AvNeil TS: Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga(Epilogue updated on Page 17)

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Arisha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Main phir bhi tmhey chahunga or chahungi? what is it? Neil kaha bhag gaya? hey Deeps jaldi jaldi everything right kro 😆

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lol_rofl
Main phir bhi tmhey chahunga or chahungi? what is it? Neil kaha bhag gaya? hey Deeps jaldi jaldi everything right kro 😆

Its chahunga only😆

Neil kaha bhaga voh jald pata chal jayega

Its only 3 shots so the mystery will be solved soon..

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

CHAPTER 1

Bebe found a note on Neil's bed saying ' I am Sorry Avni'. She shared the same with

everyone.

Avni excused herself and went to her room.9
Avni's world came to a standstill. Her heart wasn't ready to accept what her mind just saw.
Deep inside, she knew Neil can't betray her. But her circumstances were forcing her to believe them.

~Flashback~

Neil had told Avni about Juhi. He told her that she fell from a cliff but her body was never found.

Before two hours of the marriage:
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Neil and Avni were sitting in their room. They were holding each other.

"You know, I can't even express my excitement in words. Since childhood, I had always thought that my wedding will be the best wedding ever. But the circumstances were very different when we got married. But this time, I promise to fill your life with all the colours of happiness and love. I just can't wait to become your wifey." Avni opened her heart to Neil.

" Voh toh tum ab bhi ho wifey." Neil exclaimed with a smile.

" Haan toh ek baar phir ban jaati hoon."
Neil pulled Avni in for a hug.

He suddenly got a phone call. He picked it up. After the phono conversation, his hands were trembling. Tears welled up in his eyes. He didn't know how to react. Avni realized the situation...

" Neil, What happened? Tum itne tense kyun lag rahe ho?"

Neil looked at Avni with moist eyes.
" Ju..Juu...Ju.. Juhi zinda hai. She has been found in a hospital in Mumbai."

Avni was shocked to hear that. She felt really bad for Neil. Several thoughts filled her mind.

" Neil toh Juhi se bahut pyaar karta tha. Kya voh Juhi ke paas vaapas chala jayega. No, he can't do this. He won't betray me at this point of time. I have full trust on him." Avni thought while consoling Neil.

Neil was in a state of shock. He held his head in disbelief. His eyes were red with tears making their way down the cheeks. All his memories with Juhi flashed in front of him. He remembered the moments when they confessed their love and the moment when she fell to her death.

Suddenly Avni's face flashed in front of his eyes. He mind came across the moment when he promised Avni that he would never leave her side.

" Avni mujhe please thodi der akela chod do."
Neil requested Avni while looking the opposite side.
Avni agreed without any protest and passed silently from there.
Neela soon came to her and took her to dress her as the bride. Avni was only concerned about Neil at that time."

~Flashback Ends~
Avni was lost deeply in her thoughts
" Has he really left me forever? Has he gone to Juhi again? He left me because of Juhi?"

All these thoughts prevailed in Avni's mind.
" Kyun hota hai mere saath aisa. Main jisse bhi pyaar karti hoon, kyun chala jata hai voh?" Avni broke down saying this.

She groaned very loudly. Her makeup was completely spoiled with her tears, which refused to cease. She cried while resting her head on her knees. She collected all her precious moments with Neil.

She saw Neil come towards her. She quickly got up and ran towards him
" Mujhe pata tha tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaoge Neil. Tum vaapas aa hi gaye."

She was about to hug him but she realized it was a mere dream of hers. She looked at herself through the mirror, all dressed up in a bridal dress and makeup.

Avni pulled her necklace and threw it on the ground. She broke all her bangles, and wounded her hands severely. She removed all her accessories.
She quickly changed her lehenga and dressed in a plain saree.
She came to the hall where everyone was sitting in grief and disbelief. She looked at Bebe who was falling weak with every passing second. Bebe looked at Avni standing behind her. She expected her to break down in front of her.

But Avni came to them and asked them if they wanted any thing to drink or eat. Everyone was shocked to see Avni pretending as if nothing had happened.
" Kya hua? Aap sab mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe hain?" Avni exclaimed at their shocked expressions, trying hard to control her tears.

Bebe came near her and folded her hands.
" Hume maaf kar de Beta. Mujhe nahi pata Neil ne aisa kyun kiya." Bebe broke down in front of Avni.

Avni hugged her and tried to console her
" Nahi Bebe. Please don't say like this. You don't worry about me. I am fine, I am fine."

Avni left from there immediately, unable to control her tears.
Aman tried to follow Avni but Neela refrained him
" Please give Avni some time. Her heart is broken into several pieces. We will just hurt her more. Let her expel all her grief."
Aman agreed to her and stayed outside while Neela prayed for Avni's well-being.

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Deepu.. I m first... Yeah!!

Heer to badi sad hai.. I mean poor Avni...

But i m damn sure Tillu won't choose his responsibility over love... And this time love is Avni for sure..

This was too short...

Tillu to ab pressure cooker banne wala hai...

Juhi... I hope she's not negative...

But jo bhi ho i know you'll manage everything very well...

Neil ko jaldi se bulao... Meri heer ki shaadi to hui nahi par uska band zaroor baj gaya...

Tillu zindabad... Please mera bharosa mat todna...

Yaar please next part Jaldi update kar do...

Suspense aur excitement top gear mein hai..

Lots of love...

And lots of flying kissiii as a bribe to update soon...

Vihu

Edited by vu1998 - 8 years ago

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shikha

@shikhsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Oh my .Big problem.Neil kissey choose karega.feeling bad for avneil .Really painful

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Finally!! You updated...

Aisa lag rha tha ki update ka wait krte krte kahin budhhe na ho jaye...

And what the!! Juhi zinda h..

Abhi hi aana tha use bhi...

Tillu, kahan chala gya tu?? Zaldi se wapas aa..

Teri wifey tera wait kr rhi h yaar...

Mujhe Tillu pe purna vishwas h wo apni Wifey ko chhod k kahin nai jaega...

Mera Tillu aaega, zaroor aaega...

Deepu, jaldi se Tillu ko wapas laa..

Or please bhagwan k liye jaldi jaldi update kr de..

Update soon...

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Juhi vaapas aagaya 😲

Nainooo it's very interesting!! Tillu ka toh tai tai phis hogaya. Sandwich ka filling ban gaya 😆

On a serious note.. this is very heartwrenching. I can't see my AvNeil getting torn apart, that too by Neil's old love which was always there. Ab kya hoga my god! 😒

I'll give my brain a rest and let you think about it and give us update soon.

Love

Zuu..

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: vu1998
Deepu.. I m first... Yeah!!
Heer to badi sad hai.. I mean poor Avni...
But i m damn sure Tillu won't choose his responsibility over love... And this time love is Avni for sure..
This was too short...
Tillu to ab pressure cooker banne wala hai...
Juhi... I hope she's not negative...
But jo bhi ho i know you'll manage everything very well...
Neil ko jaldi se bulao... Meri heer ki shaadi to hui nahi par uska band zaroor baj gaya...
Tillu zindabad... Please mera bharosa mat todna...
Yaar please next part Jaldi update kar do...
Suspense aur excitement top gear mein hai..
Lots of love...
And lots of flying kissiii as a bribe to update soon...
Vihu

Pati ke jaane ke baad Avni toh sad hogi hi na😆

Lets see what Tillu chooses

I know it was short... I was having an exam yesterday and next one is Math so I am not getting enough time...

Thank you for having trust on me

I will try to update soon

Love you too

And a hug for asking forgiveness if I am not able to update soon🤗