Avneil FF: Love, really? (chapter 6 updated at PG 10)25/09

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INDEX:

chapter 1 at page 2
chapter 2 at page 3
chapter 3 at page 5
chapter 4 at page 7
chapter 5 at page 8
chapter 6 at page 10
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i have came up with another idea for FF.

characters:

kabir kapoor: he is a top industrialist. he is very rich. he lives in new york with his family. he has very beautiful wife, neela and three children, avni, amol, ananya.
For readers: he is none other than crackpot aka kuwar amarjeet singh.
neela parikh kapoor: she is our neela ma. she loves her family very much.

Avni ayesha kapoor: she is our protagonist. avni has found her father in kabir and mother in neela. she is 22 years old and will do her MBA in india

ananya kapoor : she is avni and amol's sister and neela and kabir's biological daughter. she is 16 years old

amol kapoor: he is our amol. he is 18 years old and will do MBBS in india.

prakash khanna: top industrialist in india

shweta khanna: prakash's wife

neel khanna: their son, he is 22, will do MBA

kareena khanna: their daughter, she is 18 and will do MBBS

madhu khanna(maddy) : prakash 's sister

harleen kaur: bebe

ali: riya, neel, kareena's friend, he is also 22.

rhea mehta: loves her cousins, and is of 21, she is doing fashion

DD: neel and avni's friend, he is too of 22, he is doing something in Law

Aryan mehra aka aru: avni's best friend, he will go in police. he dad is an industrialist. lived in new york for years but in india for 4 years

siddarth malhotra: one of the handsome hunk in college.

rishabh sharma: he is also avni's best friend. he dad is an industrialist. lived in new york for years but in india for 4 years. he is doing law

ihita sehgal: amol's best buddy.


i will introduce other characters later.
in this ff, kabir is alive and he has married neela and accepted avni and amol has his kids and have a daughter ananya. rhea and hetal knows that avni is alive but doesnt tell anyone. they talk with them daily and loves them.
to the world avni is dead. dayawanti mehta and ketan and diksha hates them.
prakash has two kids neel and kareena.
all characters are same as in the show. plus their will be new entries as well.

the kapoors will come to india and will see what turns their life's will take.


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how you like it.
thank you
lots of love
Mehak
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New chapter coming tomorrow.. nhi to Thursday.. usse late nhi hoga
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Chapter 1


This is my first ff, hope you like it.

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The scene starts with a girl and a boy coming out of the airport with their lots of luggage.

The boy says "Di bataona hum kaise jaenge aur kaha. Me kitni baar puch choka hu aap bata hi nhi rhe ho(di please tell how will we go and where. I have asked you many times but you are not telling me)"

The girl replies "Amol. Wait na. Abhi to we are going in taxi. And where is a surprise"

Amol says "Di. Fine"

They take a taxi and after sometime reach the address which avni have given the driver before. It is a tall building. It looks like it is an apartment building, but the place is very beautiful.

Avni says "Chalo(let's go) "

While walking Amol says "Di ye to hotel nhi h. Phir yaha kaise rukenge. Batao na di (di its not a hotel so how will we stay here)"

They go inside the building and take lift.

Avni replies "Amol i have brought it before coming to india, with a motorbike and car too. Bike to aa gai h . Car aai nhi h. (Bike has arrived but the car hasn't)"

Amol asks "Kaise(how)"

Avni smiles as says "Dad's manager, Mahesh uncle, he helped me"

Amol says "Oh great"

They reach their floor and enters their apartment, which is on fifth floor. It is a 2bhk. Nice beautiful cosy apartment.

Avni says "Chalo andar ab(come inside)". While dragging her luggage inside.

Amol says "Di hum yaha rhenge(we will stay here) it's so beautiful."

The apartment is really very beautiful, with pretty and modern furniture and decor. Everything is according to their preference.

Avni says "pasand aaya na. Mene design kiya h interior. Dad's ke employees they helped me too, in buying and arranging the stuff. And ha hum rahenge but jab tak ma nhi aa jati.(you like it, I have designed the interior. Dad's employees helped me, in buying and arranging the stuff. And yes we will stay here until ma comes)"

Amol says "Ok. That means till today, then what will we do of this house"

Avni smiles and says "It will be our party house."

