Avneil FF: Love me forever (NEW CHAP UP PG 7) 21.07

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Posted: 7 years ago
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index :

chap 1 pg 4

chap 2 and 3 pg 5

chap 4 at pg 6

chap 5 at pg 7


Hey guys, I have come up with a
new FF. Guys my mind is overflowing with new ideas and I am penning it down
even though it is crazy and I have four more ideas in stock. Will write them
too soon and will continue my previous work also very soon. Tell how it is?

also red colour is for song.

Author's note: guys i have asked you again about but no one replied whether i should write about juhi's feelings. So finally i think i shouldnt write it as almost 50 percent people were against it. if you think that my thinking is wrong then tell me. also you can tell me if you dont like my idea of this ff, i will discontinue it.


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In the park (in night)



Avni is facing the moon and
talking to someone very happily over phone. Someone arrives in the park and
stands behind avni at some distance.


"Avni that stranger shouts, avni turns and
sees him standing few metres away with a bouquet in his hand. Avni smiles and runs
towards him.


"Happy anniversary ali, is this
for me avni says


Ali smiles and says "happy
anniversary my baby, and yeah this is for you, beautiful flowers for my
beautiful girlfriend and he hands it over to her, she takes it and smells it.
She hugs him and he hugs her back. When she breaks the hug and starts to separate
slowly, she feels immense pain and a low scream escapes her mouth. Tears starts
to escape her eyes. It feels like she is tearing apart, the pain is very much. She
looks in ali's eyes, her eyes are filled with my questions, she is still in
shock. She didn't know that her happiness was so short lived. She again screams
because of pain.


<font color="#ff0000">Beparwaiyan,</font>


Ali moves backwards taking each
step slowly. Avni sees a knife covered with blood, her blood, in his hands.
Avni touches her abdomen from where blood is coming out. She fells on the
ground, lying on the ground crying while watching ali walking to his car.


<font color="#ff0000">Beparwaahiyaan Kar Na Tu Yaara

Mainu Tu Ae.</font>


<font color="#ff0000"></font>


Years Later (In 2017)



Avni comes to the cliff and
sits on the barrier. She looks sees the view and starts to talk to herself.
After speaking out what's in her heart, she feels light. She stays there for
few more mintues and then she gets up. She gets shocked seeing a man standing
behind her, and in this shock she takes a step back and falls. That person
seeing her about to fall tries to grab her hand but loses his balance and falls
with her.



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I know it is short so sorry about that. But its a teaser, I
hope that it made a place in your heart. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't
forget to hit the like and comment down below please. I love comments, so
please comment and don't forget to hit the like button who so ever read this,
its a humble request.


Also give me your valuable suggestions.


Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.


Thank you for reading


Love you all


Mehak




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Asr_Kkg122 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Looks interesting!! 😊 do continue <3
Kshailja thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Why Ali tried to kill Avni???
Kuchh to gadbad h Daya, pata lagao...
Different storyline but the cliff scene was so amazing that love to read it again and again... But hope you will bring some new twist to that scene...
Continue and update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I guess avneil ki story mein cliff mention Na ho aisa ho nai sakta.Teaser is amazing . Looking forward for it.n Mehak let the thoughts come in .We will have great fun in reading ur thoughts
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...very interesting teaser..
Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mehak I love the Beparwahiyan song of Suyyash...I think Ali thought that Avni betrayed him..loved it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I think Song is by Suyyash featuring Charlie It is already rocking 1M in 4 day excited for its next part and ur Story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congo for your New FF Mehak!
The teaser is very intriguing and interesting!
Update the next part soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting story
Avni was Ali's girlfriend and he tried to kill her
But who's the person tried to save Anika????
Update soon please
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Mehakbhambri thumbnail
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Originally posted by: Ayesha134

Looks interesting!! 😊 do continue <3

thank you so much dear... will continue soon 😊

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