Unexpected Events.. prologue 2 updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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it was raining hard that night. neil thought that atleast nature was able to understand his emotions. he had a sudden urge to have a drink only to remember the next about a promise he made that he would never drink again.
it was a wise decision because had he not been sober that night , he would have missed the light knock on his quarters door.

he opened the door only to receive a shock. at first he thought he saw a ghost or perhaps he was thinking about her so much and with such dedication that his imagination took the solid form.

can i come inside neil???
it was after she spoke that he realized that she was standing in front of his house drenched in rain adorned in jewelries and wearing her wedding attire. too stunned to do anything he opened the door wide and allowed her room to enter. after closing the door he went inside to fetch a fluffy towel and hot water for her to drink. she was standing like a statue near his reading table. as he touched her shoulders, she reacted like a jolt of electrycity passed through her body and turned to look at him.

at that moment he saw what he was sure he would never see in his whole life..

she was crying.. his avni was crying.

hey ..

thats all for prologue.
do read and comment..



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humairaa1 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi there 😃
Lovely prologue ❤️
Please do continue and please pm me when you update 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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si intriguing . Please continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ayesha try to understand. i cant help you. ashish say something to your wife.

the man said quietly but urgently.

he is right aayesha.. its our mistake. so we need to pay the price and die for it. ashish said as he looked at his wife his eyes full of tears.

he could not understand how did their situation come to this. how did it turn like that. one hour ago they were celebrating aman's 30 days celebration and now they were standing in side their burning house.

fine we will die ashish, but when we die this person will die too. ayesha said and pointed the gun to the third person's chest.

you cant kill me ayesha. i am your only friend. the man said. he thought that ayesha wont shoot him but he also knew that she was beyond any reason so she might shoot him too.

i can shoot you. not because you sold us out. but because because you gave boss my aman and ananya to boss for the experiment. how could you??? how could you do this. you said they were your children too. ayesha shouted finally

because i am not their father. i have always love you aayesha but you choose aashish instead of me. and see now both of you will die and not only that your children will be experimented. they will be our best specimen. you should be proud of it.

and just then the people who were stationed outside the burning heard three gun shot sound and then the burning house collapsed. they informed their boss and then with two children they left the site.

prologue two is up...
do read and comment.😳
icecake..


Edited by Icecake - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Is this past ? I'm superbly confused
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Is this past ? I'm superbly confused


yup... it is
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sounds interesting 😊
I wonder what experiments Ayesha was talking about...
Thanks for the pm ❤️ 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely prologue.can't wait for the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Okayyy...
So the past is different.
And did you use Ananya name by mistake or is their any new Ananya in the story???
I am too excited for this story...
Update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kshailja

Okayyy...
So the past is different.
And did you use Ananya name by mistake or is their any new Ananya in the story???
I am too excited for this story...
Update soon..


Thats the mystry..
Isnt it?

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