Avneil FF: Love, really? (chapter 6 updated at PG 10)25/09 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Why there's much of Avni Neil???
Update soon please

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Originally posted by: srividhya68

superb upt
poor neil
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Amazing Update Mehak!
Eagerly waiting for the party
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Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Amazing Update Mehak!
Eagerly waiting for the party
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This is my ff, hope you like it.

Author's POV

Avni is wearing a baby pink coloured off shoulder knee length dress, with some shiny peral work done on the front and sleeves. She has paired it up with beige platforms and has pinned her curled hair to one side, with natural makeup and minimal jewellery. She is indeed looking beautiful and breathtaking.

Neela is wearing a beautiful blue saree, ananya is wearing a white knee length skater dress, kabir and amol both are wearing tux.

They all come to their mansion's hall, looking excellent.

Kabir says "oh my god, all the kapoor ladies are ready to kill people with their looks."

Avni, ananya and neela blushes.

Neela says "kabir, stop it na

Kabir says "I am saying the truth sweetheart, and besides my queen, my two lovely princesses you are stealing the show

Amol says "and me?

Kabir saysoh my handsome son, you will make all the girls fall for you

Amol smiles shyly.

Amol says "like dad like son

Neela says "lets go

Avni says "and shock the world

Ananya says "no, rock the world

They share a group hug , after that they goes out of the house and sits in car, neela and kabir in one car while the kids in other. The drivers then starts the cars and drives.

IN CAR

Neela looks tense and she is rubbing her hand in tension, kabir notices it.

Kabir says "What happened darling

Neela says "Kabir I am tensed because of Dayawanti Mehta

Kabir says "Don't worry sweetheart, everything will be fine, also we are together now, much more powerful, she wont be able even scratch my family.

He squeezes her hand in assurance, and neela puts her head on his shoulder.

ON THE VENUE

The venue is a nice hall, in a very expensive hotel; every guest is amazed to see the venue and its decorations. The place is very beautifully decorated with candle lights, lightings and flowers with some big showpieces. All the invited guests are in awe after entering the hall, and are eagerly waiting to meet the kapoors, they just know that the kapoors are some big businessmen in new York, and nothing else. All the businessmen except a few like Prakash are jealous of mr kapoor's money, of how rich he is. Also they want to make some good relationship with the kapoor's so that they get profit from him afterwards. This type of thinking is of mrs dayawanti Mehta also.

All the guests are talking with each other, tasting the new wines that are being served here and most importantly waiting for the kapoor's to make an entry. Even the reporters are eagerly waiting, they are feeding themselves on snacks and discussing about the kapoors, everyone is treating them as celebrities.

Everyone has reached expect for avni and amol, aru and ru are busy talking with their girlfriends, while ali and DD are talking in some other corner of the hall, kareena and rhea are discussing about their favourite topic that is none other than shopping and makeup. Meanwhile neel is busy with his phone and is sitting in the bar stool. Neel and aru and ru are wearing tux whereas ali and dd are wearing a t-shirt with jacket. Rhea and kareena are wearing beautiful green and grey gowns respectively. All are looking amazing. While the elders are wearing tux and sarees.

Shweta comes to neel and says "tillu

Neel says "mom, I have told you many times don't call me tillu in front of everyone

Shweta says "but here are only you and me

Neel says "I mean in public

Shweta says "we are alone here tillu, no public

Neel says "outside home

Shweta says "ok fine, by the way where is kareena

Neel says while taking a sip from his glass "maybe with rhea

Shweta says "till- neel you drinks, when are you going to tell me

Neel says "mom I don't drink and this is mocktail

Shweta says "you say you don't drink, but it is alcohol

Neel says " mom that is cocktail not mocktail

Shweta says "Tail is commons

Neel says "Mom cocktail is alcoholic not mocktail, and you know I don't drink

Shweta says "I knows, fine I go and find kareena.

Neel says "Bye mom

Neel think Don't know why this miss ajooba hasn't come yet, or maybe she hasn't got the invite, but she can come with rhea, like DD and Ali has came with us. When will you come I want to see you.'

Meanwhile, diksha comes to rhea and tells her that her dadi is calling her, rhea nods and says to kareena that she will come soon.

Diksha takes rhea with her.

Dayawanti Mehta(DM) says "you remember what task I have given you right? That to be friends with kapoors kids, we want to get profit out of your friendship and also to be close to neel, he is our golden bird, you have to trap him and here you are talking with kareena. Shame on you. You are dayawanti Mehta's granddaughter, and you don't have any option to fail, go and allure him, use your beauty, else whats the use of this beauty she laughs evilly. Rhea feels disgust and goes to neel so that her grandmother don't torture her.

Rhea stands next to neel and says "where are you lost, in someone's dreams

Neel says "no, I am not

Rhea smiles and says "really, avni when did you come

Neel smiles and says "where is she

Rhea laughs and says "got you

Neel laughs sheepishly.

Seeing them from far DM smiles evilly and says "now khanna's money will be ours soon

Suddenly every reporter gathers at the main door of the hall, and a chaos of sounds can be heard, DM turns to see who has arrived and thinks it must be the kapoors. A man, who is none other than mr Sharma kabir's india's company's manager, goes with a bouquet and makes his way through the reporters and says "welcome mr and mrs kapoor and hands over the bouquet to them. Kabir takes it them gives it to the one of his bodyguard. DM cant see their faces due to the crowd. The bodyguards makes the way for them, then mr and mrs kapoor goes on the stage.

Kabir says Attention everyone

Seeing kabir on stage, DM's eyes widens and she gets so shocked that she starts to lose her balance but ketan holds her before her falls. Ketan and Diksha too get shocked when they saw where their mother is pointing.

Everyone's attention is now on kabir.

Kabir says " hey everyone, I am Kabir, Kabir Kapoor and she is my gorgeous wife Neela Parikh Kapoor, and let me introduce you to my lovely kids at this line all three kids goes to the stage. "avni Ayesha kapoor, amol kapoor and ananya kapoor

PRECAP: kapoors meets the world, kids reunion with the gang.

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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't forget to hit the like and comment down below please.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

Awsome...Lovedd it yaar.

Hehehe... Neil waiting for his Ms. Ajooba...

Originally posted by: pri12

Awsome...Lovedd it yaar.

Loved DM's expressions after seeing Neela and Kabir

thank you so much

Originally posted by: srividhya68

nice upt
cont soon

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Originally posted by: Kshailja

Hehehe... Neil waiting for his Ms. Ajooba...

Nice update...

Loved that Dayawanti was shocked...

Now Dayawanti will get another shock to see Avni... Hehehe...

Waiting for Neil's reaction to Avni...

Update soon...

thank you so much.. will update soon