memories on going on school trips, bunks, movies, family picnics, pranks etc. people used to think we were move then friends and that came true later.

=Beparwaahiyaan kar na tu yaara
=Mainu tu ae jahaan ton vi pyara

=Beparwaahiyaan kar na tu yaara
=Mainu tu ae jahaan ton vi pyara

On 1st September, when we were in twelfth grade he proposed him, and I was head over heel with him too so I accepted his proposal. At that time, he had given me a ring too. That day was the best day of my life, I was so happy. That finally i was happy with someone, that someone will love me. also for me ali was my everything, i thought that he is my prince charming. I was so wrong, my destiny doesnt want me be loved. For us 1st september was our valentine's day. Stupid thought. Love only gives pain and Valentine day is a worst day because it celebrates love which gives you pain ultimately.

=Seen thand peh jave

=Jadon tenu vekhda
=Darda ae dil mera
=Doore na tu ho jave (x2)

Everything with ali was great, everything seemed so magical, so nice, i thought everything will remain like that but no. next year around august he has started behaving weird, he used to be very upset all the time. When I used to make him laugh, he used to give me fake smile. I thought may be because of college he is stressed. But i was wrong here too. He was upset with a thing that i didnt knew. But i ignored it. how stupid, hence my stupidity was paid with betray.

=Tu hi mera chann tu hi taara..

=Beparwaahiyaan kar na tu yaara
=Mainu tu ae jahan ton vi pyara (x2)

On our anniversary, I thought he would be happy, and we met at our favourite spot, the park behind society on 1st September 12 am. I remember I was talking to Amol, who used to study at night and ask me his queries. Ali was not here so I thought to answer Amol's call. That night he called to wish me. He was in Mumbai at that time due to some work. Then ali came so I ended the conversation with Amol that moment itself.

"Avni" ali shouted, I turned and saw him standing few metres away with a bouquet in his hand. I smiled and ran to him.

"Happy anniversary ali, is this for me" I said. I was so happy seeing him that i have never thought that he could ever betray me. I thought he loved me but i was so wrong.

=Sahan wangu vass jaaye
=Tere dil ch pyar mera
=Marr ke bhi mud aawan
=Je naal hove pyaar tera (x2)

=Tu hi mere jeen da sahara

Ali smiled and said, "happy anniversary my baby, and yeah this is for you, beautiful flowers for my beautiful girlfriend" and he hands it over to me, I took it and smelled it. I hugged him, and he hugged me back. When I broke the hug, and starts to separate slowly, I felt immense pain and a low scream escaped my mouth. Tears starts to escape my eyes. It felt like I was tearing apart, the pain was very much. I looked in ali's eyes, my eyes were filled with many questions, I was still in shock that how could he do that, how could he stab me, didnt he love me. But he remained silent. I didn't know that my happiness was so short lived , my best day was actually the worst day. I again screamed because of pain.

=Beparwaahiyaan kar na tu yaara
=Mainu tu ae jahaan ton vi pyara

Ali moved backwards taking each step slowly. I saw a knife covered with blood, my blood, in his hands. I touched my abdomen from where blood was coming out. I fell on the ground, on my knees, crying while watching ali walking to his car. As soon as he disappeared, i felt my vision getting blurry and I fell on the ground.

=Beparwaahiyaan kar na tu yaara
=Mainu tu ae jahaan ton vi pyara

Avni cries and says to Shweta "he stabbed me and left me there for dying, with flowers on my grave. my anniversary flowers were actually there for my grave, see my ill fate. around 12.10 amWhen I didn't get home, nor picked up my mom's calls. She panicked and came for me. She has found me unconscious and took me with her. i dont know how she managed to save my life because she never told me. After that night, no body saw neela and Avni in Delhi. We went to London, and never looked back. We even didn't get ali arrested because I was in trauma and neela ma found to take care of me more important. And also because we didnt have an proof that ali did it. Why am i so ill fated, why couldn't i see the things properly, why was i so innocent. why was i so stupid in love? i think my stupidity paid my very well by stabbing me and by teaching me that men are not made to be trusted and love is the thing that will give you pain only."

=Beparwaahiyaan

Avni cries.

shweta says "dont cry please, everything will get alright" she passes avni some tissue and avni takes them to wipe off her tears. shweta wipes her tears too.

Avni says "now we have came back india unfortunately. but to Mumbai because of some important work"

Shweta says," do your grandmother know anything about it"

Avni says "no, we hid this from everyone because we didnt wanted them to get hurt by knowing this"

Shweta nods and says, "I am really sorry to hear about that, I know how betrayal feels"

Avni nods

Shweta says, "but don't worry you will overcome this fear because you deserve happiness which will come after you conquer your fear. Trust me"

And shweta takes avni's hand and squeezes it, she also smiles.
And avni nods.

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precap: Avni says "you here! are you following me"

Neel says, "I should have asked this"

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pandit says "the date for engagement should be 4th September and wedding should happen after 1 week exactly"

everyone claps.
And avni and neel looks at each other in surprise.

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Originally posted by: shikhsk

Nice one.looking fwd to this

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Originally posted by: __shibani__

Nice start😊

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

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Originally posted by: Kshailja

Nice one. So Avni is not hiding her identity here..

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