Amol gets happy and says"Great di."

Suddenly a thought comes to his mind and he asks avni "Ma ko pata h? (does ma knows)"

Avni replies "Nhi(no). Its our hiding place."

Amol asks"Dad?"

Avni says "Yeah he knows, if ma gets to know that we are staying alone, she will murder us. She knows that we are staying in hotel"

Amol says "True" and he yawns.

Avni says "Chal thoda aaram karle te h. Shaam ko rhea se bhi milna h(lets rest, in evening we have to meet rhea also)"

She points towards a door and says "This is my room and other is yours"

Amol nods and takes his luggage to his room and disappears inside, avni to does the same. As soon as they bolts the door, they go and crashes on the bed; And sleeps for hours due to jetlag.

Avni forgets to put alarm before sleeping and natural she wakes up. She gets scared thinking that she might be late because she is sleeping since very long time. She sees the clock and says "Shit its 6 already. I am late. Rhea will kill me"

Avni's phone rings and the phone shows rhea's name. Avni picks it up.

Avni says "Babe thoda late ho jaega.(babe it will get late)"

Avni says Thanks babe"

She gets up and goes to wake up amol. She finds the door locked so she bangs on the door and says "Amol uth na (amol wake up)"

Amol gets awake due to noise and says "Di 5 minutes"

Avni knows that amol will not wake up and will keep on saying 5 minutes, so she says"Rhea se nhi milna(you don't want to meet rhea)"

He wakes up instantly after listening to avni.

Amol says "Of course"

Avni says "To 15 mins me taiyaar ho ja.(then get ready in 15 mins)"

Amol says "Theek h(ok)"

After 20 minutes they both get ready and take the bike to reach the address which rhea has given.

Meanwhile at the park

Ali frustratingly says "kya surprise h(what's the surprise)"

Rhea says "wait"

Ali is here because neel drags him everywhere, in very friends meet. Rhea is everyone's friend except for ali's. He doesn't like her.

Neel and kareena goes to get ice cream for everyone. And rhea orders two more ice cream.

Rhea's phone rings and she picks up the call and says "ok great" she cuts the call and says "Now ali close your eyes."

Ali says "What"

DD says "ali do it, else you will not get surprise and we want to see it:"

Aryan and rishabh nods

Ali says "Fine and closes his eyes."

Rhea says "Surprise come"

Two people comes and stands in front of them, DD gets confused.

Rhea says "Now open your eyes", ali opens his eyes, Meanwhile neel and kareena comes with ice cream and gives ice cream to aryan and rishabh and DD.

Ali says "Ye kon h and ye surprise h?(who are these and they are surprise?)"

Everyone except rhea, Aryan rishabh and of course avni, amol is confused that who are avni and amol.

Avni says "Pehchana nhi(you don't recognise me)"

Aryan and rishabh gets up and goes to hug them

Aryan says "Chasni" and avni says "Aru" and Aryan hugs avni and rishabh hugs amol.

Amol says "Bhai, kaise ho(brother how are you)"

Aryan says "great" and hugs amol and avni says "ru" and hugs rishabh.

Rishabh say "I am good"

They break their hugs and Aryan says "Avni and amol, missed you guys"

Ali gets more confused that are they that avni and amol only or somebody else.

Rhea says "ali they are avni and amol only"

Ali gets shocked and happy "Sach h ye.(is it true)"

Amol says "Ha.(yes)"

Neel and DD and kareena are still confused, seeing their reunion they get more curious.

Ali jumps forward and hugs avni. Lifts her and twirls her. He puts her down and hugs amol.

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Precap:

neel says "so that means you are avni mehta"

avni says "its avni ayesha kapoor"

neel says "ok but i have never heard about you"

ali says "avni where were you"

neel says "dude she is your friend and you dont know"

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after sometime

neel says "gotta go, so everyone coming to the party right?"

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This is my second avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't forget to hit the like and commemt down below please.

plus read my first one too.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

Edited by mehak4 - 8 years ago
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Nice..
So Neil is not our SuperCop Tillu... Will miss Supercop...
But will definitely something interesting you will give us in this story..
Waiting for that..
Update soon..

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